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Reviewer: twimommy (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Halloween
Poor Bella! At least she was rescued before it got any worse. That was bad enough. I had a guy force 2nd base on me when I was 15. I didn't even kiss another boy for a year.
Reviewer: KellansBBR (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 10:13 PM · On: Halloween
I understand the cliffy part but I am glad you stopped James when you did...He is bad news in any story...I know its Edward that pulls him off at least that is what I am hoping...Please continue...I love this story and have been with you from Chapter 1....
As for Emmett and the kilt I think he was wearing something....he just seems the type to play with you...Scotsmen are HOT!
Reviewer: eustaciavye (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Halloween
Horrrrrible cliffy! Hurry...
Reviewer: cullenfan8 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:39 PM · On: Halloween
Kick his ass, seabass!!!
Reviewer: Marykate 113 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:34 PM · On: Halloween
The spicey food joke was hilarious. I actually lauged out loud...
Reviewer: ddiva (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:29 PM · On: Halloween
NOT NICE!! You can't stop there, we NEED to know who stopped that douchebag James! And can I just say I love me some Emmett(AKA Robert)? He's hilarious. You are amazing.Can't wait to see what's next ? Are they gonna kill James(and Tanya) and who's gonna help hide the body? Please don't leave us hanging long!
P.s. The girls could invite Tanya on a shopping trip and offer her some laxative gum. It would be hilarious to watch her SUFFER!!
Reviewer: bellagirl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 09:20 PM · On: Halloween
I fucking swear the person better be anyone of the Cullens and NOT be Tanya because I know for fucking sure she'd just leave it and not say a damn fucking thing. She's the kind of heartless bitch who would do that. Also, you better have Bella report James to the police for sexual assault and not let it go like I have seen in some fics. I HATE THAT FUCKING SHIT.
Reviewer: eliiana_17 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:56 PM · On: Halloween
pleeaseee... it has to be emmett... or edward... or rose... or even better the three of them!!!
Reviewer: branflake (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Halloween
james i a bastard!!!! i would have screamed anyway!!!
PLZ hurry before i die!!!!!
Reviewer: acseisks (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Halloween
what a freaking cliffie!! omg. update/ plz!!! great story
Reviewer: Zoey0223 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:38 PM · On: Halloween
Wow... No offence, but this was a bipolar chapter... It went from sneaky, to funny, to assault... and all in less than 2000 words. I think thats a world record! It was a great chapter and I can't wait until the next one's updated.
Reviewer: katieam1 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:36 PM · On: Halloween
Wow! What a chapter. Hurry up and post the next one I am on the edge of my seat here!!!
Loved the pepper in the sauce!! Awesome. Keep the Tanya attacks coming!! LOVE reading them!!!
Reviewer: Rand0mnessR0ks (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:32 PM · On: Halloween
Of course Emmett was going free, that is the only way to wear a kilt! Any proper Scot can tell ya that! I want it to be Edward who saves her, but I think it should be Emmett or Jasper. Edward needs to realize that he didn't save her for him to realize that he truly does have feelings for her, ya know what I mean? Having Edward save her, would just be too easy. OOOhh!!! Best of all, have it be Rose, I want Rose to kick James' Ass!!! please please please please please!!! That would so rock!!!
Reviewer: twilightchick (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Halloween
Oh man I wonder who came in I hope its edward!!!
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:09 PM · On: Halloween
Please update fast!!! You can't leave it like that :-( this story is just getting good I love it.
Reviewer: SpaCullen (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Halloween
hmmm... who could it be? lol, then again, there have been lots of surprises in this story, so maybe it isn't who I am expecting...
knowing Emmett, I don't know if I want to know what he was wearing under the kilt!
This was a great chapter, thanks!
Reviewer: Humble (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:59 PM · On: Halloween
I'm hoping it was Edward who came to save Bella.....
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:58 PM · On: Halloween
bad bad cliffy..not nice..my guess is Emmett, though I hope it is Edward! Great job with the spaghetti dinner!!!! Tanya needs to go away,but I get that it takes time!
I could actually picture myself curled up on the couch watching hocus pocus with them. I of course would be wearing my knee high black and orange striped socks, and my witch hat!!!!
Reviewer: Biz321 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:56 PM · On: Halloween
Now that is a frickin cliff hanger. I can't wait to find out who came to Bella's rescue(though I do hope it is one person more than the rest) and I hope to god that it ends with James getting the living shit kicked out of him. I think they should do a round robin, where everyone gets a shot in. Hmmm, that might be good fun to do to Tanya too, though the guys probably wouldn't feel right hitting a girl, but hey the girls could always get an extra shot. Wow, I put way to much thought into that :) Anyway please put me out of my misery and post the next chapter asap, I have been waiting for James to get what's coming to him since he first forced himself on Bella.
Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:55 PM · On: Halloween
Aw...I LOVE this story. This chapter was prefect! I can't wait till Tanya's out of the way, lol. UPdate soon!!!!!
Reviewer: krisandrob (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:54 PM · On: Halloween
OMG! I sure do hope it was Edward! But I have a feeling it was Emmett or maybe Rose. Loved the kilt trick Bella always has ways to get people do things or thinking. I can't wait to see what happens next and my mind is curious about Tanya's car.
Reviewer: skimmerscm (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:49 PM · On: Halloween
Poor Bella,
I'm pretty sure it's Emmett or Edward. I definatly hope it'S Edward but i'm not sure if Tanya would have let him leave the room...
I'm still reading your story and I actually re read it 2 or 3 times to make sure i wasn't missing any pieces of infos....
please give us a new chapter soon...
Reviewer: babypayne2 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:48 PM · On: Halloween
I say its EDWARD
Reviewer: Mrs Jasper Hale (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Halloween
Loved the dinner with the hot peppers brilliant. Wow James is jsut scary.
Reviewer: DeeZ750 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Halloween
Oh my God!! I can't believe that basturd. Who stopped him???? Hurry put up the next chapter!
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