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Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tears

Hmmmm........

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner

Ok, so I'm glad Tanya isn't that evil :)

I hope they get together soon, this angsty is making me mental!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland

Woohoo!  Good old meddling Alice :) :) :)

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:23 PM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump

very cute chapter.  I'm so glad his date with Tanya was a disaster

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:16 PM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice

Oh how sad :(

Can you please slap Edward upside his head??!!  Grrrr.....

Reviewer: booksickle (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:14 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning

BOOOO Dallas Cowboys!

 

I less than three this story SO much! 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 05:50 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino

I hope Tanya isn't going to be a wedge between Bella and Edward??!!!

I can't wait for Alice to get here!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 05:20 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile

Aww how cute :)

And I'm glad he was a gentleman through it all.

 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:46 PM · On: Chapter 5: No More Egg Rolls

Eewww.  I'm glad edward doesn't think her reaction is because of him ;p

And I'm assuming they arenae going to kiss anytime soon so I guess I just need to ... <clicks next>

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree

Arrrgh!  Hopefully Alice will knock some sense into Jasper, or maybe edward won't pay attention to Jasper?

I am so glad I just discovered this story so I don't have to wait for an update.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl

Who would have thought?  A shopping Bella :)

this is such a great story.  I like how you can feel the sexual flirtation between Bella and Edward, and yet you have kept it light and entertaining.

I like this.  a lot.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:25 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal

I LOVE it!  Self assured Bella and clumsy Edward :)

<next>

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 03:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying

Great beginning, so far I'm liking this.

Can't wait to read more.

<clicks next>

Reviewer: NiKKi the Vampire Princess (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

WHAT THE HELL?????

 I'm glad Bella said Edward's name, otherwise I might just have had to shoot you.

PLEASE tell me she gets back together with him. She'd better. Otherwise I will be SERIOUSLY pissed.

Update soon. VERY soon.

 

Pleeease????????

Reviewer: sweetnsassy (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I'm sorry, but I truly hate this chapter.  I have loved this story from the beginning but the last two chapters have been painful to read.  I can deal with last chapter but this one.... I just can't.  I didn't even feel bad for Bella when Jake pushed her into the wall (although of course that is very wrong).  Gah!  I have to go eat some ice cream now.

Reviewer: vos es meus vita (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I totally want to punch Bella in the face.

It's her fault that Edward chose to leave. He proposed to her! And she refused on account of her past with Jake and her own selfish reasons.

And where does Jake get off just showing up like that?! Seriously, he just bugs the heck out of me. 

Reviewer: rhea12 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 01:54 AM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

excuse me. WHAT. What in the hell just happened.

i need therapy, and fast

but amazing. as always.

bella. why are you so fing dumb?!

Reviewer: cubsfan056 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

oh hell to the no. i don't even know how i feel about this chapter! obviously great writing and all that jazz, but first of all, did he seriously shove her? because if so i kind of want to kick his ass. not that i could because then i'd just look pathetic. oh my gosh and the last line, mon dieu! whats she going to do? what has she done to jacob or edward?! jacob or edward?!?! ohh the suspense is killing me. update as soon as possible before i explode! love your writing!!

Reviewer: alie (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

Gah... I can see why Bella would be needing to feel wanted...but come on.

My first thought was, "Yeah, what have you done? You hag."

I deffinitely get why Edward had to move out. If he didn't then Bella would just be gettting the milk for free so to speak. They were still TOGETHER. 

She knew that. She even thought about how it was cheating on Edward...but she didn't care. How could she do that? She was even willing to continue after she had said Edward's name.

You don't just do that to somebody you love.

I hope Edward had walked in, or at least finds out about it...and then I hope that he doesn't ever forgive her.

Reviewer: espeinaz (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 10:21 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

Wow....just wow! I didn't see that one coming!

Reviewer: dollegirl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

OK BB....HERE'S MY THOUGHTS...I HOPE I'M TRACKING IN THE RIGHT DIRECTION...

