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Reviewer: amblovestoread (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
ummm...What is Edward thinking? She tells him she has feelings and he walks away. Now they both are hurting. What a mess. Poor Edward and Bella will they ever get it right?!?!?! Once again Tanya comes in and messes everything up.
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:07 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
DAMMIT BELLA! JUST LISTEN TO HIM!!! AGH!! good chapters!
Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Ugh. They're both idiots. But I hope that Edward isn't stupid enough to go back to Tanya. He should realize that it would only hurt Bella more and make him look even worse in her eyes, and honestly, Tanya has done enough damage in this story already. Please don't bring her back! Edward needs to go out there and fight for Bella. And Alice needs to slap them both.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
NOOOOOO!!! They have to get together!! Update again soon please!!!
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:51 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Man two chapters of angst. Please tell me it ends next chapter I can't take much more of this. HE NEEDS TO TELL HER! WHY DIDN"T HE TELL HER! This is all his fault because he didn't tell her the night before that it WASN'T for Tanya. It's his fault she thinks he doesn't love her and HE can't deal with this? Bullcrap. Man up Edward.
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Oh My Gawd!! I hope he get's off his butt and goes and get's her!!!
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Maybe if she says it often enough she'll believe it. I hope she and Edward can work this out with the least amount of self-inflicted torture.
Reviewer: dollegirl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Are you KIDDING??? He says....I can't deal with this....and doesn't even CORRECT HER??? Oh my hell..... GAH!
Reviewer: Anna Kate Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
oh they are both far too stupid for their own good. edward just needs to man up and tell her he loves her. on the other hand, i'm really glad you didn't make tanya a complete bitch in this story. its a nice change. update! update! update!
Reviewer: dollegirl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:22 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
ARGH!! Why is she jumping to conclusions again?? And darn Tanya for showing up in that last chapter! ARGH!!!!!!!
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
GRRR. great chapter. but Edward's such a wimp. WHY. CAN'T. HE. JUST. SAY. IT. WASNT. FOR. TANYA. i really don't understand that. can you explain? you have me all worked up here.
Reviewer: Twilight_Momma2three (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
how sad!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
OH MY GOSH!!!! wait what?!?!?! why didn't he just run up and like kiss her or something?!?! REALLY REALLY good chapter!! i need more story! update soon!!!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Noooooooooo!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:37 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
OK, now I'm frustrated. I know Edward is hurt and upset over last night, but he should have talked to Bella. I want to scream.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:33 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
that is soooo depressing! it figures tanya shows up at the same time edward has a romantic dinner planned for BELLA ! AHHH but sooo good!
Reviewer: Melba87 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Aaaaaahhhhhh!
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
OMG! That was complete heart fail.
Reviewer: Ksangi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
Michael Phelps........I would like to spread chocolate pudding all over his chest and lick it off. God Bless America, Whoo!! Dear Bella, #1 Fire Lauren #2 Release the sexual tension monster from it's cage #3 Remind Jazz he's your brother, NOT your father! Sincerely, Constant Reader
Reviewer: Ksangi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 11:05 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
Michael Phelps........I would like to spread chocolate pudding all over his chest and lick it off. God Bless America, Whoo!! Dear Bella, #1 Fire Lauren #2 Release the sexual tension monster from it's cage #3 Remind Jazz he's your brother, NOT your father! Sincerely, Constant Reader
Reviewer: Ksangi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump
I adore that movie. "Ever been on a shrimp boat?" "No, but I've been on a real big boat." *giggle* Love it. I hope Tanya goes away. I cringe everytime she shows up in a story. I feel she overcompensates her sex appeal making herself slutty instead of sultry.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
**SQUEAL** Yay!! He's gonna do it!!
Reviewer: EmeraldLily (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 04:37 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
This story is amazing, really well written and original. I love the way you've portrayed the characters, but I agree with Alice - going out with Tanya?? What was he thinking? Update soon
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2008 02:57 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
Yay Alice! I knew once Edward talked to her he would finally figure things out. And I'm sure once Alice is done with Jasper (doing whatever ;) ) he won't be an issue either!
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