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Reviews For Monster and Hero
Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 09:12 PM · On: We Have Company

Love this chapter! I especially love that one paragraph where he's talking about how Bella makes it feel like his heart is coming alive. That was beautiful! Can't wait for more :D

Reviewer: transitory_moment (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2010 06:51 PM · On: Your Insecurities Will Kill You

well, I really like how you wrote this. The imagery how you describe the city and the moon was really beautiful and haunting. I was hesitant to read this story because I don't really like stories that have OOC and because I love Edward so much just the way he is ;) But I thought you portrayed him very well here.

Reviewer: mercury_clare (Signed) · Date: June 17, 2010 12:13 PM · On: We Have Company

just started to read...i like this story :).  curious to see how everything happens & hope you can finish it!

Reviewer: LJ Summers (Signed) · Date: July 31, 2009 08:18 PM · On: We Have Company

Okay, so I just found this story and am REALLY enjoying it. Even if Carlisle does sound a bit pedantic and full of himself. 

I don't know where you, Author, have vanished to, but I hope you come back and update. :) It's a great story and a terrific angle.

Reviewer: Queendel (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2009 11:03 PM · On: We Have Company

I really like this story.  This Edward is a bit dark  and and Bella seems clumsy as ever.  Update soon.

Reviewer: kikabr (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:03 PM · On: We Have Company

I just found this fic today, and I liked it a lot. will you update soon?

Reviewer: steflynno (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2009 04:02 PM · On: We Have Company

Great story. Can't wait for updates.


Reviewer: ForbiddenFyre (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:33 PM · On: We Have Company

Loved it. For a second I thought that maybe she was going to be made into a vampire! Silly me, Edward's not going to make her a vampire without lots of prodding! Anyhoo, nicely written and I love how you let us "see" them meet Alice and Jasper!

Author's Response:

my favorrite charater in the books was always Alice so i wanted her included more in mine!

Reviewer: Nicole March (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:17 PM · On: We Have Company

I really like this story - such a different take on how Edward & Bella meet.  And I like the idea of Bella being the only one in a hundred years to be able to reach Edward, to save him from himself.  Can't wait for more interaction between these two & to find out Bella's story - is she with Jacob now, or why is she wearing his sweatshirt?  That would definitely make for an interesting situation, what with Edward's jealousy & possessiveness.  Please update soon!

Reviewer: tneb2009 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:26 PM · On: We Have Company

I just read through what you have done so far and I am hooked, can't wait to see what happens next and where you take the story :)

Reviewer: LordXeenTheGreat (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 11:33 AM · On: We Have Company


Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 09:25 AM · On: We Have Company

Dangerous Jasper with long hair. Sigh.  I like the way Alice swooped into their lives. 

There is a lot implied but not said yet about Bella and the wolves and vampires.  My curiosity is piqued. 

Author's Response:

stuff has happened at a different pace in my story, werewolves have been around a lot longer so look for a different version of jasper.

Reviewer: tri (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:02 AM · On: Your Insecurities Will Kill You

 Hmmmmm! but i love the line junk food

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:57 AM · On: We Have Company

I enjoyed the introduction of Alice and Jasper.  It certainly must have put Edward off kilter to have Alice inserting images of future in his head!  I can't wait for more E/B interaction!

Author's Response:

next chapter almost done!

Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:38 AM · On: We Have Company

Haha. I absolutely adored the ending. Haha. Keep up the good work. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response:


Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Carlisle

Interesting. I like that you put Carlises point of view here. Can't wait to read more.

Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:27 AM · On: Port Angeles

Wet dog? Werewolf? haha I can't wait to see what happens next :)

Reviewer: puresilver (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:23 AM · On: Your Insecurities Will Kill You

Aww...poor Edward. That last line was so sad! Can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: wantmoretwilightnow (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 01:04 AM · On: We Have Company

The final line is my favorite!  Poor smitten angstward!  Wonderful chapter; great story!

Author's Response:

thanks, i always try to make the end of chapters the best part!

Reviewer: hanther (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2009 02:53 PM · On: Carlisle

ooh! i loved it! i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

thanks so much! positive reinforcement is the best motivation for writing!

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:14 AM · On: Carlisle

THis story seems darker than the book.  I like the way Carlisle got to tell his history himself. 

Author's Response:

dont worry, itll still be a love story

Reviewer: kng1986 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 09:44 AM · On: Port Angeles

It smelled familiar and awful at the same time, it was like. . . wet dog?  I guess Bella has been around Jake and she knows about the "Cold Ones"?   This is getting very interesting.   I lost track of the story but added it to my faves so I can get alerts. 

Reviewer: Randy (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 06:11 PM · On: Carlisle

I like this story, it is interesting and very different from most of the other stories on this site. 

Author's Response:

yay! thats what i was aiming for! thanks for the review!

Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 10:52 AM · On: Carlisle

Great back story on the family, you're setting up your tale well!  Can't wait for Edward to bring Bella home though!

Author's Response:

thanks, i know people like to read conversation but since this story is OCC i needed a few chapters of just text and set up! glad you saw it was purposeful!

Reviewer: lord periperi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 08:22 AM · On: Carlisle

like it, can't wait to see it evolving!

Author's Response:

thanks so much, im glad people are liking it.  wasnt sure how theyd respond to a non-perfect edward.

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