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Reviewer: Stacierob1 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 09:18 PM · On: Chapter 20
Nice! I was really starting to worry about Bella...so I'm relieved they talked it out...and of course shared their feellings. I was referred to your story by why not. I was a little skeptical the first few chapters (or the first one specifically) because Edward sounded so much like a typical HS prep asshole...fortunately he evolved with help!
Also, thanks for the quick update! I am really enjoying your story.
Author's Response: He WAS a typical HS prep asshole, so you weren't wrong. ;-) And thank you! I'll have to remember to repay whynot for her pimpage!
Reviewer: Gras (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:47 PM · On: Chapter 20
I'm still reading and still loving it. I think Bella has- after what she has been through- every right to be as cautious as she is. The way you bring across her emotions is great. I can totally sympathise with her. I'm glad Bella and Edward have found a way to talk to each other, though. I'm looking forward to reading more of this. Thank you:)
By the way, I usually don't review every chapter even though I keep reading. While I have no trouble reading and understanding an english text (I'm not a native speaker), I have a hard time expressing my thoughts. Even writing a review as short as this one takes forever and I just don't always have the time or the peace for it. Hope you can understand that.
Author's Response: I never would've guessed English isn't your first language. You write it very well! :)
Thank you so much for taking the time to read the story. I'm glad you feel for Bella - I'm afraid she doesn't have very many people on her side, right now.
Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: seashells22 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 20
Thankyouthankyouthankyou for the early update! I'm glad that even though the issues aren't completely resolved, they are at least out in the open so Edward and Bella can begin to address them. And what a great way to end, with another STEAMY development in their physical relationship!
As always, I can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Yup, out in the open and they'll be able to really concentrate on addressing them and resolving them, long-term.
As always, thank you so much for reading and reviewing! :)
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 08:06 PM · On: Chapter 17
Meh. - I'm kidding. Well written, definitely hot. I just never understood the whole "with clothes on" thing.
Author's Response: hahaha Thanks! The "with clothes on" thing is a stepping stone, that's all. ;-)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 20
OMG!!!!! LOVED it!! So glad that they talked things out and Edward gave Bella an awesome orgasm!!!! Love that they said they loved eachother!! Cannot wait for more!!!
Author's Response: hehehehe Did you really love it? ;-)
Reviewer: Totoro (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 07:04 PM · On: Chapter 20
I actually just found this last night or the night before, love it. Its nice to just be able to relax and read a good Edward/Bella story :D
And I applaud your lemon style, because its much uniquer than many others I've read :) more subtle, but still discriptive enough
Author's Response: So glad you gave my story a chance! And thank you so much! The lemon-ish scenes have been incredibly nerve-wracking for me, so I'm glad you like the way I'm writing them. :)
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 20
You know how much I love Sweetward. *sigh* The flashback was handled really well, and explained the movie incident. it's easy to see why he would feel that he should move on, as Bella seemed untoched by the Prom incident. We know different, but he doesn't. The more I read, the less sympathy I have for Bella (like that's new *snort*) Edward has been flirty almost from the beginning, and while he hasn't confessed to deeper feelings, he's given her plenty of opportunities to return his interest, which she didn't take as a h.s student. Ever. And she 's still pushing him away. I think she's the poor moron in this one...
Author's Response: I know, I know. And you know I feel the same way - I love Sweetward to bits, and Bella drives me nuts. She's going to start pulling her head out of her own ass, though. For realz! :P
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 8
He's gonna step up his game! ::inner fangirl squeals::
::ahem::
Yes. The Responsible Adult has returned. Thank you.
Author's Response: Pffft. Being a responsible adult is highly overrated. ;-)
Reviewer: MyBloodSmellsBetter (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 20
Loved the chapter! And thank you, thank you, thank you for not letting edward let bella walk out when they were fighting! lol
Author's Response: No way would he let her walk out on him. Nuh-uh. Not gonna happen.
Glad you liked it! :)
Reviewer: amkh (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 20
:)
You had me really scared during that fight. I was getting ready to leave an angry review. But you've obviously changed my mind on that :)♥
Author's Response: Glad you didn't have to leave an angry review. I would've been scared. ;-)
Reviewer: lee723 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:56 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ooooh angsty and GOOD at the same time! Only you chica :D
You gotta love Uncle Em LOL...he makes it all better haha.
Oh man that beautiful boy DESERVED a reward for his outstanding behavior and actions :D
And he got the gift of his life lol.
I feel bad that she's so insecure about what she has with Edward, and that she'll end up heartbroken in the end. also now she realizes that she LOVES him and if he breaks her heart she'll be MORE than crushed :S
I'm trying to keep the faith here :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! Glad you thought there was a good balance. :) And yes, faith! Just have faith. I promise not to disappoint. :)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
Much better, great chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 20
yyyyaayyy....so good, but I don't see how people would be annoyed with the last chapter, it was one of my favs..so real and natural.
Author's Response: I think you're in the minority, with Ch 19. People didn't like Bella overreacting and leaving Edward after... servicing him. ;-) But it fit for both the events and her personality, so...
Glad you're still enjoying! :)
Reviewer: sareliz (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:44 PM · On: Chapter 5
Le sigh. :)
Author's Response: hehehe Thanks!
Reviewer: MiaMama (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 1
Thanks to the girls on Twigasim, I am one of your new readers. I am totally loving it! Can't wait for an update :)
Author's Response: Welcome! I love those Twigasm girls. They pimp me but good. ;-)
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:39 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wow! That scene was incredibly. You made Edward realize just how fragile Bella really is and that his actions have an impact whether she placates him or not. Very powerful, truly.
Author's Response: Edward needed to be clued in. **nods** Glad you liked the way it happened! :)
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow!!!! I'm so glad she let it slip!!! That was beautiful.... I love how he kept making her say it out loud.. so sweet!!!! Thanks so much for a quick update!!! Still love this story so much!!! I heard about this story mainly by searching through the titles and the summary drew me in!!! I loved this concept, the whole friends through high school and realizing what you lost idea!! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: AW, thank you so much! I was worried about the ILYs, that the lack of romance surrounding the moment would turn people off, but it seems like it's being well-received.
Thank you so much for reading! :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:27 PM · On: Chapter 20
That was lots better! Thank you! I really did want to slap her around alittle. So glad he made her talk.
Author's Response: See? ;-)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:43 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok I'm freaking out about this chapter.
Author's Response: Read on... ;-)
Reviewer: jordynnem (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 15
I loved your almost lemon. I was right there with you and considering some of the forced scenes I've read, that's saying something. Great chapter! Alice is hilarious as always.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) (Alice is my girl. I love her so much.)
Reviewer: jen79 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:35 PM · On: Chapter 20
My favorite kind of chapter, sweet and hot!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: sherriecherries (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 20
i'm so glad they talked.....
can't wait for more
Author's Response: I'm glad they did, too. They desperately needed to.
And thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: Viridis73 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
**Breaths big sigh of relief** Thank goodness. Not feeling anxious anymore.
Author's Response: Told you to trust me! ;-)
Reviewer: Belli (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:29 PM · On: Chapter 20
I know there are a lot of Bella haters out there, but do you blame her. Trust takes a lot of time to build up when you've lost it. She's just lucky that immature Edward is growing up and is changing his ways. Though she sure does need lessons in comunication.
Great chapter. I love a Rocky road, good relationships take time.
thanks for updating so quickly
Author's Response: Bella definitely needs to learn to communicate better, not just talk. Poor Edward. ;-)
Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: wowza (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 03:01 PM · On: Chapter 20
Wow! This chapter had everything! Nice job
:)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! :)
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