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Reviewer: twilighter767 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Surprise
Its Esme at the door isnt it???im loving this chapter!!i wish Tanya would go away!!!update soon!!
Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:49 AM · On: Surprise
Ok...update soon...so I don't go insane!
Reviewer: Steelerfan (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:45 AM · On: Surprise
you cant leave us hanging
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:34 AM · On: Surprise
umm should we be worried who's knocking? Laurent? Victoria back from the "dead"?
A drunk and pissed off James and/or Tanya?
Edward seems to be in the dark about Tanya's motivations... a little blinded by the body?
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:32 AM · On: Surprise
oh my...whose at the door?
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Surprise
you ended on a cliffie ! How very dare you lol
update like now !
Great story ,can we have longer chapters ??
Reviewer: southerndaisy (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Surprise
Aaawwww. It's gotta be Mom and Dad, right? I just started reading this story and I love it. I love the bond they all have. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story. Thank you for sharing your talent.
Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Surprise
Oooooh, VERY nice. I love this story and the twist on it was pretty good. Keep going, I can't handle the waiting!
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Surprise
Yea! Got rid of James and Victoria!
I hope she gets to curl up with Edward and sleep tonight.
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:59 AM · On: Surprise
Yea! Got rid of James and Victoria!
I hope she gets to curl up with Edward and sleep tonight.
Reviewer: deepblueyes (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 01:18 AM · On: Surprise
That's got to be Esme and Carlisle, or at least Esme dragging Carlisle along behind her in her desperation to see Bella!
Loved it, more, more, more, more please, pretty please! :)
Reviewer: funkymunky2511 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:50 AM · On: Surprise
omg omg i love this chapter i hate tanya she is sooo stupid lol
Reviewer: skyrose16 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:08 AM · On: Surprise
Ack!! who's at the door??!!
Reviewer: riglerstudent (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 12:03 AM · On: Surprise
that was very evil. you left it at a cliffhanger. please update as soon as possible. i love this story!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Surprise
esme and carlise?
You should kill off james ans tanya
Reviewer: mrscullen (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:48 PM · On: Surprise
it's esme and carlisle right?!? it has to be! And please tell me Edward is not really in love with Tanya...anyway great chapter...update soon please!
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:35 PM · On: Surprise
James, I'd kick his teeth in. And Tanya, I'd verbally tear her to shreds. I'd have her crying for mama. And a cliff-hanger... *pouts* Fine work, Draven
Reviewer: femflorest5 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:34 PM · On: Surprise
What the heck... Ok now I am a newby here I don't know whos at the damn door! PPS
Thanks!
Reviewer: vampirelust7 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Surprise
It has to be Esme&Carlisle, right?
James and Tanya are plotting some crazy nonsense and I can't wait for the fallout! Great Chap!!!!
Reviewer: numberedheartbeats17 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:28 PM · On: Surprise
is it Esme and Carlisle at the door? I love your story, it has to be one of the few that can make me drop what I am doing and read the update.
Reviewer: SarahElizabeth (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:17 PM · On: Surprise
Man, I hate cliffies. You're a tease. I story tease, for shame!!
And seriously, James and Tanya make me wanna puke. I understand though, every story needs the bad guys...le sigh...
Reviewer: twichick1772 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Surprise
More More More. How dare you leave me like that at 2:15 in the morning. Hmph. :)
Reviewer: Bellinda (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 11:04 PM · On: Surprise
thanks for the update :)
Reviewer: crazymama (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Surprise
What?! You can't end it there! The title was Surprise! You can't end it right before the actual surprise visitors are announced! Evil, evil, evil....
Reviewer: obsessed668 (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2009 10:47 PM · On: Surprise
eeeeek
who's at the door?
ahh!!
love it
Cant wait for more
Oxo
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