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Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Reunion
Home at last
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:17 PM · On: United
James scares me
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:16 PM · On: College
Where are they?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:16 PM · On: Homecoming
WTF victoria is a bitch
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Wishing
She is going back, right?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:15 PM · On: Unwanted
Poor Bella, what is up with that house she lives in
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Bet
Edward is such a sweetheart! Pedicure from sexxxxy eddie! There are no words
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Pool
Edward shirtless! Yummy
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Shopping
shopping is always fun with the cullens
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:12 PM · On: First Night
breakfast with the cullens. sweet
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:12 PM · On: First Day
Will she?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Introductions
what is up with rose and edward?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:11 PM · On: The Cullens
Esme is such a good mom
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Secrets
Wow. I just finished reading everything that you had here so far, and it is a fantastic story so far.
Edward is being a male bimbo. LOL
Reviewer: Daylen (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 03:54 AM · On: Secrets
OK I'm relieved to hear that Tanya's on the way out on a set schedule, more or less, though finishing up with Bella's nightmares returning was unsettling.
Looking forward to Rose and Emmett getting their issues sorted out sooner rather later :)
Reviewer: sexysadie13 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 11:12 PM · On: Secrets
ok. i'm a new reader. I sooooo wanted in on getting rid of tanya - but alas, it seems the 3 girls have it under control. boo. I am really looking forward to the rest of the story! i'm dying for an update. I wish tanya would do something stupid and wind up in jail with james. those 2 deserve each other!
Reviewer: Lissa Rose (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Shopping
I have been trying to read past chapter 5 because I really got into the story, but I cannot get chapter 6 to open at all. Is there something wrong with it?
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:10 PM · On: Secrets
OH!
MY!
GOSH!
SNAP CRACKLE AND POP!! EEEEEEEEEE!!!
SHE RECOOORDED IT. SHE RECOOORDED IT. TANYA'S LEEEEAVIN. TANYA'S LEEEEAVIN. BELLA LOVES EEEDWARD. BELLA LOVES EEEDWARD. MY SONGS AMAAAAAZIN. MY SONGS AMAAAAAZIN. BUT NOT AS MUCH AS THIS CHAAAPTER. NOT NOT THIS CHAAAPTER. XD
Reviewer: Emmett_lover (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 03:59 PM · On: The End's Beginning
EEEE!! IM NUMBER ONE! IM NUMBER ONE! IM NUMBER ONE!!!!!! OMG OMG OMG!! Yay! So....as a PRIZE can you tell me whats under the kilt?!?!?! PLEASE PLEASE PLEEEEEEEASE?!?!?! Ok finnneeee.
And also, I believe I have read this chapter. >:/ Oh well. There's nothing wrong with reading things more than once. XD
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2009 04:27 AM · On: Secrets
LOVE THIS FANFIC! MOREMOREMOREMOREMORE! great! awesome! too many words to describe on fanific!
Reviewer: dangerous_dreamer (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
huh??
Reviewer: jlee (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 10:47 PM · On: The Cullens
what?? I just stayed up way past my bedtime to read through this story. And I get stuck here?!?!?! You've simply got to update... now.
Great story by the way... perhaps I've been jaded, but I can't even imagine myself being comfortable enough to do half of these cuddly things w/brothers, blood or otherwise... but I still enjoy it in the story. It makes their relationship sweet, even if a bit confusing.
By all means, continue... SOON!!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 06:04 PM · On: First Night
My favorite parts:
1. I love that Bella elbows Edward! It shows that closeness. A casualness that they didn't have before the bonding (when they find out why she's so downtrodden) and shows how good the bonding was for both of them.
2. Esme thinks Bella has an air that screamed "give me a loving family" I think I can see that part, jumping up and down, throwing things, pulling a little hair maybe. :)
3. Edward carrying Bella down for the sleepover just makes my heart yearn, yes, f'ing yearn! It's so SWEET!
4. Bella's thought "Was this morning normality?" For someone who never had siblings, a valid question! :) And for someone whose sibling is Emmett, even moreso!!
Lots of morning fun in this chapter and I just love that Bella and Edward are all snuggly during sleepytime. So precious!!
Reviewer: amaris09 (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:46 PM · On: Secrets
amazing as always please post more soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2009 05:30 PM · On: First Day
Ok, so the bras question threw me. I don't. So I have no idea. But I'm a rather small person (think Alice) so I've never really needed to.
My favorite things...
1. I really like that the 5 get to talk while Bella's sleeping to open up so honestly about what they think regarding Bella. That was a great way to handle the exposition without dizzying POV shifts like last chapter. (Not that it was bad, just not something I'd like for every chapter if that makes sense...)
2. "You can thank me later. I love cookies" such a perfectly Emmett thing to say. :) Makes me smile to think about his dimpled cheeks when he says it
3. The revelation that Bella considers herself too old, unlovable, unwanted really hits everyone hard and you write that very well. It's such a depressing mindset and these 5 happy carefree people (who've certainly had tough times in the past...) just didn't expect it at all. You wrote the shock and surprise very very well
4. Someone seriously needs to take the sugar away from Alice. :) made me smile!
Another great chapter. i really like the way they spend the day together - watching and learning and of course, Alice would delicately but persistently interrogate. And Of course, Emmett would ask too many questions, and of course Edward would ask the right one to get to the heart of the matter. I really like that Rosalie is genuine and kind here. She's not as abrasive as she's shown in other stories and I like that you make her more likable.
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