I was trying to right a big fancy review with heartfelt words that would make crystal orbs of tears spill from your cheeks as you read, but i thought i settled for just a sentence:

If i could fall in love with a book this one would be it, if i couldn't fall in love with a book rules be damned.

Enjoyed ur story. :)

sounds like its a great story, cann't wait to get further into it-----.

I felt so sorry for Bella,because of Tanya's flirting and Jaspers warning to Edward to keep a distance, which Bella and probally Alice don't know about. Next she's left all alone with her movie and longing for Edward,who is with Tanya.

wow...poor Bella...how did Edward expect her to act!

where is the epilogue? i loved this story but i feeling i was cut short without it.

yes!!!!!!!!!!

f8ck

very cool so far

"Edward pulled his bag to his side, ignoring the stares from strangers and the smile on Jasper’s face. Jasper’s face was instantly wiped clean when his bag came down the carousal, sporting a pink luggage tag with red hearts on it." LMAO

It was one of the best things i've ever read on the Net. Jesus Christ, i laughed so hard. I loved it.

I'm confused.  You said there was still an epilogue at the beginning of this chapter, but the story says complete.  That and it hasn't been updated since July....?????