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Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 11:33 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
mellow gold :) it's such lovely and sincere writing. keep it up.
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Aww, poor Bella. Alice should smack Edward upside the back of his head. Hard.
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
UGH I just want to bitch slap Tanya. AND EDWARD! He so does not deserve Bella if he doesn't think she's worth fighting for. I can't wait for the hell Alice will unleash on her brother once Tanya leaves!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
uGH UGH UGH UGH! STUPID STUPID STUPID EDWARD! WHAT IN THE HALE IS HE DOING?! OH MAN! UGH I CAN'T HANDLE IT! that was a great chapter, and not I'm officially dying!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
I'm dying just a little with the thought of Tanya coming into the picture. WHat is going to happen wiht her?! Please tell me Edward doesn't go back to his old ways with her.!! AHHHH
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Ok, Tanya's gotta go, but what's with Edward suddenly demoting himself from the human race to putz? Smack that boy with the reality stick, and snatch Tanya bald headed, Bella!!!!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 10:08 AM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile
I thought the last chapter was sweet but oh man this tops that one! Great job!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 5: No More Egg Rolls
UGH VOMIT! How did you make that a sweet moment? Because you did, him holding her hair and turning on the water for her. very sweet. I loved that he touched her face, I was screaming at the computer KISS HER! KISS HER! Can't wait to read the next chapter! Off I go!
Reviewer: darcy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 09:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
My heart's breaking for poor Bella. I don't like Edward the cad!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 09:35 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
OH NOES! Why did Jasper say that?! AHH! Poor edward! I know things have to work out but STILL, AAHHHH!
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
love the late night munchie conversation! Very cute idea.
Reviewer: Bittenev (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
I really like it so far. Edward living with bella for a few weeks has got to be fun. Off to read the next chapter!
Reviewer: MrsMcCoy (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Bile rising.... please update soon before I have nightmares!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 08:17 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Aaaagh! Please, please, please make Edward snap out of this. Please.
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
agh, edward is screwing everything up and it's all jasper's fault! alice will not be happy when she finds out what jasper said.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 07:26 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
That was gut wrenching. I actually screamed no when Edward decided to flirt with Tanya. I want to punch Jasper right now. I actually had a few tears well up in my eyes for Bella.
Reviewer: blueheronpl (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Ugh - Yet another favorite story invaded by stupid Tanya. I really hate her. I really do. I think I caught Bella's flu because I really want to go throw up. Your story rocks and I love it, but Tanya needs to go. Away. Far Away. I really hate her.
Reviewer: blueheronpl (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
OH NO!! Anyone but Tanya - please tell me she's just making a brief, non-Edward seducing appearance!? Please No! Can't we just have Edward and Bella with no Tanya? They were just starting to sort of get together, maybe. Tanya will mess it all up! No Tanya!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:44 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
BAH!! why are men dumb?!! i LOVE your story
Reviewer: Lorrie Lynn (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:42 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
I HATE TANYA! WHY EDWARD? WHY? TANYA IS A SANK! LEAVE HER ALONE. BELLA IS THE ONE FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WELL I HAVE FAITH THAT YOU'LL MAKE THINGS RIGHT!! Update Soon!
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
Such a depressing chapter! And Edward is an idiot. Instead of proving Jasper's point by going after Tanya, he should have ignored her and payed attention to Bella. I am so hating Jasper (he practially broke his sister's heart), and Edward, for being idiots!
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
All right, now we have Tanya screwing thing up? NOOOOO! Where's Rose and Emmett. They need to come and shove Tanya off a building. HA! Great story,btw. :)
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
DAMN YOU TANYA! AND EDWARD! FIGHT FOR HER DAMMIT!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:19 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
AGH!! Bella inviting Tanya for dinner was a big mistake, and Jasper telling Edward to stay away from Bella was another... it's time for Alice to work her pixie magic!
Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2008 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
NO! NO! NO! WTF is up with Edward's 180? First he decides to talk to Alice, then asks Tanya, who was really rude by the way, out right in front of Bella? Is he trying to hurt her? That makes no sense at all! Tanya needs to go.
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