What the hell! Has Edward gone completely mental?! That money hungry skank is likely to leave him broke. She's not even willing to work for prestige, much less money. She just wants it handed to her on a gold, diamond-encrusted platter. Such things must be earned to be truly appreciated. Please tell me he sees sense... Before this turns into total disaster! Fine work, Draven

Ok, you were right.  I didn't like this chapter....at all.  I mean, it's not that I don't like the chapter, I just don't like the "events" in the chapter.  I still love the story though.  And I'm hoping you are going to fix this horrible lapse in judgement and sanity on Edwards part.  I mean really....what was he thinking?  OOooohhh that's right...HE WASN'T!!!!

Ugh this chapter Repulses me. I've never read a love scene between Edward and Tanya before and I hope never to again. But I do love the story. Keep on writing I'm looking forward to it.

Wow, you weren't kidding when you said that there were parts we weren't going to like... Damn...

Well add more soon, this is a terrible place to leave us hanging.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

sighs. stupid edward. i hope he comes to his senses soon.

Noooooooooo... on so many levels and issues. lol. First.. the kiss? Terrible. Second... Edward and Tanya (I don't have issues with her, but STILL). Third... her evil is coming out and Edward doesn't even realize it!  Anyways, can't wait for the next chapter!

She's settleing for just a carat??  THought she would demand at least a 3 ct, or even a 5 ct...  God!  What a Bitch! (But I guess that's the point right..??)

Great story!

~Sapphire

ugh. I hate Tanya!!
oh well. I suppose there is a method to your madness... can't wait to read it! :)
Keep up the FANTASTIC writing!

WHAT THE HECK????????????

 

NOOO!!!

 

he can NOT marry that bitch. no no no no no no NO!!!

(i have temper problems. excuse my screaming.)

He asked her to marry him I can't beleive that. AWWW he belongs with bella he is being a jerk.

I am so freakin' pissed right now that I'm seriously considering throwing in the towel in on this one. Seriously. There's absolutely no romantic or even lustful thoughts coming from Edward toward Bella. THAT'S A MAJOR DISAPPOINTMENT CONSIDERING THE AWESOME BEGINNING THIS STORY HAD. Then, you went and practically bitch slapped us with the sex scene between Edward and Tanya. But the biggest downer of all was the damn proposal. WHAT THE HELL?!! I have no idea how you plan to fix this, and I really don't know if you even can. 

But I'm gonna give this the benefit of the doubt for a little bit more. Frankly, it's like watching a car wreck. You just can't look away at the horror before your eyes. Please prove me wrong. Ugh...so freakin' pissed!