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Reviewer: Twilightlurrvver (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 01:52 AM · On: England
wait so she's almost 22 ii thought she was younger.. oh well! i liked it very much. btw you are totally right about thebit where bella was bulied and stuff because that would happen. it would happen coz she's american in a british schoool.im british but im also open minded (very rare)!
Reviewer: Bopstar (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:26 AM · On: England
ooooh
Reviewer: jingles4thestorm (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2009 12:00 AM · On: England
hippopotamus of a monkey's ass bitch. My god that is the best phrase in the world. I'm totally going to use it forever!!
Reviewer: cullenfever (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:52 PM · On: England
wow ,that was very emotional
ali the different povs at the end ,i could picture( thanks to the films)
them all open mouthed .
wow can't wait for the next update
xxxxx
Reviewer: Amber_Cullen (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 11:02 PM · On: England
I loved it :)
i especially love how u show everyones POV. its my favorite thing about reading this story.
O and i will steal emmett and Edward back! Mwahahaha!!! lmfao. :D
well at least for a little while. I'll give them back later, i promise. :)
Reviewer: dontfollow (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 10:52 PM · On: England
Victoria is EVIL!!!!
Reviewer: crystal16 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 09:44 PM · On: England
im ready for E&B to get together!
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:34 PM · On: England
WOW! That was awful for her.... I know they all will help her through this. Edward needs to kick Tanya to the curb and soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Lovin this story!!
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 08:18 PM · On: England
England sounded horrible, so I am glad she is back with her family!!! ;)
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:59 PM · On: England
first thing first got to get rid of Tonya - that will lead to Bella's happiness
Reviewer: apricot (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:33 PM · On: England
i must say the england account of events is better since there are more details.. it's hreatbraking to read what bella went through in england..that was truly cruel of victoria. good thing she died quickly.. it did seem like half of bella's life was hell with a little vacation in between with the cullens. thank God she's with them now. and give it to alice to still think of shopping after all that! haha..nice chapter..please update soon! thanks =)
Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 07:27 PM · On: England
Poor Bella! And now her family feels angry and guilty for not rescuing her.
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:56 PM · On: England
My favorite line in this chapter: "hippopotamus of a monkey’s ass bitch" -- that's awesome :-)
Thank you for filling us in! Man, Victoria was awful :-( I'm glad Bella was able to make it back to the Cullens!
Reviewer: Draven Angelis (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:37 PM · On: England
I could have lived happily without it, myself. Can't stand Queen Bitch aka Victoria in this. I want some more sibling fun. And ExB love. Thanks for the shout-out. Been inspired again. *is watching A Walk to Remember* Yet another fic to start. I'd be posting now, but I have no PC. I review via cell. Sucks, I know. XD Fine work, Draven
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:27 PM · On: England
As painful as this moment was for everyone Bella's pain from the experience will be healed by her loving family now that they know. I love what you have written!!!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:14 PM · On: England
Thanx for the long long chapter :D
So sad to actually read what happened to Bella in England...at least everyone agrees they want to kill Victoria again... :P
Can't wait for more B/E interaction!!
Again...thanx :D
Reviewer: pippyXYZ (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:10 PM · On: England
That was so sad. Poor Bella. You know reading this only made me wonder whay exactly did those horrible kids at Rob's school do to him. Well he did say they took his shoestrings but what other torture did that put him through. Thank God that he did have Sam and Tom there with him at 12. I wonder if he didn't have them would we even be here right now enjoying Rob's talents. He is already shy at times and introverted. Without his buddies him may be just an average guy walking around London doing a job that he might not even like.
Wow to really think about the roads we could go down if this didn't happen or if this did happen. I know I have personal regret at not being able to get with this guy that seemed to be everything I had wanted. We just kept missing each other. I would be gone when he arrived at my house several times. I missed him at school too. We were like two passing ships in the night. I was during college. To this day I think we would have ended up married with kids. We were that right for one another. If O had only waited a few more minutes at times I would have go out with him. So close yet so far away. :(
Reviewer: born2speakmirth (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 06:02 PM · On: England
I wanted to let you know that I'm enjoying your story. The plot is great and I love your ideas. I was wondering why you always have everyone's POV every time though. I think it's slowing down the action and it's just not needed every time. I mean this chapter they were just all really mad about what happened and you just ended up having to say the same thing in a bunch of different ways. I don't want to sound harsh or anything because I really do like it, I was just wondering why you decided to do that. :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:54 PM · On: England
I think we can all agree that we are done with Englad (and Tanya) and ready for Edward and Bella to get together.
Reviewer: Shawna Nodine (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:44 PM · On: England
wow i know exactly what it feels like to be adopted....all the thoughts of why wasn't i good enough....but nothing ever that bad happened....i do hope bella and edward get together soon....he seems to be the only one who can really and truely help her....great job so far...can't wait for more.
Reviewer: AJ04 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 05:15 PM · On: England
Wow England was Hell on Earth. I am relieved like Jasper any of those damn boys never got to her. Bella has been thru enough. I like Alice would easily take a page from Rose's book and would have beat the living snot out of Victoria.
Reviewer: bluelori87 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:59 PM · On: England
this story is so great, i love the way that you took this story in such a different way. it is so cool. i can't wait to read more. i hope there is more soon.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:24 PM · On: England
I'm so glad to have an update to this great story. Having said that, I'm not positive I loved this chapter--it felt a little incomplete. The background was necessary and I liked everyone's reaction; however, I would've liked to see what happened when the silence was broken. Update soon please! I can't wait to see where you take this!
Reviewer: readergoof (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 04:11 PM · On: England
Poor Bella. I think the best part was hearing everyone's thoughts. It made it more real. We got to share the shock and horror. Plus it was a great Edward moment. the shiny prince.
Reviewer: JessicaB923 (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 03:49 PM · On: England
Alas the horror! Hopefully everyone will see the light soon enough.
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