FIRST THINGS FIRST....JAKE FUCKING PUSHED HER INTO A WALL....NOT COOL..TAKE IT LIKE A MAN THAT SHE WANTS SOMEONE ELSE...

NOW FOR THE REST....

BELLA IS STILL UPSET ABOUT EDWARD'S PROPOSAL....HE WANTS TO GET MARRIED...SHE DOESN'T....SHE'S STILL NURSING WOUNDS...AND EDWARD IS NEW AT COMMITMENT...THEY NEED SOME SPACE CUZ NEITHER ONE IS WILLING TO BUDGE ON WHAT THE OTHER WANTS....

SHE COMES HOME FROM A VERY LONG WORK DAY...TIRED...EMOTIONAL...VULNERABLE...SHE'S HAD A BIG CHANGE IN HER LIFE....HER GUARD IS DOWN....AND THERE'S HER PAST...SITTING AT HER DOOR....

JAKE SAYS HE'S BEEN WAITING FOR BELLA TO COME TO HIM....BUT THEN ADMITS FAULT FOR LEAVING HER....THEN CONFESSES HIS NEVER ENDING LOVE....

SHE FEELS REJECTION FROM EDWARD...AND ACCEPTANCE FROM JAKE....HERE'S A MAN THAT IS COMING TO HER...WANTING HER...NEEDING HER...WHEN THE OTHER HAS SHUT HER OUT...PUSHED HER AWAY....AT LEAST...IN HER EYES HE HAS....

JAKE IS A LOT LIKE HOW HE IS IN THE BOOKS...HE USES HER WEAKNESS TO HIS ADVANTAGE....DOES WHAT HE CAN TO PLAY HER....I MAY BE WAY OFF...BUT THAT'S HOW I SEE IT....

AGAIN...SHE'S TIRED...VULNERABLE...SHE NEEDS TO BE ACCEPTED AS SHE IS....JAKE WANTS HER...EDWARD WALKED AWAY....WAS IT WISE FOR HER TO ACCEPT HIS COME ON?  HELL NO....

SHE HAD A WEAK MOMENT...CONFLICTING FEELINGS...ALTHOUGH...CALLING HIM EDWARD INDICATES WHERE HER HEART TRULY LIES....

I WONDERED FROM YER TEASER IF IT WAS REALLY GOING TO BE JAKE THAT SHE CALLED EDWARD....YOU SAID TO BE PREPARED FOR ANGST...HEH....

BELLA NEEDS SOME SELF DISCOVERY TIME...SHE NEEDS TO FIGURE OUT WHAT SHE REALLY WANTS...AND BOTH SHE AND EDWARD NEED TO STOP BEING SO DAMN STUBBORN AND WORK THEIR SHIT OUT....SRSLY....

I'M GONNA RIDE THIS ONE OUT...CUZ I KNOW IT'S ALL GONNA WORK IN THE END...BESIDES...I LOVE THIS TOO MUCH TO GIVE UP ON YA....

I THOUGHT IT WAS A WELL DONE CHAPTER...BUT THAT'S JUST ME...I THINK JAKE'S PRESENCE WAS NECESSARY....

SO ALL THIS MAY NOT MAKE SENSE...BUT THAT'S HOW MY MIND GOES....

Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 09:52 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I just found this again. i am so loving this!! i cant wait for the next update and i hope bella listens to her heart i know what i would do LOL

Reviewer: frumpy-v (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 03:56 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

Yeah... what HAS she done?! Jeebus... first she pretty much kicks Edward in the gut after he wants to marry her, and then goes for Jake, moans Edward's name when he's making out with her?? She needs to sort her head out... fast!

Reviewer: LeechLover (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

Um so I'm thinking right now that Bella is a slut.

 

yep.

Reviewer: ECyesplease (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 01:03 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

OH CRAP! What is she thinking?! She has lost her mind completely! You sure tricked us with that teaser on the thread! We all thought she was with Edward in that scene!

I can't wait to see what happens next!

Thanks!

 

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