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Reviewer: latinabeauty70 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 17

That is so sweet, but I wonder how Edward is going to take it that she and dylan almost died.

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Chapter 17

This borders on Norman Rockwell....so beautiful.

Reviewer: beanbean (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 17

well, I am adoring it... and Bella and Edward need to 'buck-up' and realize that they aren't doing anyone any favors avoiding the issue.... Dylan especially....

and as for your reader count, it could be vacations, and partly the posting/validating.... I know that when a bunch get validated at the same time I've missed a couple of my regular fics that I like, and I have them all favorited.... or I have and other people may want to do more of a 'binge read' on a fic so they wait for a few chapters to be posted, and them to have a free block of time to sit down and get it all read through.... the medical stuff in your fic is/has been a little hard/emotional and the wait between parts for the outcomes can be a little too much of a cliffie to take?

I'm enjoying the story and I hope that your RL calms down and you can start posting more frequently...

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 17

If the talk is next, I can assure you your read count and reviews will rise!  I think all the chapters E&B spent avoiding talking might have made a few readers a bit impatient.  But, that doesn't matter now, cause the talk is finally coming, and I can't wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: lovesbcmc (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 17

Yay! the Talk!! Now we have to get Bella to shut off her brain and do what Dadward says. Period.

Reviewer: littlebit (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:29 PM · On: Chapter 17

I don't know why your counts are down, because I love the story. I think you are doing a great job. :)

 

Can't wait for the next update.

Reviewer: alcg123 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm SO ready for the talk!!  I'm glad they are working things out!

Reviewer: EvenstarEverlasting (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Chapter 17

This chapter was really adorable. I hope Edward and Bella are albe to have that much needed talk soon. It seems like they are always getting interrupted.

When will the bitch Abby be back? I can't wait for her reaction to Bell and Dylan. I want her to see how happy Edward is without her in his life.

Reviewer: banana526 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 17

Can't wait...loved this chapter!!

Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2009 07:45 AM · On: Chapter 16

I don't know if I've said how much I love this story, but it is one of my utmost favorites. I often find myself looking through my updated favorites and reading this one first and foremost and sort of waiting on the edge of my seat for another update. I find that I think about it sometimes as I go through my day as something reminds me of a character or moment.

I absolutely love how Bella and Edward's parents seem so ok with the situation. It may be a bit awkward, but Carlisle and Esme especially see the deep connection they have. Bella has had her time consumed by Dylan yet she still thought of Edward, but all this time Edward knew he was really missing her as well. It is sad, but happy and I love it.

I am just hoping they don't screw it up thinking that staying together after so much as gone wrong would be bad. I love it. They totally need each other and it's beautiful.

Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 16

I'm so glad Dylan is awake!  I hope they find out how everyone is getting menengitis.

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 16

YEAH! I'm so happy Dylan is okay and having Daddy time with Edward is cute! :)

I can't wait for the update since I've been spoiled by having so many chapters to catch up on... :)

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Chapter 15

So Bella feeling sick was actually important! And I like the coming up because I know Dylan will be fine... but Bella better be too!

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 04:50 PM · On: Chapter 14

Uh oh... what was the news Edward got from Carlisle?

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:41 AM · On: Chapter 13

Hmmm... It's probably good that Edward didn't meet James, although when did Bella get a working cell phone? I thought it got shut off and she didn't have the money for it?

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 12

Is Edward going to meet James when he's at Bella's place? That would be interesting...

Reviewer: fonsy (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 06:55 PM · On: Chapter 16

so happy dylan woke up, and that Bella mention Daddy to Dylan.

Reviewer: we live for love (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 04:04 PM · On: Chapter 16

I love this story! I am so glad Dylan is ok. Edward and Bella have great chemistry - I hope they figure their relationship out soon.

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 11

I'm glad Edward knows now. and I love the internal dialogue Edward had about being a father. haha :)

Dylan better be okay!

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:17 PM · On: Chapter 10

He's going to operate on his son! Good thing he doesn't know 'cause I'm pretty sure that isn't allowed... although if he dies it's gonna get real ugly

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Chapter 9

Uhhh... Edward, you could've told Bella you were married first...

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 8

Wahoo! Score! Now we just need Edward to tell Alice the name of his girl... ta-da!

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 03:00 PM · On: Chapter 7

Hahahaha! YES! please don't mess this up Edward!

In other news, he had to have put his real name on the certificate, why didn't Bella notice? I understand that her name may be illegiable, but his isn't if they can track him down...

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:54 PM · On: Chapter 6

Oh My God! AHHHH! They keep being so close!

Reviewer: osu2012 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2009 02:48 PM · On: Chapter 5

Edward got to play with his son! that's adorable and heartbreaking at the same time since he didn't know...

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