Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 05:28 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
awwww...too cute, that edward...jake needs to be....dead...hah! Nah...he'll probably show up later again. pft.
Reviewer: Little old me (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 04:07 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Loved it! Is Jake going to come in the story later on, or was that it? Cant' wait for the next chapters!
Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 04:01 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Jacob always has to ruin everything! And I hated Charlie for inviting him! BUt it was a really sweet ending. Hope you update soon!
Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
I wish Jasper would've punched Jacob. He deserved it!
Reviewer: melferd (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
I say that the new years menu should be black-eyed peas, cabbage, and spit-roasted Jacob! Trendy, yet tasty, right? Go Edward!! Now make sure your name is off the girl of the month club, and you are all set!
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 11:54 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
OMG!! LOVED This chapter! Edward is so sweet and Jacob is the biggest jerk around!I cannot believe that Charlie asked him over to dinner. I am so glad Bella stood up to him and that she asked edward to move in with her!! Cnanot wait for the next update!
Reviewer: Imwiththevampiresofcourse (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 11:31 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Loved it! I can't believe Jacob was there! The nerve of Charlie! I'm glad Jasper stood up for her instead of Edward. It jsut felt right. Cant wait for more!
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Aww, this is so very sweet! What a shame that Jasper got to beat up on Edward, but didn't throw a few punches Jake's way. Ah well, maybe later! ;) Please update soon!
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
I love to hate Jake. And your Jake is pretty damn bad. So I love it! And I love their gifts to each other :)
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Awe! Great chapter. Although I really wanted someone to punch Jacob. Maybe Edward will get his chance later. Love the gifts at the end. Very sweet!
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
I love your story.
Reviewer: Jasper4Me (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
I have reviewed before (I think) and if I did then I am not sure if i said it but I love that you dont use a certain POV. It's better and elss...i dont know, i guess intimate, when its from an outside view, when there isnt any deep stuff in there. It's great that it sometimes doesnt even appear to be a POV but just storytelling at its best as you describe each moment in such awe and description that I wish it were me in there.
Reviewer: Jennmc (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 08:13 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
I didn't think Jacob could be more of a jerk in this story until now. That was just horrible everything he did and said. Edward is so sweet.
Reviewer: Debussy_This (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 02:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Poor Bella. Kick his ass Edward!
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 01:40 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
LOVE IT! STUPID JACOB AND CHARLIE.
Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 01:17 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Aaah... I really wanted Jasper to lay it on Jacob... how dare he ruin Christmas for Bella, and how could Charlie invite Jacob?? Maybe Renee will be able to talk some sense into Charlie.
Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Jacob and Charlie are both asses. How could Bella's own father just sit there and allow Jacob to speak to Bella that way? Who does he think is more important; his daughter, or his best friends bastard of a son. I hope someone puts Charlie and Jacob both in their places, and I hope Jacob gets his ass kicked. He deserves worse.
Reviewer: BellaBonnie (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Wow, great chapter! I really hope someone teaches that mutt a lesson! Edward should have punched him sqaure in the mouth!
Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2008 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Well at least this time it wasn't a diamond. I'm glad this chapter was finally approved, the next button has been driving me crazy for hours. And Jacob was seriously expecting her to accept his present after he was such a jackass? What was his present, btw? Going with the same book theme as Edward's present, I'm guessing a carved wolf charm?
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
GO JASPER!!!!! he is AWESOME!!!! although that last time when jacob gave balla the present and the argument ensued it would have been way sweet if Edward was going to punch Jacob but jasper was really nice too! i loved the whole jacob confrontation thing it was a brilliant part of the plot! LOVED this chapter! UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: Jasper4Me (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Ah! Don't I know about that dreaded monster we call "Writer's Block".
I just read all 16 chapters of your story and I must say I am enjoying quite a bit. Your story has had its fair share of ups and downs and the way you use every day drama in it makes it that much more real. The fact of "at first sight" and judging a book by its cover and all that sorta thing just makes it more interesting! Can't wait for more
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 09:46 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
I liked it :) But... What did Edward and Bell get each other??
Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Ahhh. Lovely chapter. Poor Bella, they certainly weren't able to leave by nine. BUt somethings are more important. I love Christmas... especially when it's over 100 outside. :D Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
good chapter!
Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2008 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
ready to see bella and ed;s gifts to each other!
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