Your nursary rhymes are getting more creative... and Edward seriously needs to take the blinders off, or have them yanked off. Clueless is one thing, but to have your entire family (Bella included) dislike your girlfriend should tell you that something's not right there, no matter how much you think you love her. And I forsee James becoming a problem...

Can't wait to read more! And I'd love a shout-out!

Yay!  I hope Alice comes up with a good plan to rid Edward of Tanya as soon as possible, maybe taking out James at the same time.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Thanks for writing!

aww man i totally forgot who it is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

OKAY and please e-mail me cause I have info that will make a certain part of your story better....

 

P.S. it has to do with bella almost gettin raped....and i can help u cause i almost got raped....    =      

 

 

e-mail me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Oh you evil person!! Stopping it there like that!! PLEASE update soon!!

YAY you updated. I havent been a member of this site ery long but your story was the first I read. VERY well written. cant wait for more pdates hope it will be soon. :)

ok, slowly killing me with anticipation :) can't wait for more

Aw, no Edward pedicure! I still get a fiendish delight in thinking about him giving pedicures! And James and Tanya seriously need to get together. Soon!

And I love your attempts to adapt nursery rhymes. Too many people don't even recognise them nowadays. I remember having to explain a "Diddle diddle dumpling, my son John" reference to someone wandering around with one shoe on. It made me feel way way too old, and I know we read those old rhymes to my nephew when he was little, and this guy wasn't that much younger, if at all.

Enough with me rambling. I can't wait to read more! I need to know who was at the door...

Hello Carlisle and Esme!!!    I love this story.. even the second time around! 

 

Thank you for sharing!

~Sapphire

James is a creepy mf'er and Tanya is a lying golddigger.  Ugh, just know the two of these jerks are gonna cause problems in the future chapter.  Looking forward to the next chapter.

when's the next update? i'm literally going crazy here waiting.

haha im trying to remember who i was cause i read the story before it was rewritten the story is so wonderful and has the best plot in the world

Crazy cliff hanger!
I loved it as I knew I would. And I dig that cage comment. Poor brainwashed Edward. He shall learn soon enough. Right? If not I'm going to... idk do something. hahah
Great chapter. I loved every second of it!