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Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 27: Lucky Man
Oh! Snaps for lemons!(I just watched Legally Blonde 2 onTBS) I am glad they are back together but they still have crap to work through. I hope you tackle that in an excellent way! Great chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:17 AM · On: Chapter 26: Sisterly Love
Still a bit stunned from that last chapter.
Did I mention how much I adore Alice?
I'm a little confused. I thought Edward was moving out but they weren't breaking up? I thought they were going to try to work things out but in order to do that they needed space?
Great chapter! =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 25: Aftermath
Ok, so no offense but I hate you.
Ok, no I don't.
I love this story.
And yet, I'm baffled by the direction it has just taken. What was Bella thinking. I hate Bella (but, of course, I love her dearly). But what was she thinking?
I'm absolutely stunned.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2008 12:02 AM · On: Chapter 24: The End
Oh my God... this is so sad... I have no words but I need some tissues *runs to to bathroom*
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:50 PM · On: Chapter 23: Dazed and Confused
OMG!!!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!?! OMG!!!! I can NOT believe that just happened. Bella has serious issues and poor bloody Edward!! OMG!!!!! *deep breaths, deep breaths* I am freaking out. OMG! (Is that the reaction you were going for?)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 22: Permission
WTF Charlie? There are no words, but I knew it was coming. Charlie's an ass, as are Jacob and James and Tanya and Lauren!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 21: Run Like Hell
Oh! I knew Edward would save her! Of course, after reading Twilight I would be a complete moron if I didn't think he would. Poor Bella, I hope James burns.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 20: Fearless
OMG, something bad is going to happen! I'm freaking out. James is such a creep! He has a key which is just WEIRD. Edward will save her...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 11:11 PM · On: Chapter 19: Happy New Year
Ah, that last bit was so cute. I can't wait to find out what is in that box. Jake is a jerk, what was he calling about? Guess I'll just have to keep reading...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:59 PM · On: Chapter 18: Surprise
Oh, I'm so excited for Alice. And I'm excited that Jasper is excited for Alice. And naturally I REALLY want to know what happened during that phone call. Great chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 17: Merry Christmas?
Ok, so Jake is a huge jerk and I wish Edward and Jasper would have kicked the snot out of him. That was a sweet moment at the end with Bella and Edward exchanging gifts. I hope Edward decides to stay- that would be awesome =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 16: Christmas Morning
Yay for Christmas lemons! Lol, lovely, cute chapter. I can't wait to meet married Charlie and Renee =)
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 15: Jasper
Lol, I love Jasper's reaction and love that Edward didn't take it like a wuss. Awesomeness!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 14: Early Christmas Present
Yay! Fluff is fun! i'm so glad they are finally together, it seriously took long enough. I'm worried about these other twists you have coming but I guess a good story needs tension, right?
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 10:00 PM · On: Chapter 13: Ice and Snow
YAY! Thank you God! You were driving me crazy, lol. I was little sad that Edward didn't explain himself more thouroughly to Bella about the whole Tanya situation and she took him back so quickly but you definitely made up for it with that lovely little balcony scene.
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:40 PM · On: Chapter 12: Tears
WHAT!?!? Are you crazy??? I'm dying here!!!! I need Edward and Bella freaking together and what the hell is Edward waiting for? Why can't he just shout I LOVE YOU and get it over with!!! *Huffs in frustration* I am definitely an impatient women but I'm dying! lol
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:31 PM · On: Chapter 11: Dinner
Oh come on! What was Edward thinking? Just letting her walk away like that? The moron! (I, of course, still love him dearly). I hope they get together soon because I'm aching for some romance. And did I mention I hate Tanya?
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 10: Alice in Wonderland
Oh yay! Happiness for Edward, I hope all goes well. And I guess we figured out where Rosalie fits into the story. Will she be making a cameo? I could literally feel Alice's little squeak when Edward admitted to loving Bella. Yay for awesomeness!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 9: Forrest, Forrest Gump
Lol, nice Forest Gump references. Edward is totally not forgiven for being such an arrogant ass (though, of course, I still love him dearly). He really shouldn't let Jasper have such influence over what he does. He should be a man and talk to Jasper. I'm dying to know if Emmett and Rosalie will play into the story at all. Although, I have no idea where they would fit in. Jasper seems to be channeling a bit of Emmett in this fic and maybe that's why I like him so darn much. I would like him even more if he wasn't standing in Edward and Bella's way. Good chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 8: Go Ask Alice
OMG! What the flip? Edward is such an ass! Ok, I knew the tension had to come from somewhere and I really wanted it but not at poor Bella's expense. What a jerk! I love him dearly anyways, of course, but still...
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 7: Torino
How much do I adore Jasper in this story? Oh yeah, tons. I imagine there may be some tension with Tanya and I'm looking forward to it! Great job!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 08:36 PM · On: Chapter 6: Sleeping on Tile
OH! Edward taking care of Bella was so darn sweet! This was another awesome chapter and he LOVES her! I"m so excited!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 08:22 PM · On: Chapter 5: No More Egg Rolls
Ew... how embarrassing, vomiting in front of someone your interested in. Edward is such a gentleman and so sweet. I love this little midnight ritual they have. Great chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 4: Oh Christmas Tree
So I'm definitely squealing right now. I love Jasper in brother mode and I can't wait to see how Edward will prove that he doens't care for just a fling with her. Awesome chapter!
Reviewer: m81170 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2008 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 3: Working Girl
Another great chapter. I like how you worked lauren in there. I hope you humiliate her more often =)
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