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Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 09:26 AM · On: 10. Stepping Forward
hehehehe bedward well thats a new one!!!!!!
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Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:57 AM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
love it!!!!!!
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Reviewer: wtm (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 08:31 AM · On: 2. Decisions
awsomeness!!!!!!
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Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2009 12:01 PM · On: 9. A Visit
Fun peak into Alice's thoughts and life. Would love some fluff moments too. It's always fun to see what they are up to in everyday life.
Reviewer: Essay33 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 11:12 PM · On: 9. A Visit
I just came across your story, and it is delightful. It's refreshing to read through Alice's POV, and you've captured the dynamic between her and the other Cullens, particularly Edward, nicely. Bits like this really make your writing shine:
"If he hadn’t had a soul, then he would be some dark, lifeless thing that cared about nobody and nothing—well, come to think of it, that does sound like him on one of his moody days…"
I'm looking forward to your next chapter!
Reviewer: T Kitty (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 03:48 PM · On: 9. A Visit
Thanks for the update! It's always nice to see it from another perspective! New Moon Movie was good, need to see it again tho :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2009 09:03 AM · On: 9. A Visit
I love this story and loved this chapter!! I always like seeing inside Alice and Jasper's relationship. As always you leave me wanting more. Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Thanks for all of your hard work!!
By the way, I loved New Moon and have seen it 2x and plan on seeing it again soon.
Reviewer: tadpaulaaula (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 07:59 PM · On: 9. A Visit
I love Alice, the little twit! She reminds me of a squirrel with ADHD. . .
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2009 04:17 PM · On: 9. A Visit
It cracks me up that Alice thinks it would be funny to watch Bella sleep.
I really love Alice's complete support for Edward and Bella; if not for her influence, I wonder if they ever would have gotten together.
Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 08:24 PM · On: 9. A Visit
EEEEE!! You updated!! I completely understand what happened that caused the wait--it sound like something I would do on a day-to-day basis. LOL Well, this chapter was amazing as always and I devoured it all too quickly. I need more!
I have seen New Moon twice and it was SPECTACULAR! I loved every little bit of it! Fifteen minutes of New Moon was better than the entire Twilight movie!
Well, thanks for the update. I hope you udpate soon!!
~Twivamp :)
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2009 06:53 PM · On: 9. A Visit
New Moon was beautiful. I'm trying not to be all sour grapes about it, because I didn't get my wish list. (I know, I was shocked Chris Weitz didn't call me! LOL)
Great chapter. I am anxiously awaiting some Alice time with Bella!
Reviewer: barefootedshoelover (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 11:36 AM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
hiya, really lve the story so far. Alice is defintely one of my favourite characters and her pov is definitely worth reading :P
Author's Response: Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 08:15 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
Can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 07:59 PM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time
Wow!! I just love this story and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter!!
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:34 PM · On: 6. Longing
I really enjoyed getting an inside look into Jasper & Alice's relationship!! Thanks!!
Reviewer: Kenyaran (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:05 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
Absolutely love this story! I'm adding it to my favorites! Thank you!
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 05:41 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
This is awesome!! You seem to have captured the essence of Alice.
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:23 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
I really love Alice's POV!
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 07:00 AM · On: 4. The Crash
Love, Love, Love!!!
Reviewer: loquacious (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:41 AM · On: 1. First Sight
This is fun and bubbly and bright! Hilarious!
On the picky side: You spelled "bear" right, as "couldn't bear it". No one does that. Thank you.
But, Jasper and Alice don't have the same last name, so they wouldn't have lockers near one another.
Seriously, though, you're doing a great job with Alice.
Reviewer: anais mark (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:58 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
That was warm and fuzzy- sure, there was a little Edward self-loathing, but this is the most upbeat he gets to be by himself. Alice flirting with Jasper is too yummy! Mmmm, Jasper....
More to the point, great update, Can't wait for the next one!
Maybe some quality time for J/A since the boys are out? ;)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 05:15 PM · On: 3. Not "Yet"
Bravo!! I am so enjoying this story!! Moving on to the next chapter and I can't wait.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:55 PM · On: 2. Decisions
I have always wondered what the Cullens did while Edward was away and to have it from APOV is great. You are doing a wonderful job and I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Reviewer: HPsharpie123 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:07 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
it's wonderful!! I love Alicee :D
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
Reviewer: Kyramy (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:01 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
OMG!! I only found this tonight.. but I absolutely luurve it!! Soo going on my faves!! Twilight from Alice's POV .. It's absolute brilliance!! And the very end with the lemonade cap.. I was soo 'aww'ing!! Chapter 5 did make me fall off my chair!! But don't worry I remember sideeffectsfromthis chaptermayincludefaintingexcessiveyperventilationandheartstopping
buttwilighted.netormemissbellacannotbeheldresponsibleforanycasualties
causedbyfallingoffchairs. XD
I can't wait for more.. this is definitely one of my favourite Twilight Fanfictions!! It's so.. original.. unique.. different.. I haven't seen another story quite like it and in the world of Twilight Fanfiction that's kinda hard.
I really think that it's really cool that you picked Alice's POV.. she's one of my favourite characters and she doesn't get much good face time in FF's 'cos everyone just kinda portrays her as the annoying little pixie who doesn't have anything good to say :(
Love it.. Love you..
Love Kyra xx :D
Author's Response:
Hi, sorry it took so long to get chapter 9 up, but I just updated-- check it out! :)
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