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Reviewer: xparawhorextwerdx (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:03 PM · On: Barbeque
I love this chapter...Bella's so evil, Edward's so oblivious...BRILLIANT!
Reviewer: FanpireForever (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:29 PM · On: Barbeque
genius!!!!
xxx
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 02:19 PM · On: Barbeque
Is there any hope that one of the guys, especially Edward, will see James molesting Bella and doing something about it? I'd even accept Rosalie as she seems to have a pretty good punch to her. :) I approve of the get rid of Tanya plan. :) If you could just add James to it too.
Reviewer: Krugness (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Say What?
I really, really don't like Tanya here. I think conniving bitch best describes her and I'm hoping she gets what she really desrves later in the story.
Reviewer: ddcdragonfly (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Barbeque
oooo .... just catching up from being away
love the conniving going on ... Tanya will lose it eventually I'm sure
Reviewer: sconnolly318 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
Hahaha, this was as it should have been. :-)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Barbeque
Just a couple of more chapters to go before tanya is gone. As for Bella not telling the others about James, I can't help but feel that it's going to come back and bite her in the ass.
Reviewer: BellaMyLove (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:45 PM · On: The Cullens
I like it. It isn't overkill. It's is so like the characters actually are. It's good
Reviewer: bluelori87 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Barbeque
Wow, LOL i really love this chapter. you know how to write a great story. keep it coming!!!!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:14 PM · On: Barbeque
too funny.....got to love the girls....lol....keep up the good work, look forward to the updates
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:12 PM · On: Barbeque
Way to go Rose!!
Reviewer: iced blood (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Barbeque
ok... now that the plan is in motiion... tanya is on her way out... also if bella is going to freak out everytime that james kisses her then HE NEEDS TO GO! he just makes everything very uneasy....and he does not have good intentions and i really don't want bella to get hurt!
Reviewer: tattoochic911 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Barbeque
That was a great chapter, as always! Can't wait for more!
Reviewer: JShay (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 12:06 PM · On: Barbeque
LMFAO That shit was priceless. James is nothing if not persistent huh? Reminds me of some guys I know. "scoffs" men. But when you set em straight they rarely back that shit up...anyway.
Reviewer: Helpless_Delicious (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:54 AM · On: Barbeque
that is too funny! Ugh edward! C'mon open your eyes blindward!
Reviewer: PasQ (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 11:24 AM · On: Barbeque
Those three girls are seriously cunning :P I love the way they play Tanya... the wicked witch has to fall!!!
Edward...Edward... how blind and oblivious can he be??? **shakes head in disapproval** :P
I dread what James has planned, I think it's not below him to try to force himself on Bella or drug her for that matter... I simply dread it... cos Bella has suffered already so much!!
I completely trust your author-ness and your saying that B/E will get together at the end... ;)
Thanx :D
Reviewer: crazycoffeemom (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Barbeque
ok your a/n made me feel better but i still really really hate tanya. hurry with the next chapter.
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:55 AM · On: Barbeque
I found your story, and am in love with it! I hope they get that bitch good! grr, I already hate her!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Barbeque
LOL..that was perfect!!!
Reviewer: horses191 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Barbeque
OMG that is some off the funniest shit i have ever read!!!!!!Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!!
Reviewer: jfk06 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Barbeque
Yay plan in action!
Boo James >:-O
Yay only 6 chapters of Tanya left!
Reviewer: 8vamp8 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Barbeque
Gosh I hate Tanya and James. I think I said this when I read your first one.... I think those two should just get together and leave Edward and Bella to each other haha.
:D
Great chapter!
Keep up this FANTASTIC writing!!
Reviewer: bnpatella (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Barbeque
cant wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: Jaspirated (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Barbeque
Can Edward realy be that dense, fo'sure? :P
oh oh oh CAN you PLEASE update on fanfic first then twilighted.. cos yknow.. updating on Fanfic is faster.. and im addicted to your story.. you cld update loadsa chaps at one time..so if you wanna be nice and win more reviews.. (:
xox
Reviewer: jacmom (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:30 AM · On: Barbeque
Great chapter!!!
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