Reviewer: kristyn926 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission
OMG!
Reviewer: Bre (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 10:02 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
But... but... but... why?! I wanted the happy ending! *lol* What an amazing story, I'm so in love with it right now! You've built their relationship so nicely and I love that Bella is such a success and how her relationship ended with Jacob and how she met Edward and Jasper and Alice are so cute, and I love their relationship with Bella/Edward! Okay, deep breath, lol. I'm adoring everything about this, and I love the angst and the twists and you're writing them so nicely, I can't wait to read some more, please update soon, because I have to know what the aftermath is between B/E, I have to! Edward is so sweet, and rejected twice? By Bella and her father? *gah!* Can't wait for more!!!!
Reviewer: twilighter_since_1901 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
no bella should have said yes!!!!!
Reviewer: jilburfm (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 05:48 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Ouchie. I'm glad that Edward just went to bed. So often, it seems like he completely takes off when things get rough.
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
aww....poor Edward. Why does she have to be so mean to him? Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 04:23 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Oh my heart is aching for Edward, but Bella did have a good point about not knowing each other that well. At least he didn't leave. I feel bad for Bella too.
I am looking forward to more! :) Love your story!
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 03:34 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
Bella is an idiot. If she hasn't realized that Edward is NOT Jacob yet, I don't know if she ever will. Poor Edward. After all that hard work and being crushed by Charlie, now he is crushed by Bella too? I think Alice should make a trip over to Seattle soon....
Reviewer: wannabet1901 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 03:21 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
AGH! BELLA WWWWHHHHYYY!!!!!!!!!!?????????
Reviewer: Marigold (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Aww, no! :(
Reviewer: Twilightx28 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
No why did she do that Oh God update soon
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:14 PM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump
I am up to chapter 8 now and its going great! I can't wait to be at the computer again to read more!!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
I just finished the first chapter and I like it so far! Unfortunately I have to go to class, but I hope to continue reading as soon as possible!
Reviewer: Kelly (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Ahhh, never saw that coming!! Geesh, that was all so romantic and perfect then stupid Jacob had to come into the picture again. Excellent chapter anyway though. I did love Edward throwing the roses at the end. Good dramatic affect. :)
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 09:00 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Oh gooooooosshhhhhh the ANGST! Poor Edward. *pets*
Reviewer: wmlaw (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
WOE!!! :(
Reviewer: Sophiegirl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
OMG! She is so stupid!
Reviewer: fightinsurfgrl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Please please please fix it! noooooo!! It was suppose to be perfect. :(
Reviewer: Jenimafer (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
*silence*........... WHAT THE HELL IS BELLA'S PROBLEM?!? How could u say no to Edward i mean just....how?! Seriously if Edward proposed to me, someone could probably push me over with a feather... then Edward would stop me falling =]
Reviewer: cassandralee (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:00 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
I'm glad he threw the flowers. When he walked away I said to myself, "I hope we throws the flowers!" Stupid Bella. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:50 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Wow! Didn't expect that! Poor Edward. I am glad however that he isn't going to just up and leave her. This is a good story.
Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Ugh!! She's so frustrating! HE'S NOT JACOB!!! WHY CAN'T SHE GET THT THROUGH HER HEAD! I think I'd throw a vase too if I was Edward.
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Oh, Edward, I am so sorry. That sucks! What's wrong with her? Things will get better right? I mean they have to, right?
Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:20 AM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
This chapter had me all warm and fuzzy and now I'm depressed. Please make it work out! I'll be so sad if it doesn't work out!
Reviewer: obsessed92 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
WHAT THE HELL!!!!! ARE YOU KIDDING ME!?!?!?!?! AHHHHHHH! YOU NEED TO UPDATE LIKE SUPER FAST FASTER THAN A SPEEDING BULLET OR WHATEVER ELSE THEY COMPARE SUPERMAN TO....JUST REALLY FAST!
Reviewer: Miriellegrey (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
Oooh, poor Edward. You did a very good job portraying his anxiety, his feelings, and his disappointment (which is much too mild of a word, perhaps "devastation" would be more accurate...?)
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