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Reviewer: loetken (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:42 PM · On: Chapter 23

About time!

Reviewer: twilightdiheart (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Chapter 23

I'm glad she said yes.  They both tend ot overthink things sometimes.

Reviewer: calemzoe (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 23

So, will the s**t hit the fan when someone brings up Abby, or did I miss that part? Update soon!



Author's Response:

Nope you haven't missed it, I just don't know when I'm going to bring her up or how yet, or how dramatic it will be. 

Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Chapter 23

I don't want Bella to move out....

When is she starting her new job with Edward!?!? Will Edward's Ex-Fiance make an appearance looking for her old job back and make a scene?!?!

 

Reviewer: Bella_Cullen884 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 23

This chapter was excellent!

Everything about it was great! :)

Looking forward to your next chapter!

Reviewer: Belled (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Chapter 23

Wooooo!

Reviewer: kenziemorton (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:48 AM · On: Chapter 23

love it

Reviewer: PLV (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 09:17 AM · On: Chapter 23

Yes it was very good.

I think they will make some head way and I hope they talk some more about their situation.

I also think Bella should have her own place, even if it's for six months. Just so E/B can really get to know each other. Given the chance I believe they can have a futuure together and happy.

 

Update when you can.

=-D

 

Reviewer: nwalto (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 08:47 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh thank goodness they finally got together! Beautiful story!

Reviewer: salem2004 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 23

It's about time. They belong together:)  Loving the story. Update soon please.

Reviewer: RoseArcadia (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Chapter 23

Nice!  BUT, is she gonna freak when she finds out he was suppose to have gotten married to someone else?

Reviewer: allygator1666 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:27 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapter...more please!!! :)

Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 23

Good chapter, good lemon.  :)  Can't wait to see the next update when you have it ready.

Reviewer: Cindy0510 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 23

Be still my beating heart!

Reviewer: agiismsxx (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:46 AM · On: Chapter 23

=] is a picture of my reaction after reading this chapter.

LOVED IT!

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapter, but I don't think they are ready for Dylan to have a little brother or sister yet.



Author's Response:

Oh, no, no brother or sister yet . . . I think my Bella has learned her lesson about safe sex and birth control :-)

Reviewer: love2readE-B (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:18 AM · On: Chapter 23

glad they're back on track! i think the phrase, some things never changem is appropriate here....!

Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2009 05:17 AM · On: Chapter 23

Great chapter! Finally they talked.

Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2009 03:56 AM · On: Chapter 22

Ohhhhh, lemons... lol

 

Thanks for updating! :-)

Reviewer: queenfrizz30 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 10:16 PM · On: Chapter 22

another wonderful chapter, I loved the father son-in-law talk, and I am already in love with Seth's character, I can't wait to see what happens next, especially since it's their first night together, away from the hospital and other forms of adult supervision. Please don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: spicynoodle (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 22

I'm still out here. I was happy to see the update, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. The transition that these two are going through can't be an easy one.

Reviewer: allygator1666 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 22

Great to see this story back!!! Looking forward to reading more...and congrats on getting married!!

Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:28 PM · On: Chapter 22

I loved this!  Congrats on your wedding!

Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 04:26 PM · On: Chapter 13

this was a another great cnapter, brininging them closer together

Reviewer: loveofhenry (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 8

so he has her initials and a very pissed off ex finacee.

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