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Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 07:43 PM · On: Chapter 21
great chapter! bit of a tear jerker though.... :P
Author's Response: Well, I'll take it as a compliment that you considered it a tear-jerker. So thank you! :)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 06:24 PM · On: Chapter 19
aww bellas so cute and insecure... totally get why edward didn't say anything though.
another great chapter as always thanks :)
Author's Response: Yeah, he had good reason for it. :)
Reviewer: Sweetpea123 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 04:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
Hey, don't wrap us too soonish, I'm really enjoying this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you! Unfortunately, all things must come to an end eventually. There are still several chapters to go, though! :)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 05:00 AM · On: Chapter 15
great chapter loved the new year celebrations thanks for the links for the girls dresses i love seeing where the inspiration comes from. bella straddling edward was hot cant wait for more action ;)
Author's Response: I'm a very visual writer - if I can't picture the scene playing out in my mind, I can't write it. Details like clothes aren't important unless they're IMPORTANT - like for New Year's Eve, or their Xmas gifts to each other. So that's when I go and find pictures to help me, as well as the readers, visualize everything better. :)
Reviewer: TwoBear (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:53 PM · On: Chapter 20
I love this story. Have loved it from the start since I found it. The end of this chapter was surper HOT! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: whynot (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:51 PM · On: Chapter 1
Yeah, I think I kinda understand that 'make it work' mentality, since I'm STILL not satisfied with the end of my ch 24. *sigh* Yours went much better!
Author's Response: Pffft. What. Ever. ;-)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 9
loving operation woo bella cant wait to keep reading love your writing!
Author's Response: Who wouldn't love Operation Woo Bella? ;-)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 5
great chaper, loved the last chapter as well especially the alice jasper love and edwards creepy dance moves lol cant wait for these 2 to admit to their feelings or stumble into some kissing or sumthing...so exciting gotta keep reading now :)
Reviewer: t_m_d (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 3
loved the first few chapters,you have great writing style. i hvae hepsf chapters to read ill try and review along the way, but im very greedy and find it hard to stop reading :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: ChangVang218 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 03:51 PM · On: Chapter 21
I was just reading this other update on a different story, and it was kind of depressing. So I wanted to read your new chapter for a something a bit more light-hearted.
But then, I got deeper into the chapter, and then this whole thing with Charlie happens! lol. It was a little ironic for me. :)
Anyways, I'm still extremely happy that I read it. It's just amazing to see how both Bella and Edward have changed. I'm happy for them. And I'm really glad that Edward was there for Bella, and that Bella finally accepts that he'll always be there, but I can't help thinking that missing his piano performance wasn't the best thing, you know?
Either way, I still love this story. And I really really cannot wait for that next update. :D
Author's Response: Oh, which one? I wonder if it's the same one that had me in shock following by bawling this afternoon... (The Best Man, by any chance?)
So glad you're enjoying, though! :)
Reviewer: litnerd (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 11:20 AM · On: Chapter 21
*gasp* Nooooooo! Charlie!!!!!! It's a good thing he's gonna be okay. Otherwise I would've organized a damn witch hunt on you. But it's all right now. She finally believes!
Author's Response: I could never kill off Charlie. Ever. I love him. And yes, she believes! :D
Reviewer: litnerd (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:59 AM · On: Chapter 20
Well it's about damn time they admit they love each other. It wasn't quite the way I expected it to happen, but it was still great. And thank you for fixing the heartfail. S'all better now. :)
Author's Response: I would never drag the heartfail out for longer than absolutely necessary. :)
Reviewer: litnerd (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oooh, yay! More Bellarina and Emmett time! And of course the blow job doesn't hurt things, either. Ha ha.
Author's Response: hahaha So glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: litnerd (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Chapter 18
Gah! Sorry I missed so many updates. I'm starting again.
Oh, hell yes! Bases!
Author's Response: Isn't baseball grand? ;-)
Reviewer: Nadiea (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 1
aww.... *TEAR* :)
Author's Response: **hugs**
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 21
aw yay yay yay!
she believes!
very productive last two chapters :D
loved them both tons.
Author's Response: She does! At last! :D
Reviewer: Cedricfan05 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 21
I started crying when I read the ICU scene (I said nearly the exact same thing to my dad before he died). this story is amazing.
Author's Response: Oh god, I'm so sorry about your dad... **HUGS**
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 20
Aw yes finally! they tell each other how they really really feel
im happy that her being moody and upset didnt last a bunch of chapters
i loved this!
Author's Response: Took them long enough, huh? ;-) And nah, I never planned on dragging out Bella's angsting. Edward would never have let it go any further than it did.
Reviewer: OCIMS (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 21
AMAZING!! It took me forever to get this far, but I've enjoyed every minute and every chapter! I can't wait to see what else happens. I think this story is brilliant! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2009 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 21
Good chapter! Poor Charlie though at least he will be ok. It was really sweet of Edward to be there for her.
Author's Response: He'll definitely be okay. I could never kill off Charlie. Ever!
Reviewer: Burntcore (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:33 PM · On: Chapter 21
Awww.... that was sweet even if it was from Charlie getting hurt. I'm glad they were able to make a break-through. This story is awesome. It's been a welcome distraction for me this week. I look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 20
Okay, so my friend who knows i'm a twilight fan overheard me complaining that I was all out of books after Breaking Dawn and I just didn't want to let it go. She quickly turned me on to this sight and opened up a whole new way to spend my free time. My husband and daughter think I'm obsessed now. Maybe they're right. although hubby doesn't mind the bennies after I'm done reading all the lemony goodness, so he's okay with my little nightly computer marathons.
As far as your story in particular? Well I was browsing through the AU-Human catagory and between the banner and the synopsis It just sounded good. And you know what? It has been. Kuddos to you!!! As I'm almost caught up on this story, and will have some time between updates, I believe I'll look up the authors section for any more works you have written. I'm sure if they're out there , they are worth the read.
Author's Response: Twific is ridiculously addictive. I started reading it in December, and I was instantly hooked. Started writing it in April as a result of my addiction. ;-)
This is my first fic, but it won't be my last... I don't think. I've got another idea swirling around in my little brain for when I'm done with MIA. So I hope you enjoy this one enough to give the next one a try! :)
Reviewer: rosesmom61 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 20
So, today I was going to spend the day cleaning my house. Instead, I've read 20 chapters all in the last day and a half after finding this on Twilighted. Oh yeah, I was gonna go kayaking, too. My husband and daughter had a great time together-all by thermselves. Great daddy-daughter bonding time, I say.
it's bittersweet that I'm almost caught up because I really need to something done tomorrow.
Author's Response: Y'know, I'm trying really hard to feel guilty for distracting you, but I can't quite do it. ;-)
Reviewer: Vampfan1 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 07:46 PM · On: Chapter 19
Ok. No hating but only b/c you gave the request in the end note. Otherwise...
Will Bella ever get a clue??? I mean ya gotta love her right?, but what a self sabatoging loser attitude you've created for her. I'ts just not fun seeing especially after the lemony goodness of the previous paragraghs. I know, I know creative license and its your story and all. I get that, but please give the girl a little faith will ya? Edward deserves someone with some confidence!!
Author's Response: Give her another couple of chapters. ;-)
Reviewer: Hannah81 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 20
Awwww I just adore this story so much :) A lot of stories that have unresolved sexual tension become dull once the couple get together but you have managed to keep this story alive and interesting.
Possibly some of your new readers came from me?? I rec'd this story in my last Author Note for my story Just A Call Away. Glad it helped, this story deserves all the readers it can get :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) And yes! I've definitely gotten a reader or two thanks to your rec - so thank you very much!! :)
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