i was surprised with this outtake.. hehe.. it didn't made me feel any better though because it is what it is, an outtake. not what really happened. hehe.. but i've already read this so i know in time tanya will be gone. can i just make a teeny bit suggestion? i know what the girls have planned out to piss off tanya and i am all for that and more! haha.. she deserves it.. but i hope it would kinda take more than that for edward to leave tanya. what i mean is, i can't actually totally blame tanya for going all ape-shit with the girls because if it were any other girl, they'd be pissed at hell too with everything that happened to them (pranks). i was hoping edward would see the real tanya even without all those pranks. she's a social climber right? she wants edward for the money and prestige, not for the man he is. i was kinda hoping he learns that even without the pranks. like overhearing tanya say exactly that while she was talking to someone. i know it sounds cliche, but i think that would be more hurtful and would make him really leave tanya like a bat. or edward catches tanya being rude to his siblings even without them provoking her with pranks. or what would be brilliant is if you combined the two. edward catches tanya telling his siblings that she's only in it for the money but they will never be able to make edward believe that, because edward is blinded by his love for her or something. that would be awesome! two birds in one stone. hehe.. edward would discover her true motives and would catch her being rude and all to his siblings. i think that would make more sense. what you originally wrote is okay. but i just can't belive he would tanya like that given that it was partially the girls' fault for tanya acting that way because of all the pranks they pulled.

It was so much better with it being her... I did not read this the first time so thanks for the info... I will definitely continue now that I know more but will surely be counting down until SHE is gone!!!  ;)

Yummy lol so much more yummy. I feel better instantly hehe. I'm easy though. Shhhh don't tell anyone.

What !!??!?!, No.  Come on hurry up an get to real posting so we can get Tanya's ass moving!!!! ;)  Thanks.

I hate to whine, but eight chapters til that b**ch is gone? sorry if I offended you with my language, but I really hate Tanya. Please Update soon! I love your story very much!!

now You lost me totally there. I don't know what to think anymore.

you're lucky I have a curious nature because I would probably drop it if it wasn't for it....

 

Too cute my dear

Much better!!! And even though I HATE the whole Tanya/James thing, I think it needs to be there for your story. Without them, you'd lose some serious plot and your story would lack some depth (after the England storyline is resolved). So, kudos to you for staying true to the story....even though I'd like to have Bella seriously kick tanya's ass.

WHAT???? LOL OK soooooooooo does that mean he was thinking of Bella the whole time??? now I'm confused ... NEED more... UPDATE  ASAP

thanks for wanting to make your readers smile :0) I wasn't upset by the last chapter. Sure, I don't like Tanya and I don't want Edward with her but I just held on to hope that he'd break it off some time in the future and from your a/n I see that I was right. (good to know)

lol that was so funny and thank you that was so much better... the last chapter was all a bad dream lol 

If only this chapter was true!

I absolutely hate Tanya.  Edward needs to be clubbed in the head for proposing to her! Is he completely retarded?!  I hope Bella dates so he can get all jealous and not know why, then realize what a complete dumbass he is being by being engaged to Tanya when Bella is his one true love.

 

 

Mini rant over, I love the story just not Tanya.

:)