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Reviewer: beck943 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 06:42 PM · On: 2. Decisions
Hi, I really like this take in Alice's POV!
Just watch for little canon details, that's all. Alice and Jasper have different last names so no next door lockers :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2010 06:31 PM · On: 14. The Hunt
I'm intrigued by Alice's "Ah memories" thought. When you finish this story, would you consider doing a pre twilight story of the Cullen's evading the FBI?
Reviewer: nautical (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2010 06:21 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Great chapter. I've always wondered why Jasper just didn't try to make them disinterested in Bella when they arrived.
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 04:08 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Loved it!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Hope you had a great time at the convention!!
Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:56 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Hahaha Emmett :D
Love your version of the Cullens playing ball!
Reviewer: ludo (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 10:46 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Such an exciting chapter! You write the Cullen family banter so well too btw.
Reviewer: rosaliehale (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 08:16 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
I love the innuendos! Hilarious! Can't wait for more.
Have fun at your twilight convention this weekend =)
Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 08:12 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
Aaah! A cliffhanger!!! Well, you lucky ducky! I got PFach's autograph as well, but didn't get pictures and all that jazz. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Twivamp :)
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2010 06:37 PM · On: 13. The Baseball Game
I enjoyed Alice's POV on the game
Reviewer: ontheroad (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2010 01:24 AM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
Adorkable, lol. Alice is a crack up.
Reviewer: melaniemarks (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:57 AM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
I love this! Cannot wait for more!
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2010 10:01 AM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
I thought that you did an excellent job and I loved this chapter!! I loved how Jasper tried to contain Alice when Bella came to visit and I also loved the alone time with Jasper and Alice (I can never get enought of that!).
Thanks for all of your hard work and for keeping with this story.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Reviewer: hc4metal (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 08:13 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
good job as always
Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 06:20 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
THANX FOR THE UPDATE
Reviewer: ermireallydontcare (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 02:49 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
I liked it - it was very Alice-y in my personal opinion :)
Loving her and Jasper's distraction techniques ;)
Reviewer: Twivamp (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2010 12:43 PM · On: 12. Meeting Bella
That was very Alice-y and I enjoyed all of it! In fact, I think I'm going to reread this chapter again! Great job! I loved it and can't wait until next time!
~Twivamp :)
Reviewer: archy (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 07:46 AM · On: 11. Observing
i like this--alice in bella's room,aww!going on to next chapter.
Reviewer: seadragon (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2010 01:44 AM · On: 11. Observing
i think you should do the whole book. alice wasn't there for everything so it wouldn't be too long. the bit where edward is gushing about bella to alice is utterly adotable.
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 06:55 PM · On: 11. Observing
Its great I hope you continue!!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 03:44 PM · On: 7. It's Only a Matter of Time
I know the feeling of your Italy adventure I was in Vancover as they were shooting but I was on business and couldnt take the time away to go stalking lol. great chapter even though I know what happens Im still excited!!
Reviewer: lilmissb (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2010 01:30 PM · On: 1. First Sight
It would be intresting to put a few more visions in this one! But great writting
Reviewer: Niphai (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2010 06:44 AM · On: 11. Observing
Yaaay, a new chapter <3 I'm in love with your story.. honestly xD
And don't worry about Midnight Sun stopping at a certain point, you should just write whatever you think will happen next with Alice!
And I would love to read the whole book from Alice' POV, if you're up for it.. xD
Reviewer: hush (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 05:55 PM · On: 11. Observing
lovely..........plz write soon
Reviewer: chel-cee (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2010 12:32 PM · On: 11. Observing
I really enjoyed alice's POV!!! please do moree :)
Reviewer: fgeragosian (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2010 03:55 PM · On: 11. Observing
I really liked what you did with this chapter and I loved that Edward let Alice watch Bella sleep too. I also like that it was just Edward and Alice, it was nice to see how they interact without the rest of the family. I think that you would do a great job with doing the entire book, and I would love to read it. Either way, I am definitely looking forward to more of this story.
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