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Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 4
Oh, Edward....it's sooo obvious that he is trying to convince himself that he needs to stay with Abby cause he proposed...but it's so not right! Or she's not right...yeah, definetely the second one...lol!
I know it will take time...but I SOOO can't wait for them to see each other again.
Great job!
Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
Marrying Abby would be the biggest mistake of his life. I don't think she loves him at all, and they seem to want very different things out of life. It would be wrong for him (and for her, even though she's a bitch and I don't care how she feels) to marry Abby when he obviously doesn't really love her and is so much in love with someone else.
Can't wait to see what you're going to do. I hope you have Edward make the right decision. Just because he proposed doesn't mean it's right to follow through.
Reviewer: allygator1666 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 4
Good story...can't wait until edward and bella meet up again!
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Chapter 3
Ooh so sad! I can't wait for these two to find each other again! But will it be too late? Will be married to Abby by then???
Looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: wonderingpixie (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 03:41 PM · On: Chapter 3
Fun story, but I'm confused on why if they are telling each other 'I love you' why they also wouldn't say 'oh, and by the way, my real name is...' Why would they still be living the lie? Oh, brooding Edward, how I love thee!!
Reviewer: lulabelljane (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 3
Oooh, I like this!!! I can't wait until they meet again!
Reviewer: ebatcl (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 3
God, I can't wait until the mystery unravels, and I believe Edward and Bella were not the only ones who gave each other fake names. What about Emmett and Rose? And what happened with Alice and Jasper, like have they met yet?
Reviewer: Paige6 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 3
I really like this story so far
my only wish is... Edward, don't get married!!!
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2009 02:48 AM · On: Chapter 3
I hope they see each other again really soon!
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 2
oh god, that is all sorts of bad...but makes for a much interesting story lol!
Reviewer: Yella_loves_Edward (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 3
ahhhhh!!! I wish they would come back together soon! lol =) UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
Reviewer: im your density (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 3
oh my god!!! that is so sad, and perfect at the same time! i really love this story! i hope that they meet soon!!!!!!!!! update quickly!
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 2
WOOOOWWW!!! Scandalous!!! Edward has a baby!!!
Reviewer: lovesECalot (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 2
*gasps* honeymoon? say it ain't so!
can't wait!
Reviewer: Clancy67 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 2
Great story, what an interesting plot. I'm a tiny bit sick to my stomach that Edward isn't going to see Bella until after he's married already though. I look forward to reading more.
Reviewer: RiRi (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 2
ooooh good start! interesting!
Reviewer: twitipat (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:13 PM · On: Chapter 2
No for the love of god. Dont let him get married! Please! I'll do anything..really, I will.
Reviewer: Fallingstar (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 2
Scandalous! Love that catch. I so thought Edward would meet Bella again before his wedding not after.
Reviewer: Sunfeathers (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 2
Wow! I really love this! You totally got me with each of your twists! Great job!
I was so sure they would be meeting (and remembering) before he got married, but she doesn't start till after his honeymoon! Noooo! Talk about a complicated situation ... I am pretty sure Dylan is Edward's son. And I am also pretty sure he doesn't really love Abby - at least, they don't seem very compatible.
Gah, can't wait for your next chapter!
Reviewer: wishfulthinking (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 2
What a tease!! This story sounds like it's gonna be a good'on!
Reviewer: be_my_escape (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 03:16 AM · On: Chapter 1
I really like this story so far. The name thing is confusing but I think I got it.
Can't wait to read more. Edward has to leave Abigail now though.
Author's Response: They gave each other fake names . . . hope that clarifys things
Reviewer: falconcranelove (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2009 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 1
This is a great start! I'm really excited to read more of this.
Keep it coming! :)
~Cat~
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