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Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Awww, that was very cute.

I love the fun that is putting up the tree and lights. :)

I hope Edward can prove himself to Jasper and be good to Bella. 

Great story, can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Little old me (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 02:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Great couple of chapters.  Looking forward to see the developments in the forbidden relationship.

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

You know, sometimes overprotective older brothers can really be a pain.  This chapter was so sweet.  I just loved Bella and Edward decorating the tree together.

Reviewer: Lorrie Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 01:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Loved this chapter! Haha, yeah real trees have their advantages over fake trees. But then again you don't have to spend money the next year!

 Poor Edward.. I know Jasper is just doing his job as big older brother but he needs to back away. :)

 Update soon! Love it!

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Aww, poor edward...psh, like he's really gonna listen to Jasper

Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Another great chapter.  I do love this story.  I'm sure Jasper will get over it in time.

Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

If I were a betting woman, I'd bet that Edward won't pay Jasper too much mind, especially since Bella is a grown woman with ideas of her own. Thanks for another chapter.

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

how cute! i love jasper as the protctive brother type! and how cute the little touches of the hand and what not!

Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

WHAT!?!?! Jasper can't outlaw Bella, please!  Great chapter. I liked all the little touches going on between Bella and Edward. So he's a ladies man. Nothing wrong with that. Now he just needs to have one woman and that is Bella. Love this story, great job!

Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 10:48 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

love this so much!

I like protective Jas, but poor edward, his ways come back to haunt him! 

Looking forward to the next...

Reviewer: starrybutterfly (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Hee this story is really cute and made me smile =)

Update soon! 

Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

I can't imagine a shopping trip without Alice.  I don't think I would put up with Lauren if I was Bella.  I don't think I could be that concerned with her having a job.

Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:24 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

You are a very talented writter! I can't wait to see where you take this story!

Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying

I signed up here just to review this story...I saw the thread in the forum...

I just finished reading it and all I can say is GREAT! 

 Can't wait for an update!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :)

Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

lol.  Poor Jasper.  He should look on the bright side...Bella and Edward won't run him as ragged as Alice would.

Author's Response: That is very true, but you can see where is fear comes from :)

Reviewer: TwilightForeverFanpire (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

I love it! Keep on writing! That was so funny at the last part when they were talking about shopping for a Christmas tree! Porr Jasper. Who gets a designer Christmas tree? That's Alice for you :)

Author's Response:
Alice won't let a Christmas tree in her house unless it says Gucci :)

Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

I want more!!!

Author's Response: I've got at least the first ten chapters written, I'm just pacing myself :)

Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 07:14 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

this is so well written and well paced. i love it.



Author's Response: Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

LOVE IT!! I love that he was up with her in the morning and that he came to see her at work... I wonder who really initiated it! OH>>> and I love that he is all excited to get a tree with her! Yeah!!

xoxo
jennie

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it :)

Reviewer: limona (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Favorite line: “Personally, I think he’s lying. Wouldn’t his last name be Swan?”

Author's Response: Oh, we all love to hate Lauren. :)

Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Yay!  Knock Lauren upside the head, Bella!

Author's Response: "No, Emmet, I punched Lauren in the face." :)

Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

LOVE IT! can't wait for more! please hurry!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Haha! Lauren is Bella's secretary?? Funny!! I can't wait for their christmas tree shopping expedition :)

Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal

Aw, I kind of really love it.  And chef Debussy?  Hey hey!

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