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Reviewer: BethanyKnight (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

there wasn't really much in this chapter, kinda short.

Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:14 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

ALICE TO THE RESUCE! I"m curious what step two is... please update soon!!! Please!!!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

Great chapter!!  I can't wait to see Alice work her magic!  Please do update soon!

Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

I'm so glad that Alice has finally shown up. It's nice to see someone who is actually thinking things through and using her brain for once! Hopefully she'll make the two idiot love birds start using their brains for once.

 I know my review for last chapter was kind of harsh, and I want to apologize for that. It's was just a very difficult and frustrating chapter to read and I honestly didn't see what purpose it served at the time. But still, it was no excuse for the review that I left, and I do understand the purpose for the last chapter now.

 I would just also like to say that I'd love to see Jacob get his for trying to screw with Bella's head (like sending her the her old engagement ring) and I'd love to see Bella stand up to Charlie about her relationship with Edward, since he so obviously favors Jacob. I still dont' understand what kind of father would want his daughter with a man like Jacob. I'd hate my father for trying to force any man on me, let alone one like Jacob.

Reviewer: BeyondDreams19 (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

Thank goodness for Alice!

Can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Bre (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

Oh, lovely! Alice! Is back! To fix! :P And silly Edward for being so... well, Edward. hahaha I can't wait to see what happens next with them, especially after the crazy Jacob fiasco... :D

Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2008 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

I look forward to your updates. Thanks...great chapter. I love Alice...I hope she can fix things.

Reviewer: sarawthouttheh (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2008 02:22 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love

Aw Edward.  Go fix things.  Sigh.

(Can't wait for more!)

Reviewer: LizzieCullenx (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2008 08:33 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

NO!!!

btw I'm sorry I haven't commeneted before but it is like 1:30 in the morning and i couldn't be asked to write 25 reviews please forgive me.

This story is great I cried when Bella said No. I was like Nooooooo oh well I can't wait for you to continue this it is realy great.

I do think that edward should come back and she should realise that she loves him and etcetc I L-O-V-E-D the Jasper 'ima gonna kill you edward' bit that was truly amazing I love Jasper to hearts and yeah.

Again keep this up it is a great great great, brilliant, spectacular story with and amazing -so far plot.

Thank you

Cullenx.

Reviewer: bbtasha (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 10:42 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

OOOOHHHH love this chapter!!!

Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2008 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I just read this entire story today and I really love it!!  I can't wait to read more!  I can't believe Bella almost slept with Jacob!!  AAAHHHH!!!  Hopefully Edward will move back in with her soon!! 

Reviewer: aliceandjasper_truelove (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2008 03:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying

umm...honestly. i'm a little confused on this last chapter.

i've loved the story this far, but this one seemed too random. like you didn't know what else to put. sorry, just not my favorite chapter. the idea was weird.

sorry =P please continue writing though.

looking forward to another update. =D

always a MAJOR fan,

aliceandjasper_truelove 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath

I'm confused?  You are making this the end?  It's not finished.?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:26 PM · On: Chapter 24: The End

Why are they doing this? It makes no sense!
Arrggh we need Alice and Jasper to come back and sort them out!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused

:( poor poor Edward :(

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 11:03 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission

OOOh I hope he listens to Renee

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell

<whew>  thank god her cell phone fell open

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:48 PM · On: Chapter 20: Fearless

UU OO I'm getting anxious :(

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year

Very cute chapter.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:33 PM · On: Chapter 18: Surprise

Hmmm I am thinking Bella just realised she had unprotected sex with Edward?  Right?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:22 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?

I ddin't like this one so much. I didn't like the way Charlie or Jacob were protrayed and I get the feeling the timeline is off.

But still a great story and won't put me off continuing.

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning

A cute little filler, but I didn't see what Bella gave edward and vice versa?

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper

Ouch!  Poor Edward :(

Male bonding at it's worse.

 

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 09:55 PM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present

Heheheheh I kinda feel sorry for Bella as I think the interogation is about to begin!!

Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow

woop woop! I love you!!!! I liked this chapter. Finally! They are on the same page!

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