im still mad about the first say what chapter lol but i know you will make it all better. this chapter doesnt make me feel better. its a fantasy chapter for now. will it happen in the future in this story. HOpefully and im praying it does.

WTF?

duuudette that was exactly the same thing as the last chapter only with  bella...-.-

but it wasnt bad so im ratin ya10

I totally hate Tanya im glad you included this thanks!

I'm still dying *sniff*....I have SOME life back in my arms again,
seriously I have NEVER said this before but i did NOT enjoy that lemon At ALL :S
i mean the tanya and Edward lemon that is :S
I almost agree with your other reader who was about to throw in the towel after the last chpt. I gotta admit as soon as he blurted out marry me tanya, my breath left me and I instantly wanted to click off and stop reading.

I'm still here....*sigh*.....barely

Yay! That made up for the Tanya lemon last chapter! I so sis not want to read that. And I liked your "Hey Diddle Diddle" rhyme!

Observations from the last chapter:

Tanya is conniving, and Edward is still blind! And Bella should trust her instincts and stay away from James!

Can't wait to read more!

How can you let Edward want to marry Tanya! He belongs with Bella! I love this story please continue but Bella belongs with Edward not James and Edward belongs with Bella not Tanya...

yeah this is much better !!!
keep it up

hugs, kimmy

oh thank god!!!! i was about to seriously bitch slap edweard!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i was sooo furious!!!!!!! please hurry and update! i'm stressing out here!!! =/

Ok. I've decided to stick with you and give you the benefit of the doubt. While I appreciate your re-write, I know that it didn't actually happen, therefore that damn proposal is out there. It's like what Sally says in WHEN HARRY MET SALLY, "You can't take it back. It's already out there." So while I'll never be able to fully recover from your last chapter completely, I've decided to hang in here and pray for the best. 

IF only Edward's thoughts had been less positive towards Tanya, having none on Bella. I think that's where you almost lots of us. But let's see what you've got in store..A LOT can happen in 8 chapters.

Here's me crossing my fingers.

Godspeed!

Huh??? What was that? Is he with Bella or Tanya? Do you still the original story somewhere else?

i was surprised with this outtake.. hehe.. it didn't made me feel any better though because it is what it is, an outtake. not what really happened. hehe.. but i've already read this so i know in time tanya will be gone. can i just make a teeny bit suggestion? i know what the girls have planned out to piss off tanya and i am all for that and more! haha.. she deserves it.. but i hope it would kinda take more than that for edward to leave tanya. what i mean is, i can't actually totally blame tanya for going all ape-shit with the girls because if it were any other girl, they'd be pissed at hell too with everything that happened to them (pranks). i was hoping edward would see the real tanya even without all those pranks. she's a social climber right? she wants edward for the money and prestige, not for the man he is. i was kinda hoping he learns that even without the pranks. like overhearing tanya say exactly that while she was talking to someone. i know it sounds cliche, but i think that would be more hurtful and would make him really leave tanya like a bat. or edward catches tanya being rude to his siblings even without them provoking her with pranks. or what would be brilliant is if you combined the two. edward catches tanya telling his siblings that she's only in it for the money but they will never be able to make edward believe that, because edward is blinded by his love for her or something. that would be awesome! two birds in one stone. hehe.. edward would discover her true motives and would catch her being rude and all to his siblings. i think that would make more sense. what you originally wrote is okay. but i just can't belive he would tanya like that given that it was partially the girls' fault for tanya acting that way because of all the pranks they pulled.