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Reviewer: angela2805 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Chapter 11

Awww so sad...more more more please!

Reviewer: iluvthecolts (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 11

I am so loving this - please just let them stay together and not have a bunch of breaking up, etc...  Update quick!!!

Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 11

Not the best way to find out he has a son but I am glad everything is on the table now...  i hope Dylan doesn't have menengitis.  Can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Chapter 11

Cool story!

Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 11

Well Sorry your sick but glad we got an update... Oh I thought we were going to Assward when he found out about Dylan

Reviewer: Dr Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 11

amazing chapter! 

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 11

Loved It!

Reviewer: edward08 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 11

it was great

Reviewer: lexiecullen17 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 11

that was a shock....im wondering how edwards going to react now???

Reviewer: hologramGal (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Chapter 11

I just read all chapters up to date!! and I'm loving it!

I hope little Dylan is going to be okay! You've barely scratched the surface of this potentially killer fic!! please update soon!

Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 11

awww poor eds and bells. cool chappie though. *thumbs up*

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 7

all these near misses of bella and edward meeting... you know how to get my heart racing...

the wedding being cancelled cause of the fire ceremony LOL!! awesome :)

Reviewer: keola (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 11

dylan has to be okay!!! make it so!!! Glad edward stepped up to the plate..

Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 2

We just hired the replacement for Abby.  I think you will like her.”

“Great when does she start?”

“Six weeks.  You will meet her after you get back from your honeymoon.”

Edward smiled, turning to go into the locker room to get ready for the start of his day.

 

ACK!!! talk about trying to give us a heartattack :)

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

Great chapter!  If you are going for realism, you should have some other doctor me called in.  Now that Edward and Carlisle know that Dylan is their son/grandson it would be considered a breach of ethics for them to treat him.  It would probably be against hospital policy.  Obviously, it happens for small things all the time, but people aren't considered objective about their own family.  They over or under react.  Besides, Carlisle is the chief of staff.  He can drag the head of pediatrics in on a weekend for a case like this.  Then he and Edward can second guess and worry and generally drive people crazy.



Author's Response:

That's in the next chapter . . .  don't worry, Edward realizes that he is too emotionally involved with this, he just took Bella in so they can sit with the poor baby.

Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:27 PM · On: Chapter 11

Like always thanks for writing, I enjoy your story!  I want to hear it all, Edwards reaction.. his family I love Esme and Carlisle. 

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 08:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh my gosh, she told him!  Edward knows Dylan is his son!  Not exactly the way to reveal it but what do you do in emergency situations?  I'd love to know what went through Edward's mind at that time.  Awww, poor little Dylan.  Please let him be okay.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Chapter 11

OME, meningitis!  I had a friend in high school who got meningitis and it severly altered him.  I sure hope that Dylan can pull through this and be okay in the end.  What a way for Edward to find out he's a dad, he took that pretty well so far I think.

Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 11

I so much LOVE this story. In desperate need of a happy ending, please.

Reviewer: ablissfulday (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 11

Awesome story! Sorry for not reviewing more, but I had to finish before I went to bed!!!

Reviewer: Aille (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh.... what a way to find out your a dad.  Even with as serious as the situation is, I had to giggle with the way she popped that out.

They have a tough time ahead of them & a lot of talking to do.  I am really looking forward to more.

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 11

oh my goodness....  meningitis... not good for a little one..... hopefully it is caught early enough and they are able to get him better and he grows up big and strong and with hopefully little effect!

I can't wait to see what happens next.... especially after the big reveal..

Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 11

Wowza!

Reviewer: adenglem (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

Oh My Gosh! That is so sad. Poor little Dylan! I've had a spinal tap before and those are no fun at all. Pure hell. I can't imagine a one and a half year old going through that! I am glad that Edward found out, but definitely not in those circumstances. He obviously still cares deeply for Bella, and it seems he already cares for Dylan. I just hope everything works out for them and they get their happily every after, and that Dylan is okay! Thanks for the update, can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: VampireInTraining (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2009 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 11

*places large amount of love in huge envelope* done! now give us a chapter baby!! ;)

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