Delicious treat of a chapter! Their musings on "what might have been," cracked me up! Especially the bit about Reneesme. Nice tie in and demo of how they are consistent and different when comp with canon.
The bit in the begining where they were smacking each other around reminded me of Mr. and Mrs. Smith. Delightful!
Jas was just as histerical as Em, and loved the Esme and Carlisle schtick. :D
Loved the sprinklings of vampy lemon cruchies too! *waggles eyebrows*
I am so excited to see where these crazy couples go in the sequel. I'm guessing the Volturi will rear their chalky arses. I think it would be histerical if Izzy and Edward (with occasional Emmy Bear intrusions) had a Mr and Mrs Smith one-up-manship competition during a battle. :D
Was the mention of children here foreshadowing that they will be adopting Izzies' human spiritual twin or something? I could ask all sorts of intrusive questions about where you are taking the next intallment, but I'm trying to restrain myself! lol
Thanks for the mention in the C/N! Very fun and flattering!! I'll have to ask RowanMoon what she corrected ya on the next time we skype! She's such a doll!!! :D
Best wishes for your impending addition to your fam. Times like this makes me (almost) want another one, but then the two I have demonstrate why some species eat their young, and I'm good again. LOL
As always, thank-you so very much for writing and sharing your amazing tale with us!!!
Okay what I can reveal about the sequel...is....nothing!
Just kidding...god I'm just as much as a bitch as Z is, lol! Anyway there won't be much emphasis on Edward more so on Izzy, maybe Fred and Tanya. I plan on bringing Jasper on into a big role in it as well. The Volturi are involved plus the wolf pack...it will also be darker with sprinklings of humour because I'm me and don't do angst!
Aw thanks for not getting up in my biz bout them smacking each other...some people were a bit fruity about Edward smackin Izzy and I'm all like "Its Z she loves it rough". And then you mention Mr and Mrs. and thats exactly how I see em. And I'm sure no one battered an eye over that movie! Pfft ...oh well each to their own I guess.
RowanMoon was so sweet when she corrected me on grammar and some spelling errors and I think there was a minor plot hole...*mummy brain* I was totally for peeps to tell me if something was wrong but I'm sure a lot of reviewers get hashed out from authors when they do this. Me? I'm open and I can take a bashing!....as well as give one *wink*
LOL...I have thought about eating my young...esp when they are being turds! Though my kids are more like the bald eagle. You know two are born and the oldest pushes the smallest out of the nest so it can get all the food. Lol...I just got mental imagry...I come back from the bathroom "Wheres the lil one?" innocent face..."Well she was screwing around.." and then she legs it bahahahahha!
And no my kids don't cuss, lol!
God I can ramble...but then I really don't want to see the mess my kids have made in the lounge soo....
Thanks you so much...I know you pimped me out and you rock!