Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
And a good filller it was! :)
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:30 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Very nice. I like the sibling relationship between Bella and Jasper. Plus, the bedroom scene between Edward and Bella was hot!
Reviewer: Lola Schatzi (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
But what did Edward get Bella??? Did I miss that or something? Great chapter!
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present
Awww... how long more will they have to hide from Jasper??
Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Oh I loved the chapter!! Loved getting to know how they were related and the lemon was yummy!!
xoxo
jennie
Reviewer: gallantcorkscrews (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
aww edward has me at "you girls are getting sushi" and i don't even like sushi. so cute.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
i love the whole jasper and his biological vs real dad story...so sweet! i can't wait for the next installment!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
The Christmas gifts were perfect!
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 12:49 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Awww!! He moved into her room!! To cute!! Love it!
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Good chapter :)
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Good chapter :)
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 11:46 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
"I can't say I haven' thought about it" - Don't leave us hanging after that!! Keep writing!
Author's Response: Aah, you noticed... ;)
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2008 01:15 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Dang Jasper has got a temper. Glad to see it all worked out though!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 04:17 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Classic!! Gotta love the over protective brother!! I am glad edward stoop his ground!!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present
LOVE IT!!!! So cute how Bella and Edward were together!!!!
Reviewer: blueheronpl (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2008 01:01 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
I love that you left us with the visual of pouty Edward asking for sushi! I have to say, with much relief now that the Tanya debacle is over, that this story rocks! And you rock too, and you continued to rock through the whole horrific Tanya thing even if my blasting of the said ho, Tanya, led you to think otherwise.
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
I just read all of this. It's really good!!
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
:) Oh, I adored Jasper's reaction. Just perfect. I was half-expecting him to walk into Bella's room that morning before they'd awoken. But then Edward wouldn't have got his Christmas present. ;) I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Reviewer: RedDawn07 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Woah, holy hypocritical overreactions. Wow. Not what I would have expected out of J but good none the less. Can't wait for more. :D
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
I nearly passed out during these 2 chapters!! Yay for Bella/Edward sexiness, but I was so worried during the Jasper/Edward fight...especially when Alice said that she didnt want to have to choose between her family. That nearly killed me. Happiness now please?
Reviewer: RedDawn07 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:56 PM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump
So I jumped the gun a bit. Nice, sweet, adorable Edward is back. Thank goodness. :D
Reviewer: RedDawn07 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
:( That just stinks. Why is Edward being an ass? Not that he's being rude but he's just being an ass. UGH.
Reviewer: RedDawn07 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
I'm really enjoying this story. You write a really sweet Edward. I wish I had him around when I get sick, lol.
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
that was a really sweet but stupid thing Jasper did!! i really really love this story! update soon PLEASE!!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2008 02:56 PM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present
this is like seriously one of my favorite stories!!! love it!!!
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