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Reviewer: mrscullen17 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:27 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!????????????

Reviewer: katydid2363 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Why does Bella keep comparing Edward to Jacob?  They are as different as night and day!  I hope that he slept in his own room and not in Bella's.  She needs to get her head out of her ass and tell him yes!

Reviewer: starshinedown (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Ouch.

 All-in-all, a discussion they REALLY need to have before a marriage would work. But oh, crap, what an awful way to broach the subject and get to know each other even better.

 

 My heart might've broken a little bit, along with Edward's. *cries*

Reviewer: natlee (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Who would ever turn down Edward?! Stupid Bella! 

Thanks for the update! 

Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:10 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Bella is officially an idiot and you've made me hate her more than I ever thought possible. She's being such a selfish bitch. Edward put himself out there for her and she let her stupid pessimistic ideas get in the way. She deserves a good slap across the face.

Reviewer: GinnyW (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:57 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Edward still has a bit of a temper, doesn't he? Though he's hurt. Bella keeps comparing him to Jacob, this isn't the first time. And that's not fair. She isn't ruined because of one failed relationship.

*sigh*

 

Reviewer: -le jen- (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:50 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

So, I guess I'm a douche fag, cuz i didn't see the other update.

Charlie. Charlie. Charlie. Duke of Douchefaggery. seriously. someone needs to wrap his sack around his neck.

Edward. Gah. Turned down twice. ouch. argh. i hope he went into HIS room not hers.

Let her marinate on what the hale she just did to him.

the angst. yes. love it. my heart literally broke for edward. kneeling for so long his skin was aching. gah. dedication.

i love it. waiting for the next updation.

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

Ungh stupid bitch Bella.  Poor Edward I know he doesn't want to be like Jacob and walk away but he deserves way better than that.  Bella knows that Jacob wasn't willing to work to be with her, she knows Edward is better so why can't she marry him?

Reviewer: jenniesmith (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

oh wow... that was such and emotional roller coaster of a chapter. Come on Bella... this is Edward, not Jacob! You deserve to be happy so DOOOOOOOOOOOO EEEEEEEEEEETTTT!!

xoxo
jennie

Reviewer: Edward Lives (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

:(

Reviewer: doreansmomma (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:31 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

My heart is shattered along with that vase....poor Edward!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

OHHH!!! STUPID BELLA!! She deserves a kick in the nads too!! :( *sigh* Poor Edward...

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:28 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Love it!

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Charlie deserves a kick in the nads... he's so wrapped up with Jacob being right for Bella when he clearly isn't!! ARGH!

Reviewer: iloveedward (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

ouch.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2008 04:10 AM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Lovin' this story!  Please tell us he is going to propose to Bella! 

I really enjoy your Author Notes - I, too, am a Pink Floyd fan!  I had to laugh about being a Twilightedholic - I got to where I was spending half of my time there.  I finally pm'd one of the administrators and asked that they remove me from the forums.  Hell that was a couple weeks ago - I'm still registered - I still spend too much time over there - it's pathetic I have no will power - but I have fun!



Author's Response:

Ha ha, really? Yeah, there's probably something really important I should be doing right now, but I'm on here. It's something about fan fiction...it's like a freaking drug!

And Pink Floyd is amazing. I love them like crazy.

Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

AHHH! CHARLIE SUCKS.

Renee is yay!

I CANT BELIEVE I DIDN'T SEE THIS UPDATE.

IM AN IDIOT.

Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2008 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

wow charlie was harsh

Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

This was Good I want him to Propose.!!!

Reviewer: HopelessRomantic (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Charlie's a douchebag! Jeez, at least Edward was considerate enough to ask his permission, he didn't have to do that. Now I wonder what kind of drama it's going to start when Edward does propose and Charlie goes all ballistic or something.

Reviewer: spc87 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

oh yeah

whats the deal with the whole phone call when jasper was visiting her at work

also the fed-ex package she got

you kinda lost me there

Reviewer: spc87 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

charlie's an idiot!

:)

Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Bah! Charlie! Way to ruin it all. I love that Reene tells Edward to go ahead. Lol, I love that Edward bought Bella the car but I think he really bought it for himself.

Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 04:37 AM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

Oh. My. God. 

 *glares at charlie*

Please update soon...

Reviewer: lovesfool (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2008 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying

Great

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