Just wanted to say, I like your story so far! It's cute & sweet.

Oh NO! :O
Edward wants to marry Tanya!!?? WTF!! Say it ain't so!

I do believe tha t of course it will be Bella who realizes that she loves Edward first, and it will obviously take Edward a lot longer to realize he loves bella *sigh*

I Love That Alice has a plan to reveal tanya'a true colors to Edward and im sure Rose will be MORE than willing to help.

Man You gotta LOVE how everyone shuts trap when Jasper raises his voice :)

oops, to my previous comment i didnt mean to ask if it was your first time writing. lol, sorry, im tired. :p

I soooo Loooove this chapter. I love the reuniting between Esme, Carlisle and Bella. She's got all her family together now.

Loved the fight scene. It was hilarious and at the same time I felt sorry for Edward because he doesn't see Tanya for what she is and he probably will be heartbroken when he finds out. Is Tanya the "Victoria" character?

Love the scene where Bella tells Rose and Emmet to hook up. I would so love to know what went on in their heads at that moment. Perhaps something Bella does or says will give them a nudge in the right direction.

Great chapter. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Well, Victoria was in there, so I'm not sure I'd call her the Victoria character...just an really irritating person...

doode no!

your meant to properly respond to that review..

not sound like your on drugs or drunk and go.. oo adult, eh? yeah thats right bitch im an adult:P

 

get Bella to fight for edward(:

xox

LOVE.

Author's Response:

No, not on drugs and wasn't drinking at the time I replied.  I just found it very amusing that you called me a child or adult or whatever you are.  That just really struck my funny bone!  What can I say, I'm easily amused at times, especially after I've been cleaning all day and am tired and need a break from reality...Thanks for the reviews!  I'm really happy that you're enjoying the story!  I am!

Oh I really like this story so far and I'm with the family Tanya has to go ... Maybe with James :o)  now there's an idea   UPDATE Soon Please!!!!

ohh they're all circling the wagons for Bella and against Tanya... I could "almost" feel sorry for T... almost, but not quite hehe

 

 

PLEASE KEEP WRITING!!!!

Yeah, Project Eject Tanya!

Wow! Just wow! I am so impressed by what you have done with this story. You took it from one place to another and another always surprising us but without loosing the flow. You blew me away!!

I like the fact that Edward and Bella didn't declare undying love for the moment they've seen each other agian. It'd been unrealistic. It makes complete sense that they still feel something, which they are not sure what it is, but are reluctant.

Tanya, a hateful bitch as usual but we know this is a necessary evil. We must find someone to hate otherwise where is the fun?

James was surprising because he seemed to be nice enough until we got his last POV. It made me think how sometimes we have no idea the sort of people to have as acquaintances. How many times haven't we thought someone to be a nice person just to be proven completely wrong? It happens all the time and James is a perfect example.

Or how many times we think we love the person we are with and people around us hate the person and we don't know why... until we realise we didn't know this person at all??? Can't wait to see Edward realise Tanya is as sweet as a lime.

Anyway, I coud go on and on but I want to see what is coming. I take that we start a new stage in this story from next chapter and I want to see what is coming.

Ah! I love Emmett. He is the perfect big brother.

And once again, well done to you!

xoxo, M.

 

PS- we never got to see much father-daughter interaction between Carlile and Bella. I'd like to see that.

I am sooooooooooooooooooo excited I cannot stop reading to comment so hold on a bit OK??

What a fun story. The love that revolves around all the Cullens is fantastic!

Can't wait to see what Alice does to show Edward how horrible Tanya is!