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Reviewer: Akalei88 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 21
Aww, that was a beautiful chapter. You definitely got my water works going.
You are an amazing writer and I eagerly await the next chapter.
Author's Response: I'm so surprised - but in a good way - by how many people are telling my I got them close to tears or actually crying with this chapter. So thank you! :)
Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
I loved the chapter! Other than being a little scared for Charlie (Billy Burke...my other fantasy) it was great. Now Bella finally believes in Edward's love for her. ~Big Hug~ to you for such a sweet chapter!
Author's Response: I could never kill off Charlie - I love him too much! **big hug back** Thank you so much for enjoying!! :)
Reviewer: pixiechix7 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 21
Hello!
I can't believe that I finally caught up with the story! I started reading it yesterday and spent most of the entire day reading it. So it's great that after a long sleepless night, I finally caught up! I love your story, by the way. Edward is just too cute and in a way, inexperienced, I love that about him. I'll head up to the forums soon enough, after a couple of hours of sleep. :D
Author's Response: Wow, go you for getting through the whole thing so quickly! :D So glad you're enjoying. Thnk you!!
Reviewer: twijen6 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter :D and cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: tremington (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 05:52 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: Lalaranya (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Chapter 21
aww!!! i got really confused in this chapter...i felt really sad about charlie, but really happy about edward and bella, and either way i felt like crying out of happiness and sadness and it was so confusing! add that to the headache i got from o-karting erlier, and my god my head hurts!!! lol luv this story sooooooooooo much!
Author's Response: hahaha Sorry for confusing you! ;-)
Reviewer: HeavenDust (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 21
Oh.... wow.
This chapter actually moved me to tears. I was feeling stupid and everything and trying to blink them all back...
What an emotional chapter. And the most incredible thing is Edward skipping out on his piano-thingy for her. Damn, that's just too sweet for words. Gah... round two for tears!
You did great on this chapter - so much emotions, love, trust, faith... it's a heady cocktail, that's for sure! Thank you for updating...
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm really, really flattered that I was able to get that strong a reaction with this chapter. :)
Reviewer: Vicklish (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 09:16 AM · On: Chapter 21
I really wish I could bottle up all the tears that are flowing down my face now to show you how moving this last chapter was. F*ckawesome! I'm glad she finally gets it!
Author's Response: I'm sorry I made you cry, but... I'm really glad I was able to get that kind of reaction from the chapter. So thank you! :)
Reviewer: flibbidyjibits (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 21
So so sad!! I'm happy charlie is ok and it was good for edward to go to bella. He can always retake the class - no problem!
I loved it!
Author's Response: So glad you loved it! :)
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 5
A kiss on the forehead? On the forehead??
Really great chapter,though.
Author's Response: Hey, that's a big step for them! ;-)
Reviewer: klim (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 21
this just made me bawl.. amazing chapter.
Author's Response: I'm not sure if I should apologize or just say 'thank you'...
Reviewer: EandBforever (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Chapter 21
Yea Edward, you made the right choice! Now every good deed deserves a reward right!? Get your mind out of the gutter, I"m not talking about that kind of reward! LOL I'm thinking the professors should let him redo his recital, if you ask me it was definatly an emergency, why he couldn't be their.
Author's Response: He did! Definitely made the right choice. Finally. ;-)
Reviewer: ditto321 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 21
Aw I love when Belly and Eddie fight. And then make up. Great chapter :)
Author's Response: They're fun like that, aren't they? ;-)
Reviewer: Sarahcini (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 21
well im crying now
Author's Response: I'm sorry. :(
Reviewer: amym9903 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
Finally she can see it!!!!! What a great breakthrough... sorry it partly took Charlie nearly getting smashed in the process, but he'll live. I love how Edward has never given up on her, most guys would have already bolted.....I guess he probably feels bad though about all the crap he put her through in the past so I guess fair is fair!! Great chapter!
Author's Response: One grand gesture, as requested. ;-)
Reviewer: ditto321 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 13
OMG! My friend has that shirt that said "Meat is Murder..."
Author's Response: HAHAHA I think I love your friend. :D
Reviewer: ElizabethGere (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awww Glad to see Edward and Bella worked out what was wrong and she is seeing he really does love her and wants to be there!
I look forwward to the next update!
Author's Response: It took them long enough, huh? ;-)
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 05:57 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awesome job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: sunshiniite (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 21
OMG.. !
Today I started reading your story..I was amazed. You're really good. I really can't wait to read the next chapter (:
About this chapter..i was totally shocked. It is just amazing. I really hope you'll post the next chapter tomorrow..I really want to know what will happen next ;)
~Laura (:
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) The next chapter should be up within the next few days, I promise!
Reviewer: i_heart_ecullen (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 21
This chapter was great!!!! Your writting was awsome! Please please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: azure_horizon (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 04:20 PM · On: Chapter 19
I think we all know that Edward didn't tell her, because he felt like he was protecting her. This Bella is so insecure that she would have a bit of a hissy fit about it and distance herself from him even more. The poor guy.
Author's Response: Exactly. **nods**
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 21
I think you should go til...oh...I don't know...um...chapter 78ish..yep that sounds like a great ending number!!!!
Amazing Chapter
Author's Response: You'd get SO sick of this story if I dragged it out too long, I promise. ;-)
Glad you enjoyed!
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 02:07 PM · On: Chapter 21
Can Edward GET any better? *sigh* Yeah, yeah... he was a stupid kid once, but so was most everyone else. He learned and grew up *GASP*!
The flashback was interesting, though I wish it was longer. It made me curious as to whether Edward left while she was gone, making their last, casual, shift-end 'goodbye' their ACTUAL 'goodbye' for over a year. THAT would suck, but would be SOOOOOO Edward (at that time).
Author's Response: He's a good boy, isn't he? I have to admit, I kinda like the man he's become. :)
That's not the flashback I'd intended to write, as you probably figured out from the discrepency between what you saw in the draft I sent you and what I actually posted. But I couldn't figure out how to make it work, so this is what I ended up with.
Reviewer: seashells22 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 21
Great character development in this chapter! Yay for Bella! She finally comprehends the scope of Edward's love, and I definitely think he's made up for his mistakes in the past. Missing his concert was a huge deal, but what an awesome way to prove his love for Bella. I like seeing them so happy and in love, and I hope Charlie gets well soon too! The father-daughter interaction was very sweet. Loved this chapter! (When do I ever not?)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) Yeah, it's kinda sad that it took something like this to get it through her thick skull, but at least it happened! As always, thank you so much for reading!
Reviewer: Ryansmama04 (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:42 PM · On: Chapter 20
I was just browsing and I found this story..I almost didn't start it cause I have so many that I am reading right now, but I decided to read one chapter and I couldn't stop reading! It is so good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you gave the story a chance, and that you're really enjoying it. :)
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