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Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: Cereal
Oh, this was such a cute chapter! You're setting the story up so nicely and I can't wait to see where you go with it. Good job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 1: Flying
So far I'm enjoying the story. I'm so used to 1st person perspective that I'm having a bit of trouble adjusting to the format. It's nothing against you, it just makes me a loser for not reading anything outside of Twilight universe for the last 4 months, lol. Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: Thefloorhatesme (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
uggg!!! Men! Jasper is and idiot for saying that to Edward and Edward is a prick for completely ignoring his feelings for bella. If a girl wrote and instructional manual on themselves all men should buy it.
Reviewer: Thefloorhatesme (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile
Haha, Jasper and bella remind me of my brother and me. Except i'm protective over him. :}
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Great job on the wedding. Can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: jbluvs2sing (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
So sweet!!!
Reviewer: Lizzyliz (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 05:03 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
I'm really enjoying this story. Keep it up. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Talk about cliff hanger... Please update soon...
Reviewer: PhoenixRising (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
This is such a sweet chapter! I hope Edward can get over the Jacob/Bella mistake and work everything out... :)
Reviewer: The Night (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww thats so cute! Lovin it!
Reviewer: katopotato (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 04:32 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
i love this story!! It's driving me insane though, he loves her, she loves him.. wheres the happy ever after.
Reviewer: JingleBells (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 03:23 PM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Well, I'm still upset with her for almost sleeping with Jacob...but at least she was "man" enough to fess up to Edward. I just hope he can cope with that revelation (though in your story he is a bit more mature about all this than she's been...).
Great story -- can't wait for more!
Reviewer: ClairDeLune (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
I must say, I began reading this story this morning and I couldn't look away. It is absolutely one of the best stories written on here. The characters have so much depth to them and I can follow the story so well. It's not rushed and it has the right amount of romance and drama with just a pinch of angst. My compliments to the author.
Smiles,
ClairDeLune
Reviewer: alaskangirl (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
ahhh that was sweet and rosalie needed to be smacked. i love this story and cant wait for the next update.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
that was the sweetest thing ever
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
AGH grr... i still hate bella and jacob with a passion because of that little stunt they pulled but whatever as long as bella feels horribly about it1 (i know i'm a bad person)
great story anyways
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:55 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Awww! The wedding was sooo perfect!!! Too bad she was still with Jake at that time.. :(
Please get back to the present, asap!!! I wanna know what's gonna happen..!
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
Awwww....that was sooo sweet!! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:15 AM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year
I swear, do you know me? Loves in my life include husband/kids, cereal and playing Uno with said kids. You've touched on 2 out of 3 in this story. Your writing is supurb.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 09:10 AM · On: Chapter 18: Surprise
I love pregnant Alice! Glad Jasper is not being an ass about it.
Reviewer: r-pks (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
Okay, let me start of by saying this is really amazing but I can't stand how Edward takes 20 years to say how he feels when in reality it would take like 5 minutes but of course this isn't reality! Anyways really great fic otherwise
Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 28: The Wedding
=D LOVE THIS STORY.
FOR REAL FOR SERIOUS.
I wonder if Edward is going to go beat the hell out of Jacob...although I am surprised that Bella let it get so far. Especially after he told her that she was never worth it. I'm actually surprised that Edward didn't disillusion Charlie. Someone needs to. Jasper should've kicked his ass.
LOVE this story. Please keep updating!
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Nice chapter. Glad Jazz isn't going to stand in their way.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 08:02 AM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present
You pulled a SM with that love scene...hopefully we'll get some more...details...in future chapters. I still love this story.
Reviewer: twogoods (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2008 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow
Finally! Let's get to the next chapter! I'm hoping for some more lovin'!
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