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Reviewer: beth cullen (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Shopping
Thoughts on Chapter 5...
1. The shower is where I always do my most pensive musings as well!
2. I love that the Cullen girls are so well known that they get personal assistants when the shop. Just a couple of employees following them around. I'd never even heard of tipping a salesperson!!
3. I love that Bella puts her foot down about her hair. Clothes she can wear or not wear. Accessories as well. But hair can't be changed easily once you mess with it!
4. I just LOVE that Bella snuggles up with Edward once she's home and comfy. I can't think of any place I'd rather be!
Great chapter. Really shows how the girls get closer. Bella shows spunk, which endears her to Alice and Rose alike and she leans on the guys, especially Edward, for comfort afterwards. Really well done!
Reviewer: LindseyPAngel (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Secrets
Please Update!!! I love it and its just getting better!!
Reviewer: mini (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2009 01:43 AM · On: Secrets
constructive critisizm
its too short, u need to make the girls do one last thing that makes tayna burst that crazy rant out
also giving you the heads up. edward will be stubborn in forgiving the girls for recording, at first hell deny it, but bella will bring him around.
please dont forget edward is stubborn, and will have the instinct to figure out they did taucher her in a way. also if she leaves, tayna is he sort of person to get evan
i love you
xx
monique, deticated reader
please dont ceep us waiting too long
Reviewer: smileyirish14 (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 05:00 PM · On: Secrets
AWWW CRAP! Oh NO you just di'nt. Nuhuh. You ENDED that THERE!!!!!????? How DARE YOU!!! GAFREAKINGOD! waitinallannoyingfreakinggrrrGAH.... *sigh* g'story... :P
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 06:53 AM · On: The End's Beginning
oh man Edward is so stupid.. Bella deserves better..
Reviewer: ROSEjen (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Homecoming
man i keep crying for Bella the poor girl does not get a break..
Reviewer: momo_911 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 03:24 PM · On: Secrets
I Love This Book
Reviewer: lisab (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 07:01 AM · On: Secrets
I really love your story and have read straight through to here! can't wait to read more. How often do you usually post? i have just started reading fan fic the last month but this is the first story i have read that is not completed except for the The Office and just want Tanya GONE! thanks for sharing your story with us!
Reviewer: BrightAngelofDarkness (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2009 02:43 AM · On: Secrets
this is a great story! i loved it, it's got some dramatic lines but you also pt some humor in there.. so it's great.. keep writing and update soon!!
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Introductions
THERE ARE TO MANY POV'S. 8 IS TO MANY. BUT I DO LIKE THIS STORY.
Reviewer: seekingbecca (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 09:58 PM · On: The Cullens
lovely. sweet esme. more please
Reviewer: laced (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2009 01:27 PM · On: The Cullens
hi you were so sweet to send me the original to read i cant thank you enough i enjoyed it alot i look foward to finishing the new version i like some of the twist and changes u have made like the taped conversation and and the pre nump too cool keep up the good work
Reviewer: mysticsavantpixie58 (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 11:08 PM · On: Secrets
i wonder if edward would have walked in on the whore's conversation with rosalie, alice and bella. that would be funny as hell. plus the bitch would have deserved it. she reminds me of this chick at my school, who's like the president of united skanks of america. i love the story. james is an asshole and what he needs is to get castrated with a rusty spoon. by alice. prick. update soon, please.
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:24 PM · On: Secrets
Ok Em knows rose likes him and bella knows she loves edward can we get these crazy kids together please!!!!
Love the story can't wait for more!
ESME knows too!
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:23 PM · On: The End's Beginning
first of all when is he gonna get his head out of his ass and see she is a goldigging bitch
Second when is he gonna realize that he loves BELLA
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:22 PM · On: Aftershock
Emmett is the best big brother
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Halloween
Please let the boys kill that bastard
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Next Day
at least Edward knows how they feel
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Barbeque
James is a creep. Who does that?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:20 PM · On: Planning
the bitch is going down
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Outtake - Say What? - Special ReWrite
as God intended it to be!
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:19 PM · On: Say What?
NO HE DIDN'T
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: England
how could someone be so awful?
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Family
one big happy family
Reviewer: lovemesometwi (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: Surprise
tanya: the bitch has to go
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