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Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 06:57 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Okay, we've had 3 angsty chapters. I'm hoping for some resolution next.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
I was right. You do love the angst, don't you?
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
Ewwwwwww. I'm very excited to see what happens next. Somehow I think that Edward's romantic evening is not going to go as planned.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 05:38 AM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
What's with the smiley face in the Chapter End Notes? I'm not happy one bit..just kidding. I like angst, but I hope it leads to Edward not going out with that skank.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 05:02 AM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile
That has to be one of the sweetest chapters I've read in fanficdom. Very orginial. Nothing bonds people together like being sick:)
Reviewer: keepingupwiththekids (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
That was beautiful! You have a true gift for writing! Please keep it up!
Reviewer: magically (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
this entire story is unbelievably fantastic and I cannot wait to read more when you update. well I'm off to read your "When Harry Met Sally" esqe story, that was actually the point of me being on this site, so thank you for (unknowingly) fulfilling my request.
happy writing!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 5: No More Egg Rolls
Don't you love a man who holds your hair when you throw up? Not the nicest thing in the world, but sweet nonetheless. My husband was a God-send when I was pregnant.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
That's not even right, Jasper. He could at least ask him if he really likes Bella. That's not cool. Ahh forbidden love...isn't it the best kind?
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:34 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
I also hate shopping. Especially this time of year.
Love the story!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Oh. My. God. Im kinda freaking out right now because I have a nasty "late night cerea; eating" habit, although I prefer French Toast Crunch. In fact, it's 12:00 a.m. now and I think I'll go have a bowl of Sugar Crisp. YAY for junk food cereals! I didn't think it was possible to love Edward more, but now that I know you're Edward loves cereal, he's my favorite one!
Reviewer: mickey2501 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
ahh! How sweet
Reviewer: SexxyVampire (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Merry Christmas! I just read your fantastic story and I have to say, you've had me hooked since the first chapter! This story has made me laugh, and cry, and snort. Overall an incredible story! And I love how Chapter 28 is a flashback, it's great! Keep up the fantastic work!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
So far, so good. I like this setup. It's different, but well written. I'll keep reading happily.
Reviewer: earelen (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 06:48 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Thanks for two great chapters...I loved the flashback scene! Please update again soon!
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Thanks for the fluff! It was great!
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
You are a scamp! Judging by the title I thought we were jumping right into an epilogue. I truly loved the fluff ... the story needed it and, well, thank you!
The last few lines brought a tear or twenty. Edward and Bella will never be able to run from the chemistry and fate that bring them together time after time. I am so happy they are about to resolve their issues and move forward together in your story. Um, they are going to work things out right?!
Author's Response: Oh, yeah. It wouldn't be an Edward and Bella story if there wasn't a happy ending. That, and I'm too lazy to write a sequel to this story. Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: hhawkes (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
It was obvious from the beginning that they were meant to be together! How sweet!
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Again. I can't take Alice. And why did Bella say it then? Completely the wrong situation! Why not wait ... say, 12 hours? And she has no right to guilt him into staying. Of course he needs time to think! Five minutes as a minimum!
Love it.
Reviewer: Keela Byrne (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 03:07 PM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love
I never really liked how Alice is so dominant. It pisses me off, actually. Sure, she's always right, in the end, but why don't she let Edward go do his stuff? Maybe he would feel better doing things his own way? He's finally realized he's wrong, now Bella has to realize maybe se should talk to make him talk. About their pasts, I mean.
Ugh.
I really love this, though.
Reviewer: starsandthemoon (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Reunion at last! Yay! Great chapter! Thanks so much for updating. Happy Holidays!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: December 25, 2008 08:04 AM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Great chapter! I am so glad they have reconnected now! PHEW!
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Awesome, get back together sexin! Now, he left to clear his head after her revelation to him about Jacob. He's not going to get hit by a car on his jog or something is he?
Reviewer: stargirl (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 07:23 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
its good
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2008 01:22 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Oh wow....but the cliffie is like Idon't know....evil! Thanx for update!
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