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Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 02:10 PM · On: 18. Betrayal
Ok, technically, there are no cliffhangers because we've all read the story before, just from Bella's POV, so... And, on more thing... Mariachi band???
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 02:01 PM · On: 17. A Phone Call
I'm not quite sure I want to know... but what can Alice do with a taser and party hats? And how dangerous are her intentions...?
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 01:50 PM · On: 16. Visions and Memories
Ironic that Alice should put you in a straightjacket... Could you ask her where she got it for me, please?
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 01:25 PM · On: 15. Goodbyes
I teared up, I honestly did. And BTdubs, that SO did not fill my Jalice need.
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 01:11 PM · On: 14. The Hunt
Screw you, Angstward. I'm gonna have a sleepover with your girlfriend! LOL yeah! Go, Alice! you kick his pathetic little- *mom comes in* nevermind...
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2012 12:49 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
OH MY GOSH!!!! YOU GET TO MEET PETER FACINELLI?!?!?! SO JEALOUS
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:57 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
That was totally unfair, what Alice did! But it was totally ingenious... JALICE!
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 06:24 PM · On: 10. Stepping Forward
Ha! Yeah, think about it, Rose! Rosalie 0, Alice 1! Whoo!
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 05:46 PM · On: 8. A Lullaby, I Suppose
I love this! You rock, my friend! Jalice forever!
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 04:02 PM · On: 4. The Crash
Again with the "yet"s! And I'm suprised Jasper didn't attack Rosalie when she got all up in Alice's face...
Reviewer: RedPenWriter (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2012 05:58 AM · On: 2. Decisions
"...Bertha or something..." that is so something Rosalie would say!
Reviewer: Chnctgislnd07 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2012 12:18 PM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
Great story, had some nice laugh out loud moments.
Reviewer: Whispers in the Night (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2011 03:55 PM · On: 5. The Truth Comes Out
BEST CHAPTER EVER!!!! Love this!
Reviewer: eyes of topaz (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2011 10:29 AM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
I just wanted to say how much I loved this story. I saw the update for Alice's New Moon and knew I had to read this one first and started it yesterday afternoon and just finished now.!
You captured Alice so well....all the characters, actually - but I loved hearing the story from her point of view and can't wait to start her version of New Moon. Thanks for a fabulous read!!!!
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 08:57 PM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time
I'm really having alot of fun reading the story through Alice's eyes. I absolutely adored this chapter in Midnight sun. I totally can picture Alice bouncing up and down in her seat barraging Edward with thoughts and questions. I am enjoying your story so much! So refreshing to go back to where it all began...
Reviewer: chyla1 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2011 03:51 PM · On: 1. First Sight
What a unique take on our favorite story! Can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: anapcruz9 (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 10:16 PM · On: 1. First Sight
Very good history. I like so much!
Reviewer: Squirt (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2010 05:40 AM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
This was a fun and refreshing read, a little window into the world of our bouncy, frenetic Alice.
Reviewer: jmszas1979 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2010 09:53 PM · On: 10. Stepping Forward
that was cute and it was really funny!!!! :) peace!
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 09:30 PM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
so very awesome from start 2 finish :)
Reviewer: Shiftyless (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 07:48 PM · On: 4. The Crash
:)
Reviewer: Shazarabbit (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2010 04:34 AM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
Much like the book itself, this just flew by. Such a fabulous piece, well written. The structure everything! I'm really looking forward to New Moon, but more so, I'm really interested to see (if you go that far) Alice when she is planning the wedding! Thanks for a great read. xoxo
Reviewer: DarkenNightLife (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2010 09:55 PM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
yes to alice's new moon
Reviewer: DarkenNightLife (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2010 09:27 PM · On: 19. Showdown
YES U DID.
Reviewer: Birgit_L_ (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2010 09:03 AM · On: 22. Epilogue - A Corner of Forever
I loved your story!!!!
Please make a Alice´s New Moon!
Author's Response: hey there,
guess what? i already made it! :) go check it out under my stories :) its a work in progress hehe!
hope to hear more from you soon!
xoxo
natalie
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