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Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
I love it! Keep on writing! That was so funny at the last part when they were talking about shopping for a Christmas tree! Porr Jasper. Who gets a designer Christmas tree? That's Alice for you :)
Author's Response: Alice won't let a Christmas tree in her house unless it says Gucci :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
I want more!!!
Author's Response: I've got at least the first ten chapters written, I'm just pacing myself :)
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
this is so well written and well paced. i love it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
LOVE IT!! I love that he was up with her in the morning and that he came to see her at work... I wonder who really initiated it! OH>>> and I love that he is all excited to get a tree with her! Yeah!!
xoxo
jennie
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it :)
Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
Favorite line: “Personally, I think he’s lying. Wouldn’t his last name be Swan?”
Author's Response: Oh, we all love to hate Lauren. :)
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
Yay! Knock Lauren upside the head, Bella!
Author's Response: "No, Emmet, I punched Lauren in the face." :)
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 02:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
LOVE IT! can't wait for more! please hurry!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
Haha! Lauren is Bella's secretary?? Funny!! I can't wait for their christmas tree shopping expedition :)
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Aw, I kind of really love it. And chef Debussy? Hey hey!
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Aw, I kind of really love it. And chef Debussy? Hey hey!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
so far this is a really great story! i can't wait to see how it plays out!!
Reviewer: Little old me (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
This is a fantastic beginning to a story! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 11:08 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
That was really cute!! Can't wait for an update! Great job!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
OOOH! LOVE IT!! Please update again soon!!
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Oh yeah!! I love it! I love that they don't eat milk on their cereal... oh the details! Great chapter!!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
Yummy! I love it! I am already in love with this story!!!! Can't wait to read more!!
xoxo
jennie
Author's Response: Aw, thanks so much, hon! Writing this story sometimes makes me hungry... Must be Chef Swan. :)
Reviewer: colourguardqueen (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
np its really good so far
Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 07:21 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Promising start, I'll definitely check out the next chapter when it is up. It does seem a little crazy that Bella managed to get loaded in just three years in the fiercely competitive restaurant business, though. The fact that they share their mid-night cereal fixation is cute. :)
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Ahh awesome awesome premise and start! Can't wait for more :) I eat my cereal dry too, though I like boring ol cornflakes!
Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
So I'm loving your story! Is Bella still dating someone? Bella and Edward are just so cute. Both of them getting up in the middle of the night to eat cereal. Great beggining! can't wait to find out more!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
This is adorable, I can't wait to see how this unfolds!
Reviewer: blueheronpl (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
This story is awsome! You have real talent, and I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 04:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
Oh la la....I smell more than Bella's kick-ass omelettes in the air. And please don't let Mike be the one that Bella was dating! When will our overexcitable little pixie make her grand entrance? I'm sure she will bring only mischief to Seattle, lol
Author's Response: But of course Alice will make a grand enterance. She's the mayo to this story's sandwich! Even though I normally wouldn't say who Bella was dating, I can assure you; it wasn't Mike. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 04:09 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
aww that was so adorable.
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