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Reviewer: melissa95 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 5

good chapter : ) bella seems to like it rough lol and oooo tanya! i cant wait for that ! xoxo Melissa

Author's Response:

Oh yea, Bella like it rough. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 5

I like it. But I hate Tanya. Please, no sex with Tanya!!!

Author's Response:

I dislike Tanya as well. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Misbehaving Mom2 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Chapter 5

that was seriously HOT!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for another review!

Reviewer: britknee (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow wow wow

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: annamorphos (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

That was awesome!

You have awesome writing skills and I can easily get visuals.

hee hee hee

awesome!  I'm anxious with anti-ci-pation!


Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm glad what I'm doing works for you. Now don't be a stranger.

Reviewer: Cullenitis (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well, I hope this review helps you get that much closer to 100!

That was a smuteriffic chapter! got my groin twitching hardcore!




Author's Response:

LMAO, thank you. I love the groin twitch.

Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

I'm glad to see Alice being involved. It seems like all the Jasper/Bella/Edward stories tend to leave her out entirely. 

Update soon!

Author's Response:

I agree with you that Alice gets left out. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Charmie (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 5

okay - WOW!  This is amazing...I didn't think I would like it at first but HOT DAMN this is a hot story!


You have captured the characters and the sex scenes are incredible!!!!


Will you be posting more soon?

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'll be writing these next couple of days, so hopefully you'll get an update soon.

Reviewer: MommaMcCoy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

Wow. That was....


And the double bite?

Yea. That was pretty f'n hot. 

Reviewer: cassullivan247 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 5

haha really good
keep em coming

Author's Response:

Thank  you :)

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 5

oh shit..please don't allow tanya any part in this....maybe just enough jealousy to effect Bella and then she and Edward can turn around their relationship and Bella can get off..and then Edward and Bella will be alright....I effin hate TANYA!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

You're smart. I hate Tanya too. Thanks for the feedback.

Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 5

Ugh!! Not Tanya,

Author's Response:

Don't worry, I feel the same way about her.

Reviewer: teacher (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 2

how can he do this?  That must be horrible!  Great and insightful chapter though!

Reviewer: Kaiser (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 07:34 PM · On: Chapter 5

I loves me an aggressive Edward.  That was delicious!  haha!

Author's Response:

Mmmm, me too.

Reviewer: vamppy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 5

wow awsome chapter

Reviewer: ziggy (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

Hot hot hot!! Eagerly awaiting more...

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

Fantastic fic!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Amanda_Cullen (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 5

I cant wait for the next chapter!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: KelseyJane (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:30 PM · On: Chapter 5

Well this review will put you one step closer to your goal. So Tanya's coming into the picture. Hmm, I wonder how that's all gonna work out. To me, it'd be weird having sex in the same room as other people, but hey, if they're that comfortable with each other, why not? Good chapter. Looking forward to the next one

Author's Response:

Thanks for another review. Tanya = choas factor.

Reviewer: leslieljs713 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 5

This story is just all kinds of hot!

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: Dazzled2Xtreme (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 5

Awsome, Whats going to happen with Tanya ??? what a teaser my mind is racing sy

Author's Response:

I am a tease. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: queenj21 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:53 PM · On: Chapter 5

i hate sex with her! she shouldn't even be in this story...ugh angst! please no tanya or else i'll have to stop reading this story and i don't want to do that.

Author's Response:

Do I detect a threat there? Don't worry bb, I don't think I'll make you stop reading the story, at least not because of Tanya. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 5

*fans self*

well hot damn.

that was sexy.

Author's Response:

Lol, thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: msKuhlena (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

another awesome chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: imloki (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2009 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 5

G reat story so far just please no sex wilth TAnya with Edward or Bella ugh to skanky so no please

Author's Response:

Yea, Tanya is pretty much a skank.

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