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Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 18: Surprise

YEEEES! Jasper & Alice are having a BABY!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?

Christmas dinner made me mad but the quiet Christmas present-exchange between Edward&Bella made me feel aaaaaal better!

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Sweet chapter. I love the description of her coming home covered in flour... been there done that! Can't wait for more!!

xoxo
jennie

Reviewer: CallistoLexx (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:09 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

I wonder what's in the box.  I'm guessing it was sent by Jacob.

This was another excellent chapter.

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning

My favorite was the "Christmas Present" that Bella & Edward shared first thing in bed :D

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

Whew...so glad Edward & Jasper finally came to an agreement.  That was tense!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present

LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT!!!!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

Aaaaaaa. he's got the zipper...mmmmmm!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears

OMG, they just have to discuss their true feelings for each other or I'll go mad!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:06 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

She better be back...that's her apartment after all!  Stupid Tanya ruins everything!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland

YES! I just love that Alice.  She always brings the BEST out of people around her!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump

Love Forrest Gump!  Love Stalker-Edward even more!  Edward could stalk me anytime!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice

And the plot thickens....Tanya needs her butt whooped!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 7: Torino

Lasagna sounds delicous!  Can't wait!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile

Awwwww, Edward is amazing!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 5: No More Egg Rolls

Edward is soooooo sweet!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:12 AM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

There's a danger of pursuing their relationship...very interesting!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Oh, shopping for a Christmas tree with Edward & Bella is such a fun idea!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal

Adoreable!

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:38 AM · On: Chapter 1: Flying

This story is off to a great start!

Reviewer: Pickledishkiller (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

I've a bad feeling that Jacob sent the package. Look... Just don't have her wanting to go after Jacob again. In the books I was relieved that she never seriously considered leaving Edward... at all. And it always bugs me when people portray her that way.... Sorry about that, just getting it out. I've enjoyed your story, mazel tov Alice and Jasper...

So, say, do they inherit the disease of lame names the way that Bella did? Renesmee? Carlie? Jalice? Rosette? Emmelie? Alicee? Belledward? Edella?Wardalie? Emice? Jaspward? Jakeward? Rella? Alibell? Carlee? Esper?

 

Okay, I'll hush now.

 

Reviewer: kaypgirl (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Eh, okay chapter, though it felt rather awkward. And you already mentioned these lines,

" She refused to buy from cheaper companies like Sysco or US Foods. It was part of why people loved her restaurants."

Plus, they didn't fit with the first part of the paragraph when it was talking about cooking equipment, not ingredients. 

Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 07:27 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Why is it that I have a bad feeling what that package is about? Hmmm?

But this was a lovely fluffy chapter! Thank you for that. :)

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 06:33 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Aw! Very sweet! Now, what's in the box?

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Good chapter!  I wonder what's in the box, I really don't want Jacob coming back into her life.

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