Reviewer: twilight lover (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:53 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
its so weird but reading this chapter with Tanya in it made me cringe! but with bella i dont feel anything but happiness!
Reviewer: fanficreader83 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
It was so much better with it being her... I did not read this the first time so thanks for the info... I will definitely continue now that I know more but will surely be counting down until SHE is gone!!! ;)
Reviewer: crystaldreams (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:26 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Okay, so I'm a bit confused. Was he w/ Tanya but thinking of Bella or just w/ Bella?
Anyhoo, I really enjoy reading this story. It's my first time through, so I'm not sure what's coming down the line, but I am glad that Tanya will be gone in a few chapters. I do think that, even though I don't like her or James in this, that they are probably needed for plot and such. And maybe some good ass kickin' later? Please...
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:18 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Yummy lol so much more yummy. I feel better instantly hehe. I'm easy though. Shhhh don't tell anyone.
Reviewer: AstonMartin823 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Thank you! Thank You! Thank You!! I feel much better...I can honestly say that Tanya's name does not belong at all in that scene what -so- ever!!! I can now wait for him to dump her for Bella after reading the re-write.. :0)
Reviewer: SammyJo (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
What !!??!?!, No. Come on hurry up an get to real posting so we can get Tanya's ass moving!!!! ;) Thanks.
Reviewer: cmbooth (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
sooooo confused!!!!! update soon pleaseee
Reviewer: Sweetheartwithfangs (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
I hate to whine, but eight chapters til that b**ch is gone? sorry if I offended you with my language, but I really hate Tanya. Please Update soon! I love your story very much!!
Reviewer: EdwardsHeartbeat (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:47 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
So was he pretending she was Bella the whole time he was Playing her like a fiddle???Cause that I'm good with.
Reviewer: skimmerscm (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:46 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
now You lost me totally there. I don't know what to think anymore.
you're lucky I have a curious nature because I would probably drop it if it wasn't for it....
Reviewer: nannanutbread (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
the last chapter really made me think about still wanting to read this story...just eww! but i made the choice to keep reading since we all know that bella and edward will get together soon. i just hope it's sooner then later. i think this story is wonderful so far and i can't wait to read more.
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Too cute my dear
Reviewer: Barbiejeremy (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
I liked that so much better.
Reviewer: Kaydence (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:06 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Much better!!! And even though I HATE the whole Tanya/James thing, I think it needs to be there for your story. Without them, you'd lose some serious plot and your story would lack some depth (after the England storyline is resolved). So, kudos to you for staying true to the story....even though I'd like to have Bella seriously kick tanya's ass.
Reviewer: luckieholidae (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
I'm a newbie so I haven't read the first version of this story, but I have to tell you that this story is soooooo incredibly awesome!!! (Thanks for the spoiler about Tanya, I appreciated that, lol) Please keep the updates coming!!!
luckie
Reviewer: EmeraldEyez (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
WHAT???? LOL OK soooooooooo does that mean he was thinking of Bella the whole time??? now I'm confused ... NEED more... UPDATE ASAP
Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:24 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
wait - what - Like what is going on??? HE totally said Tonya - even though she's a bitch and we need to send her skanky ass packin'
Reviewer: culleniwish (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:13 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
thanks for wanting to make your readers smile :0) I wasn't upset by the last chapter. Sure, I don't like Tanya and I don't want Edward with her but I just held on to hope that he'd break it off some time in the future and from your a/n I see that I was right. (good to know)
Reviewer: Dragon81 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:11 PM · On: Say What?
James is such a skeezy mo fo and he is going to become dangerous, I just know it. Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: BlueAngel145 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
lol that was so funny and thank you that was so much better... the last chapter was all a bad dream lol
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:06 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
This outtake is alot better!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: MyBell (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:57 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
If only this chapter was true!
I absolutely hate Tanya. Edward needs to be clubbed in the head for proposing to her! Is he completely retarded?! I hope Bella dates so he can get all jealous and not know why, then realize what a complete dumbass he is being by being engaged to Tanya when Bella is his one true love.
Mini rant over, I love the story just not Tanya.
:)
Reviewer: twilight fan (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:53 PM · On: The Cullens
Oh okay, thanks for explaining.
Reviewer: Jacky-Cullen (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:51 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
it's just the last part of the other chapter with Bella's name instead of Tanya's, so it doesn't make much sense, maybe if you had made this as a dream that Edward was having or something like that. All in all, it does make it a little bit better.
Reviewer: lmouille (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:48 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
i much rather the outtake of say what than the first version!!! I just hate tanya no matter the circumstances.
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