Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
Yay! Just grab her and kiss her! :) Tanya's coming? I feel a little drama might be starting up...
Reviewer: Lorrie Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
Two updates in one day? Thank You! :D Poor Bella getting sick, but at least Edward was there to help feel better! Such a gentleman! :) Haha, Poor Jasper haing the smell of vomit. I now how he feels, all I have to do is hear a person heaving and I start to gag, even if it doesn' smell. hehe I hope Tanya is a good Tanya in this. And Lauren is just.. EW. Dang I want Bella as a BOSS! hehe she would be so cool! Well update as soon as you can!
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 05:38 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
Ah, red caught in Jasper's teeth, what a vampiric image. I like that Jasper is Bella's brother for once, it seems like in most stories Emmett is.
Reviewer: KayBressi (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Aw that is sad. I understand Jasper being protective because of how Edward was, but people change. And , after all, Jasper is married to his sister like he mentioned.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Awwww!! Edward should let Jasper see how Bella makes him feel, and the picture he keeps in his wallet! That might let Jasper ease up a little bit... :)
Reviewer: katydid2363 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2008 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Poor Edward! Now he's got to show Jasper that he's a changed man! He'll have time to prove it to Bella after Jazz and Alice leave since he's going to stay with Bella while he looks for a place of his own! Great chapter!
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
I feel kind of bad for Edward...but he definitely shouldn't have built up such a reputation either. Especially if he wants to go for Bella. But I think our boy Edward can convince Jazz that he IS a good guy and really cares about Bella. And I have a feeling that a certain someone's arrival will help all that because no one can convince Jasper like Alice can ;)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
AWE!!! LOVE it Poor Edward! I hope they get together soon!!
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Oh no... now he just has to prove that he is a changed man! I can't wait for more... seriously... I was giddy when I saw this update!!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 06:46 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Awww, that was very cute. I love the fun that is putting up the tree and lights. :) I hope Edward can prove himself to Jasper and be good to Bella. Great story, can't wait for more.
Reviewer: Little old me (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 05:26 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Great chapter! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Mart (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Great couple of chapters. Looking forward to see the developments in the forbidden relationship.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
You know, sometimes overprotective older brothers can really be a pain. This chapter was so sweet. I just loved Bella and Edward decorating the tree together.
Reviewer: Lorrie Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 03:14 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Loved this chapter! Haha, yeah real trees have their advantages over fake trees. But then again you don't have to spend money the next year! Poor Edward.. I know Jasper is just doing his job as big older brother but he needs to back away. :) Update soon! Love it!
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 02:36 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Aww, poor edward...psh, like he's really gonna listen to Jasper
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
Another great chapter. I do love this story. I'm sure Jasper will get over it in time.
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
If I were a betting woman, I'd bet that Edward won't pay Jasper too much mind, especially since Bella is a grown woman with ideas of her own. Thanks for another chapter.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
how cute! i love jasper as the protctive brother type! and how cute the little touches of the hand and what not!
Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 12:52 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
WHAT!?!?! Jasper can't outlaw Bella, please! Great chapter. I liked all the little touches going on between Bella and Edward. So he's a ladies man. Nothing wrong with that. Now he just needs to have one woman and that is Bella. Love this story, great job!
Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
love this so much! I like protective Jas, but poor edward, his ways come back to haunt him! Looking forward to the next...
Reviewer: starrybutterfly (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2008 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
Hee this story is really cute and made me smile =) Update soon!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
I can't imagine a shopping trip without Alice. I don't think I would put up with Lauren if I was Bella. I don't think I could be that concerned with her having a job.
Reviewer: EliseT29 (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
You are a very talented writter! I can't wait to see where you take this story!
Reviewer: anuddaone (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
I signed up here just to review this story...I saw the thread in the forum... I just finished reading it and all I can say is GREAT! Can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you like it :)
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 08, 2008 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
lol. Poor Jasper. He should look on the bright side...Bella and Edward won't run him as ragged as Alice would.
Author's Response: That is very true, but you can see where is fear comes from :)
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