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Reviews For Firsts
Reviewer: xbellex (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2010 07:26 PM · On: Firsts

That was beautiful. I've always thought there as a lot more history with Esme and Carlise. ;o)

Reviewer: sisterpres (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2009 09:27 PM · On: Firsts

I loved this! My favorite C/E so far. Thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: KrysCullen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Firsts

Aww, this story was so sweet! I absolutely love stories from Esme's POV and you did a wonderful job with it. The way you potrayed each character was absolutely perfect.

Reviewer: Love-joy cullen (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 02:18 PM · On: Firsts

Now that is what I call an amazing fanction. Its so sweet, you captured Carlisles and Esme's relationship perfectly in my opinion.

love-joy cullen

 

Reviewer: Sakeaoi (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 05:15 PM · On: Firsts

That was absolutely beautiful!
You captured the characters and their relationship perfectly, and it was brilliantly written. It brought a tear to my eye, dammit! :)
Nice job

xxSxx

Reviewer: Strider (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2009 09:38 PM · On: Firsts

That was so wonderful!  I have always loved Carlisle, and I appreciated your descriptions of him.  Little details like his hair brushing his shoulders and  back being broad and muscular were so vivid, and really made him seem like the strong, powerful vampire he is.  Thank you!

Reviewer: Leesh (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Firsts

AAWWWHH!!! Beautiful, sweet, heartwarming story!! Thank you for writing and sharing!! I enjoyed this story so much! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside :o)

Reviewer: Cavriola (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Firsts

A lovely romantic story. I liked it all, but most of all the ending, which brought it into perspective and made the rest of the story mean even more. Showed how it did not fade with time.

I also think you have managed to capture Edward very well, though he was only mentioned briefly.

Reviewer: Char (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 03:55 PM · On: Firsts

This is beautiful.

Reviewer: KrispyLove (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2008 01:25 AM · On: Firsts

So sweet.

Reviewer: Goodygurl (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2008 11:04 PM · On: Firsts

That was just adorable! You really captured Esme really well.

Reviewer: Minisinoo (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2008 09:45 PM · On: Firsts

Very nice!  I love Carlisle and Esme ...

Reviewer: Fallen Angel (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2008 01:56 AM · On: Firsts

That was wonderfully written. I still have tears in my eyes. Reading about such love should not make me want to cry. *wipes tears* I held it in until the very end where Carlisle called Esme "my only" such a genetric way to show affection, but the way it was said was so tender.

Reviewer: Bella Cullen (Signed) · Date: June 11, 2008 07:49 PM · On: Firsts

Never before had my heart tried to jump from my chest. - umm this was a problem i noticed i do believe she was a vampire at the time this quote was srtated...her heart should be silent therefore not bouncing out of her chest just thought you'd want to know...good job by the way

Reviewer: mommyofboth (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2008 02:01 AM · On: Firsts

Wow, that was really wonderful... so sweet, so romantic.  I loved it.  

Reviewer: Twilightened (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2008 07:14 PM · On: Firsts

Oh my Goodness! I love this story. It is so tender and sweet. This is my second time through it, and it's even sweeter the second time through. Beautifully told.

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2008 10:53 AM · On: Firsts

You've done a great job in capturing the love between Esme and Carlisle.  Thank You!

Reviewer: mscope (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2008 02:32 PM · On: Firsts

Beautifully written!



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