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Reviewer: snoopy1970 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 11:55 AM · On: Goodbyes
wow that will teach him to not take "no" as an answer. Can't wait to read what happens next
Great job
Reviewer: starryeyed68 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:01 AM · On: Goodbyes
woo-hoo! love bad-ass bella!
i love the story! my only issue with it is that bella and edward are being a little too dense here! i mean, they are kissing, sleeping together... even considering their pasts, it's really a bit too hard to believe that they haven't figured it out!
alas, that will be remedied soon, right?
keep the chapters coming!
Reviewer: sdnez (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 10:00 AM · On: Goodbyes
yey bella the ball crusher! LOL....
Reviewer: toronto27 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Goodbyes
Bella is growing her own set of balls!! Nice. Now can she do that without running away.
Reviewer: Rayday (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 09:13 AM · On: Goodbyes
I'm glad Bella reacted...was that guy just overly drunk, or did he mean Bella harm? I'm assuming the picture Jasper took is being sent to Edward.
Great chapter. I hope you have a chance to update again soon.
Reviewer: sarahlynn81 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 09:01 AM · On: Goodbyes
WAY TO GO BELLA!! Never take shit from anyone!! He deserved that! she said No!
Reviewer: latuacantante98 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 06:02 AM · On: Goodbyes
WRITE MORE PLEASE!
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 05:56 AM · On: Goodbyes
hmm Edward's wake-up call is something I think I'd like to see Bella get a chance at returning one day, a bucket of ice maybe? lol
As for what's happening in the club, I'm hoping Alice & Rose were paying attention.
Reviewer: Salanna (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 03:03 AM · On: Goodbyes
Way to go Bella! She's finally grown a pair, every girl needs to be able to defend herself against scumbags if necessary. The bouncer needs to sharpen up btw, such pricks shouldn't even be let into classy clubs.
Reviewer: twilightsweetie (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 02:05 AM · On: Goodbyes
Thanks for the little shout out! I have a couple more slang words for ya if your interested lol - absobloodylootly means absolutely. I use that one a lot!
All over the gaff means unorganized, ass-over-tit means very drunk. I'm always saying shut your cakehole which is basically shut your mouth and doddle means easy, like 'that was a doddle'. Cop a feel is also a good one which is basically feel someone up lol.
Hope I helped! xxx
Reviewer: moonless_knight (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 01:45 AM · On: Goodbyes
Miss me? Well I have not reviewed in awhile this is because of my account on Twilighted, anyways you don't want to hear about that. OH MY FuCKING GOODNESS YOU ARE A AMAZING!!! Just thought you should know and thank you for the shoutout a few chapters back, I love you.
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Love,
moonless_knight
Reviewer: RedRedRed (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2010 01:14 AM · On: Goodbyes
Hey great chap yey i am soooo proud of bella !!!!!
Reviewer: Azlady (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 09:12 PM · On: Goodbyes
please update soon
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Goodbyes
bwhahahah goooo bella that was an awesome way to protect yourself! cant wait to see what happens in the chapters to come and ic ant wait for the reunion!
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:38 PM · On: To Europe
awww he will be gone for 10 weeks
tahts intense... .oh man i cant believe that tanya thought that she was going to get back together with edward what a silly girl!
Reviewer: tkeaton1 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Goodbyes
please tell me jasper sent the picture to edward! ;)
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:34 PM · On: Fluff and Stuff
Woaa say what When is Edward going to Europe :O
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:31 PM · On: New Beginnings
i liked them being all playfull and watching csi was always awesome :D
Reviewer: aussietrueblue (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:26 PM · On: Goodbyes
What a classic...
Loved it.
I was really missing this fic....
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:23 PM · On: Confrontations
ohhh man poor edward he has work cut out for him
wonder how he is going to proove it to her!
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:17 PM · On: Christmas
woooo what a chapter! that was hot heheheh
awesome chapter :D
i hope they admit that they love one another soon!
Reviewer: Edwardlover817 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 08:05 PM · On: Goodbyes
Great chapter. I actually just read the whole author's note. I don't skip ahead.
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:58 PM · On: Lives Altered
ohhh my jasper asked her to marry him wooo what a chapter! that was brilliant :D
Reviewer: gitgit (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:50 PM · On: Truths Revealed
ohhh man that stufff was intense
oh man poor bella and yaay rose and emmett have gotten there butts in gear!
Reviewer: viking (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2010 07:33 PM · On: Goodbyes
Great chapter!
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