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Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
Glad they are kinda comunicating...dying for more!
Reviewer: fletchmartin (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:37 PM · On: Chapter 16
Awwwww, Bella called Edward 'Daddy' to Dylan. That's so sweet! Can't wait for more!!!! Please update soon!
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Chapter 16
YAY!! He fianlly woke up! Dadward is so sweet!
Reviewer: hmogburn (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
Good. I'm glad Charlie let Bella know that she wasn't just dreaming... Edward really did say all those things and sleep in the bed with her.
I hate it how fanfic-Bella always convinces her self that she was just imagining things, everytime something great happens. Its just so frustrating... because then it gets Edward confused when Bella doesn't react to it, so he thinks she didn't like it.
I am so glad Dylan is feeling better though.
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
lol I love it, everyone's awake and seemingly doing better..... but the baby that didn't make it... it makes me so sad... even in a fic....
I'm looking forward to the next chapter and what I'm hoping will be finding out where this all came from....
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 16
Yeah! everyone is ok, for now. I hope Abby doesn't come back and throw a wrench in the mix. I love how Edward was talking to Dylan, and I think Bella heard the whole thing. Any way I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Reviewer: TwilightLoveBedward (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 16
dylan woke up great. cant wait for the update. good luck house hunting.
Reviewer: Neveah09 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 16
love it, im so glad dylan is awake!
Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 16
Again I thank god for my insomnia! Loved iT!
Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 16
Great chapter!!
It was so sweet about Bella calling Edward 'daddy' to Dylan.
I hope they talk soon. They need to work out their insecurities.
Please update soon?
Reviewer: dolphin62598 (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 15
I just found this story and I have to tell you I absolutely love it!! I'm so glad Edward and Bella have been reunited! I'm glad that Bella got sick while she was at the hospital, but I hope she gets better soon! Can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: xchic (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 15
I knew it! bella is sick too. Im not sure if i reviewed that i noticed, but i did
(someone shoots for me to stop bragging)
anyways, i loooove it. i just love angst... its just so...angssty.lol.
Reviewer: sassyf (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 15
Just read your story for the first time today and I LOVE IT!!! What an awesome story line! Can't wait for more!!
Reviewer: cmm52 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 03:38 PM · On: Chapter 15
I can't wait to see how Edward acts toward Dylan. I know it's silly but I'm nervous about Edward finding out where Bella lives. Crazy huh...
Author's Response: Probably because we all know that it isn't going to be a great reaction - thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Lacey0186 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 15
Yikes what does Bella have? Does she have the same thing as Dylan?
Can't wait to see what happens next.
Reviewer: Platinim13 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:51 AM · On: Chapter 15
I'm going to guess that the ratty Let-Let is the carrier of this nasty contagion. This is such a sweet story - I love it :-)
Reviewer: MsLessa (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 15
EEEKK sick mom, sick kid, maybe sick Dad?
Can't wait to see what direction you go in next? How's Charlie going to react to finding out about Edward. He just got to know his grandson.
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 15
Oh no!! Don't let her die. Edward is so sweet!!!
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 15
That was hilarious when Edward left Bella to talk to her uncle. I like angst too. I love a little drama. I can't wait for the next update.
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:18 AM · On: Chapter 15
oh shit. i wondered if bella would get sick too....urgh!!! dylan is waking up but now bella is sick. i think you are trying to give me a heart attack. lol
can't wait for more
Reviewer: Fordgirl (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 15
GREAT SO FAR.. CAN'T WAIT TILL YOU FINISH... HOPING FOR A HAPPY ENDING.... LOVE THE CONFUSION OF IT ALL.... BUT GETTING REALLY ITCHY TO SEE WHAT YOU'VE WRITTEN... HPEFULLY UPDATE WON'T BE TOO FAR AWAY....
Reviewer: JuicyBooteyhh20 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 15
Why does Bella have a rash?? What does it mean? Sorry for not understanding..
Author's Response: A red rash after fever is indicative of a systemic infection like menegitis, which is what she has as well (highly contagious and all) - everything gets explained in the next chapter. thanks for reading.
Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:46 PM · On: Chapter 15
i love dadward!!!
Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:36 PM · On: Chapter 15
hurry up with the fluff!
Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 15
we gotta wait a week for another update.... I'm sad..... but I can't wait for Dylan to wake-up, and I hope that Bella, while sick isn't gonna be in the same position as Dylan and unconcious for an undetermined ammount of time, they caught her stuff early... should be better outcome!
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