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Reviewer: first lady (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 05:15 PM · On: The Cullens
I LOVED THE FIRST VERSION OF THIS STORY.
I CAN'T WAIT TO RE-READ THE NEW VERSION.
I TOLD YOU BEFORE YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2009 12:46 PM · On: The Cullens
Great redux first chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
Reviewer: MeiraV (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2009 12:35 PM · On: The Cullens
I'm sucked in! The earlier chapters were really touching to me -- the Cullens interact like no other siblings I've known, but I found myself wanting to believe, and wanting it for Bella.
That said, sometimes I've felt like it needs to be fleshed out a little more, like things are happening a little too quickly with minimal explanation. And I was very shocked at the number of times (in between declarations of love and consumation) that Bella would seem nervous and Edward would blow her off with a "Trust me". In my mind, it seems like Edward would very much want to know every thought in her head before he arrives at "Trust me".
But I'm still looking forward to reading the rest!
Reviewer: christine30974 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2008 01:25 PM · On: The Cullens
Looks great so far. Wonderful first chapter. I can't wait to keep reading to see how this will all go. Keep up the great work!
Reviewer: iitszNaeBaybee (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2008 11:49 AM · On: The Cullens
Aww that was so kind of them !
Cant wait to see how it plays out .
Reviewer: Dannymonee (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 01:48 PM · On: The Cullens
I LOVED EVERY MINUTE OF IT!!! I was in tears in some parts and laughing my ass in some. I loved how you took all the characters from the book itself and changed them completely. AWESOME!! but there was a few mispelled words, but other than that AWESOME!!!
Reviewer: justonekiss (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2008 09:17 PM · On: The Cullens
OMG! Love it love it love it. I hope Bella will finally get her happy ending. Please update soon!!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2008 12:19 AM · On: The Cullens
Already I feel bad for Bella :( I hope things work out. A great start to an interesting story I'm sure. I like it so far!
Reviewer: vjrick (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 01:39 AM · On: The Cullens
I love your story, i just started reading it today (and finished it too) i hope that you keep writing! i want to know what happens!
Reviewer: Love_Dynasty (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 10:49 AM · On: The Cullens
is this story finished??? please udate soon!
Reviewer: sek (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 05:49 PM · On: The Cullens
I'm new to this community and yours is the first story I'm reading. I'm absolutely addicted to this and find it very well written with plenty of plot development to keep me wanting more. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: I feel honored that you picked mine to read first. Thank you. Welcome to the community! You've got a lot of chapters to look forward to.
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2008 01:11 PM · On: The Cullens
james? wth does he want!! LOL thanks for the update can't wait to read more
Reviewer: lucky_chica85 (Signed) · Date: October 19, 2008 04:11 PM · On: The Cullens
Hurray!!! I'm excited!!! I really do love this story!!! Update soon please!
Reviewer: drummermom (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2008 05:57 PM · On: The Cullens
I love this story!
Reviewer: OliviaJane (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2008 08:46 AM · On: The Cullens
Poor Bella. I'm sure Alice will be the perfect remedy perk her up and make her happy, as well as the rest of the Cullens. :)
Reviewer: prepster2008 (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2008 01:15 AM · On: The Cullens
I really like your story. I like the change in Bella's character. I was wondering if a Paralegal degree can be offered prior to having a B.A./B.S. I was under the impression it was a certificate and usually certificates (such as teaching etc) follow from a four year degree. I just graduated from a University of California campus and I know we don't offer it as a undergraduate degree. I know Bella is 22 so I imagine she should be completing her studies soon, plus she was in the British educational system and their equivilant to high school would be sixth form and would have completed that when she was 18. Did she attend a British university? Because she was reunited once and for all with the Cullen's around 21, right?
Author's Response: I have a Paralegal degree. It's offered via community college. You can get it before a BA/BS because you can get an AS as a Paralegal, which is what I have. My community college offered the courses at night for those working and is a two year degree. You can also get a Certificate of Achievment as a Paralegal, again offered through the community college. I don't think four year colleges offer it because it's the last promotion you can get in a law firm short of being a lawyer. I don't know the schooling in England, I live in CA. So, I just based it on what I know of California. But, since her degree is changing, it doesn't really matter right now. If I have her continue, she'll become a lawyer. And yes, she's almost 22.
Reviewer: scandalous73 (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2008 01:11 PM · On: The Cullens
Loved these chapters. I'm glad that all the guys take the time to show their girls how much they love and appreciate them. And a few lemons never hurt anyone ;) But most of all I'm glad that Bella is getting help and that she sees that this is going to be good for her. I felt sad that she feels like her family sometimes thinks of her as "background furniture" too, because I've never seen that. But I also want to see what she writes in her journal...
Reviewer: emily2006renee (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2008 11:31 PM · On: The Cullens
Farewell! OK so most of you who read Mystic's reveiws know me- I am her biggest fan :). You don't know this sad truth, though. I'm only 13, and my mom asked to read this story, because, as you know, Mystic's biggest fan (ME!), reads her stories constantly! Well, she read it...and hated it >:( She said that I was way to young to read all of this stuff and blocked the website on the new parental controlls she downloaded that afternoon. This all happened about a month ago, and I just got allowed on for about five minutes to say my last goodbyes. So farewell to everyone, please keep on giving Mystic here some awesome reveiws, and don't forget that she really has earned some virtual jello! Awesome stories, Mystic! Farewell, Everyone! Emily Brooke R... aka Mystic's biggest fan
Author's Response: Farewell Emily!!! I'm going to miss you!! Really!
Reviewer: rawrxitsxme (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2008 09:57 AM · On: The Cullens
I like it. Not as much as Attitude but still alot. keep it up!
Reviewer: leenybella (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2008 04:13 PM · On: The Cullens
ahhh!!!!!! no!!!! dont stop updateing!!!!!! i love this story with a burning passion :) pweeese continue???? btw i hope u name the baby nessie :)
Author's Response: I will be updating in a couple of days. And sorry, I would never name a child Nessie. I really don't like that name.
Reviewer: thinning_ice (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2008 09:13 PM · On: The Cullens
awww very nice....different...i like the idea.
Reviewer: michelle62092 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2008 09:44 PM · On: The Cullens
I just check Rosalica 's FanFiction profile, and she has no stories up :) so Wishing Star is no longer on her profile :) - I hate when people copy others' stories, and I love yours :)
Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2008 06:59 PM · On: The Cullens
Love this story - see that someone has claimed it as thier own on Fanfiction.net. That's so wrong ..... reported the craphead. Hope it is taken care of soon. I am really sorry this had to happen to you.
Author's Response: Thank you for your support!
Reviewer: TopazOynx (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 12:50 AM · On: The Cullens
I really enjoy this entire story and I cant wait to read the next chapter. Hope the wait isn't to long... hehe!
Reviewer: emily2006renee (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2008 12:19 AM · On: The Cullens
OK sorry for the constant reveiws. I've been off for a long time. I just saw that you have another story started. Yay! (I'm squealing SO loud riht now!) A word of advice: Don't let the second story slow down Wishing Star's updating, or I will form an angry mob to come to your house with pitchforks and torches. Ok (don't worry, I still love you!) Emily
Author's Response: I HAVE TWO CHAPTERS THAT ARE UP FOR POSTING! GO YELL AT MY BETA!
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