This story started so great, but it was evident when you wanted to end it...started to get really rushed and fizzle.  This last chapter was a sad way to end what was a great story.  I hope once you have more time, you will give this story a proper ending.

Author's Response:

This was how it was always going to end. I'm sorry if that sounds terrible to you but this was it. I will be doing a sequel so it's not really the end but I understand if you feel that it was rushed or it fizzled. You are entitled to your opinion and I value your honesty...thank you!

As for a previous review...yeah multi tasking is hard! Lol...but writing is like my baby to and if I neglect it for too long it starts to wail at me lol!

 

Thank you again!

J. 

how are they gonna fix this??

I love, I love it.........awesome!!!!!

woah.......go Bella!!!!

WHAT???..........hahaha poor Edward........I can't wait to see how this plays out

woah baby!!!!

I really really enjoyed this story!  I hope to see more of your work in the future!   I loved badass Izzie, and I loved how she and Edward talked about what would have happened if he came back, and were right on with the books.  Very cool touch. 

Author's Response:

Really?!? LOL! Well thank you...I love that I could make people enjoy the books without enjoying the books...did that make any sense at alll!!???

Anyway heaps more fics are in the pipeline so hopefully you won't have to wait that long!

Cheers! 

ha ha winner!

good luck with the summer baby, any luck and this summer wont be as mental as the last one.

one aussie to another this story was awesome.

Author's Response:

YEW!!! Aussies kick ass!!!!! Or should I say Aussie's kick arse...I've been writing in the american format for too long. I'm even starting to say panties instead of knickers!!!! LOL!!!

Cheers!

I'm not sure where to start with this one, lol. I'm sooo freaking happy that you ended with Emmett, especially him getting to use one of his signature DDwtDH lines. This chapter was honestly like the absolute perfect ending for this story. Absolutely perfect. And it is definitely official now that the Z girl and Eddie-boy pwn Bella and Edward! Totally. ;D

I loved getting in all the great Cullen family moments here at the end. I loved Carlisle getting to be a smartass, Esme getting to be angry, Rose being motherish to her husband, Alice getting visually scarred, Jasper getting horny (horny little empath, hehehe), and of course Emmett being.... Emmett!

As this story has been all along, this chapter was hilarious, kick-ass, but yet still kinda touching. I'm so going to miss it now!

Thanks for taking us all on this wonderful adventure with you! Good luck with your little bundle of joy that's on the way!

Author's Response:

You don't know where to start...well thats a first lol! I love ya! Yeah I think perfect justifies it.

I personally think we were not given too much of their personalities in the books....I don't believe Esme was just a mother or Carlisle was a compassionate doctor...they have sides that they don't want to show humans and I think I gave a little of that.

Thank you sooo much for your amazing reviews, for sticking with me like you have and for just being kick ass!

Cheers!

Great story....thanks for sharing.

Author's Response:

No problem...thanks for reading and reviewing!

Cheers!

Awesome... very, very enjoyable.  I liked how Edward called her Bella.  Actually, I was hoping that she would return to being called Bella.  Don't get me wrong, I loved her Izzy persona... but that's all it was - a persona. 

Anyway, I was kind of glad she and Tanya became close.  I loved how you teased about Bella contemplating some female - female sex play with her.  Trust me, it presented a nice picture. 

I was kind of surprised you didn't bring Jacob back in the story - at least to let him know that Bella was alive and well.  In fact, for having such a major part in the beginning... and during Victoria's rampage, I thought for sure you would have tied up those loose ends.  But OVERALL - no complaints!  AWESOME!

Author's Response:

Sadly he won't continue calling her Bella. He just called her that to get a rise out of Emmett! Izzy isn't just a persona it's her everything. She pretty much died when Edward left her in NM and so she sort of did a phoenix move and was reborn.

I agree I like that picture as well.

Jacob will be back for the sequel...there is a large part in it for him and the pack so stay tuned.

Thank you! 

gah so good and ur right it is so damn hot here, my computer is practically dying with the heat and exurtion of just reading this nevermind wat urs would b goin thru with writing it all. Well done, and its finished oh my, hope u start with the sequel soon, but first get that baby happy, ehhehe!

Gem

Author's Response:

LOL...I actually started the sequel last night...I can't stop...hopelessly addicted...actualy just plain hopeless lol!

Today however is the first time its been cool so I'm going to enjoy every god damn second of it!

Will see you soon!

Cheers!