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Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 11:39 AM · On: Chapter 13

love love love this story

Reviewer: allygator1666 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Chapter 13

wow...very powerful and emotional chapter....but totally loved the end part...my heart melted a little!!! :) Love this story lots...update soon!

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

Thank you for updating. I love the way this story is going. I can't wait for your next update.

Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great update- lookibg forward to more

Reviewer: shanaynay (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Chapter 13

Awesome!  Can't wait to read more!!! Update soon please!

Reviewer: edwardsangelluv30 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:28 AM · On: Chapter 13

I love this story, you never know what is going to happen...Update soon please!!!!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:26 AM · On: Chapter 13

Aaawwwww! Damn he is so awesome! I love it. Wish real men where like him! I really love getting into his head.... I love the connection still being there, yet it is still so real, they have a crisis on their hands and their son is taking priotity instead of falling into the soppy sill stuff of fantasies. I love it. I can't wait to read more. This is so seriously on the top of my list right now.

I am also happy that he doesn't feel real guilty about the whole deal with almost getting married, and that he realizes that Abby wasn't quite real. Some women really don't care about feelings, as long as it looks good from the outside....that is the epitomy of shallow honestly.

Thanks!

Reviewer: Twilighter21 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 13

Great Chapter! I can't wait for more!

update soon please!!!

Reviewer: vysed (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 13

Thank you for updating. I'm getting excited for future chaps... as soon as we get Dylan better and can move on with ExB. sigh. Can't wait!

Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Chapter 13

Awesome chapter!

Reviewer: TayMo (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 13

Ahhh! Great chapter, can't wait for them to talk about their feelings etc, but I suppose that will happen after Dylan gets better right?

Reviewer: banana526 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 13

Love it!!! 

Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 03:38 AM · On: Chapter 13

Wow! Amazing chapter.

Reviewer: Venus_Star2_com (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:49 AM · On: Chapter 13

I liked it....it feels like I am feeling his shock and it is a big one so it felt natural to hear his thoughts as you wrote them

 

 

looking forward to the next chapter

 

I wonder if bella will ever find out about abigail??

 

rachie

Reviewer: CT Twilight Fan (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 13

oh i just love your story...cant wait for another update....

 

Reviewer: amom2my3kids (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 02:14 AM · On: Chapter 13

love it..

Reviewer: Forbidden Twilighter (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:29 AM · On: Chapter 13

Loved It!

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 13

shower break-downs... not the fun kind of shower time but I guess it will suffice....

can't wait to see how you have the little guy doing and what happens next!

Reviewer: alicenative (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 13

I love this story!!

Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 13

Beautiful chapter!  What's happening with Dylan is so sad but it's bringing Edward and Bella closer together.  I'm glad that Bella isn't going through this alone.  The shower scene was so heartfelt.  Bella was finally able to express her emotions and let it out and Edward was there to comfort her.  It was such a tender moment.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 13

Damn, that was great!

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 13

Edward is going to be a great dad!  Let's get Dylan better, fast! :) 

Reviewer: TLammy24 (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter - enjoyed being in Edward's head.  Look forward to more.

Reviewer: KBfan (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 13

I really to Dylan to get better so E can get to actually spent some time with  his son...I love your story and would like you to update soon but I don't want you to get sick...

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2009 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 13

That was really good. I felt their pain. I hope everything turns out ok. Can't wait for the next update.

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