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Reviewer: booklover09 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:50 PM · On: 6. Longing
I am excited :) hurry and get the next one out LOL
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:39 PM · On: 6. Longing
I so love this story
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:54 PM · On: 6. Longing
Alice is so adorable in this story. Her dreaming about meeting Bella and them being freinds. I really liked the J&A interaction/conversation. Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: hotmama (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:41 PM · On: 6. Longing
Love this APOV. Her little fanatasies about shopping with Bella were hysterically funny!
Reviewer: twilover09 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 10:34 AM · On: 6. Longing
I enjoyed the playful banter between Jasper and Alice, it was cute. I like how you have added more to the story in terms of what the Cullens are experiencing during this time.
One thing I didn't think was right though was when you said Rosalie had gym last period, she didn't actually share that class with Bella. Just a little thing, not a big deal, it just caught my attention.
Good job with the chapter! :o)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 09:02 AM · On: 6. Longing
I LOVE WHAT A GIRLY GIRL ALICE IS! CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Reviewer: tadpaulaaula (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 02:33 AM · On: 6. Longing
hurry ~ hurry ~ hurry!!! lovin' the Alice pov!!!
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 01:21 AM · On: 6. Longing
wow. I have to say this is a great chapter. This certainly supplement the Midnight Sun. Can you please post the next chapter as soon as you can as I am anxious to see Edward's first visit to Bella's room.
Reviewer: Jenney1979 (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2009 12:56 AM · On: 6. Longing
Just started reading, but this seems to be a perfect match between Twilight, Midnight Sun, and originality!! I can't wait to read more!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 08:47 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
Of course we liked it! Alice is such a cheerful narrator. I do love angst, but what a delicious change of pace having her tell the story is! I can't wait to hear her take on Edward trying to stay away from Bella at school.
Hurryupandposttheupdate!
Reviewer: tatie87 (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 05:40 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
I loved reading the Cullen family's struggle over Bella's future, Rosalie was so cold.
Author's Response: Haha, nice one... Rosalie was cold... hehe
Reviewer: edwardlovesbrunettes (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 12:10 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
i absoluteley love this!!! you're actually making alice the way she is....and...just..wow.:))
--edwardlovesbrunettes--
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 11:35 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
great one. This is my favorite chapter in Midnight Sun. It's great to re-read it again through Alice's POV. Please continue.
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:23 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
teenage angst,” lol
Great job
Love Alice
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 08:18 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
love love this chap!
Reviewer: poppylove (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2009 05:32 PM · On: 4. The Crash
I can't wait to read more!! I hope we see more of what happens when Edward and Bella are not around!! :)
Reviewer: Tulip (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2009 03:51 PM · On: 4. The Crash
jeez, i wanna sneek peak...too late though. xD
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 03:44 PM · On: 4. The Crash
You're book is really good! I love Alice! She's my favorite character! Thanks for writing a book from her perspective. =)
Reviewer: Story_Unfolding (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 11:16 PM · On: 4. The Crash
I just stumbled upon this story today and I'm really enjoying it. Please post more soon!
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:31 PM · On: 4. The Crash
OMG. Post, like, now. (Did that sound appropriately adolescent? I could dress it up more, maybe, with some teal nail polish and glitter powder!)
Seriously, though, you rocked this chapter. I want the next one immediately, if not sooner. The Cullen family summit at the dinner/conference table is going to be awesome.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:21 PM · On: 3. Not "Yet"
Alice is so hopeful, I love her version. On to the next....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:12 PM · On: 2. Decisions
The Cullen house is so tense, the one place we wouldn't hear from if Edward or Bella tell the story.
I like your voice for Alice, trying to get things out as they come to her, but who could possibly spit it all out as quickly as decisions change. She sounds so hyper, but not frantic. Just doing what she has to to keep up. It is a good thing she doesn't have to breathe!
THANKS FOR THIS, I'm reading on....
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 06:03 PM · On: 1. First Sight
Alice makes a charming narrator. Why didn't SM use her? I love this concept and I can't wait to see where you go. Sooooo many options, you know?
Onward....
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:56 PM · On: 4. The Crash
I can't wait for the next chapter. I thought that Alice did not have a vision of Edward's falling for Bella until next chapter. But, it makes sense that the fate has been set when Edward saved Bella. It should be obscure at this moment because Edward was not sure yet.
Reviewer: yihyu (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2009 04:32 PM · On: 3. Not "Yet"
great simulation of Alice's thought.
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