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Reviewer: edwards emo bella (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Wishing
wow * cries* when r u gonna update... soon? today?!?!?!?!?! tommorow?!?!?!!? KNOW?!?!?!?!!? lol IDK CARE BUT DO IT SOON
wow English ( Look up "wow" in Wikipedia )
Interjection
- An indication of excitement or surprise. Wow! I never expected this!
- An expression of amazement or awe. Wow! How do they do that?
Noun
- An exceptionally surprising or unbelievable fact. He did? That's a wow!
Verb
- To amaze or awe. He really wowed the audience.
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Wishing
I love this chapter. I like getting into the heads of everyone. And I absolutely love how you portray Emmett. oatmeal... haha!
And Jasper and Alice. I like how you don't have them together already. It fits with the story, and isn't the route most use.
Keep up the AMAZING writing! :D
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Wishing
She has to want to go back!!!
I love that Carlisle sees the fated, developing relationships and that Edward sees it too!
Reviewer: Kittyinaz (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 09:09 AM · On: Wishing
yes yes yes yes yes woo hoo.. she will go back. Otherwise there is no story.. WOO HOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THANKS!!!!! I was waiting on the update.
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:55 AM · On: Wishing
I feel so bad for Bella!! I think, if i were her, i'd be upset that they left her for so long ... but I hope she forgives them and takes them back!
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:36 AM · On: Wishing
OF COURSE SHE WANTS TO GO BACK WITH THEM!!!!! Make is so!! lol
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:35 AM · On: Wishing
Thanks so much for the quick update. Now I feel better, I knew they wanted her. Of course she wants them, it's what she's been wishing for. :0) Her connection to Edward is so sweet. I can't wait to read more about her with the family. :0)
Reviewer: Gaia (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Wishing
That's a good explanation for where they were and what happpened. I hope that Bella will go with them. Looking forward to seeing how tis developss from here.
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Wishing
OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!! YAY *happy dance* Im frickin bouncing off the walls that I Got A shout Out!!! JUST ME!!! *cry* ...It's beyond AMAZING to see my Name up there!!! hahaha....I was Literally in shock..mouth wide open and eyes bugging outta my head!!! LOL
ok now to my review after my little Red Bull induced and of course Mystic induced Rant cuz after all she Put MY NAME up there!! :D :D :D :D...and thanks to my intensely brilliant sense of humor *pats self on back* *smirk*
Ok I don't know HOW u do it!....I cried and laughed and every emotion i could think of came out in this chap! You are BRILLIANT!!!
I had to laugh at Rose's POV...."She kept the clothes" "she kept the clothes" and her willing to drag bella back by her hair if that was the only way to get her back home with them!
*tear* Jasper and Alice...so cute :)............and Emmett bouncing like Tigger...huh i was thinking the same thing LOL.
and of course...*sigh* dear Edward *sigh* his POV was THE BEST!! *sigh*...He thought if Bella stayed with them he would get with her what jaz has with Ali..awwwww....and she felt so right in his arms and she HAD to stay. she just HAD to. she was a part of the family now......part of...me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*runs around house like a mad woman* That part soooo did it for me!!! OOOOOH and of course when Bella walked over to Edward and he had his arms crossed still and then one second of looking at her he PULLED her into a Hug and she snuggled into his chest and did NOT move as she spoke to carlisle and Edward just tightened his Hold on her!!!!!!!.....OMG....*sigh*
And also the fact that they both could not sleep well for the past month...*sigh* WHEN she goes back with them AND i do mean WHEN cuz i KNOW ur gonna let her go back with them :P
Her first night should be spent in Edward's arms!!!!!!!!! YAY! *jumpin up and down in anticipation* CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XOXOX
Lee
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Wishing
YES SHE DOES WANT TO GO BACK WITH THEM!!! please make it a yes!
Reviewer: smeloise (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Wishing
does she want to go back with them *ponders*
DUHHHHH
i actually LOVE how much this has been updated, cos i thought it was a really good idea but i didnt hear anything from it. i look forwards to reading more :)
Reviewer: melw1995 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 08:02 AM · On: Wishing
PLEASE MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER BECAUSE YOU ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!!PLEASE ANOTHER CHAPTER WOULD BE GREAT!
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:44 AM · On: Unwanted
oh shit!! this chap tore me up!!!
oh my gosh i sooo had a hard time trying not to cry :(
esp the ending when she thought that she wasn't a person there, the younger ones were the ppl she was just the for helping out..an object! :'(
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Wishing
Say Yes!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: TwilightAtDawn (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Wishing
Yeah!
Reviewer: Gelsamina (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:24 AM · On: Wishing
Thanks for the quick update.
Reviewer: melw1995 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:23 AM · On: First Day
at the end of the story you really should make it to were shes stays with the cullens because i was heaRT BROKEN AT THE END BECAUS SHE COULDNT STAY AND WHY DID SHE HAVE LEAVE? YOU DIDNT REALLY SAY THAT SO CONSIDER THE ADVISE....PLEASE AND THE STORY IS REALLY GOOD BY THE WAY!!♥
Reviewer: henbane (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:23 AM · On: Wishing
I hope she goes back with them! Great chapter!
Reviewer: ellie__ox (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:16 AM · On: Wishing
yayyyyy :)
moreeeeee, i love it :D
Reviewer: WhisperingWolf (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Wishing
This is very good. Almost a Cinderella-type situation. I can't wait for more! Honestly this is a wonderful story. ^_^
Reviewer: werucchi (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:59 AM · On: Wishing
OF COURSE SHE WANTS TO. Don't you dare say otherwise.
Okay, love you <333333 You told the reasn and surely the Cullens wanted Bella. And Emmett, oh, he's just tooooo cute :D And Alice,Jasper, Edward and Rosalie. Oh I love them all *THE ULTIMATE CULLENS HUG*
More quickly,please? *puppy face*
~werucchi
Reviewer: Piper Smith (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 06:51 AM · On: Wishing
Yay! :) Thanks for the resolution there! It was very needed!
Reviewer: ellie__ox (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:53 AM · On: Unwanted
why wasn't she adopted?
thats so harsh, but i love thi story :)
update soon x
Reviewer: OperationNautilus (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Unwanted
Oh, poor Bella.
You write very well, I'm always being pulled into the story.
I hope everything is cleared and she gets to go back to the cullens.
Keep up the good work and pleeeease update soon.
Reviewer: cherry (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:23 AM · On: Unwanted
oh nooooo.. you made me sad after the so happy chap last week.. please please please bring bella back.. and we need more edward, lol
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