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Reviewer: justaskalice (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 23
Survey says alicedances FTW! That's always the way, isn't it. You try to be sexy and seductive and you wind up tripping over a coffee table. I mean... not that that ever happened. Ever. Great update, funny and perfect for them!
Author's Response: I've been striving for realism the whole story, so I couldn't forgo that now, of all times. (And no, of course nothing like that has every happened to anyone. No. **shifty eyes**) So thank you very much! :)
Reviewer: JAYS1 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 23
Love it!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: gxtgal (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 23
Very, Very sweet love scene. Worth the wait (:
Author's Response: Phew! Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: love2read (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 23
OMG That was great!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks so much! :)
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:10 AM · On: Chapter 23
LOVE iT!
Author's Response: I'm so glad, thank you! :)
Reviewer: laylieb (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:04 AM · On: Chapter 23
Beautiful!!! Absolutely beautiful!!!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! :)
Reviewer: slayerjules (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 23
Fianlly. Clusterfuck and all. Great Chapter.
Author's Response: Hope it was worth the build-up! :)
Reviewer: Lightgirl (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 23
YAY! That is all that is necessary for this one-oh and I have a big sappy grin on my face as well! :D
Author's Response: Thank you - I'll definitely take "yay". :) So glad it was grin-inducing for you!
Reviewer: jerseyhalliwell (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:59 AM · On: Chapter 23
omg...
there are no words to describe how awesomet his chapter was :-)
it was sexy, romantic, funny and everything about it was the edward and bella we fell in love with inyour story :-)
now, if you'll excuse me i think i'm going to go and read this all over again!
Author's Response: Phew! Thank you so much! :) I'm glad it worked for you - and I'm so glad it rang true as typically THEM.
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 23
It was perfect! The inperfections just made the night perfect! It is a funny story to tell the grandkids, well maybe not tell the grandkids, but it is definitly ONE flashback that will be good! :)
Loved the chapter! Loved Bella's nervousness and Edwards excitement when he found out that she was trying to seduce him! :)
Well done!
-Kari
Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's funny how boys are nothing if not predictable when it comes to sex. ;-)
Reviewer: michelle_nicole (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 23
this story is awsome...one hundred percent. i love how you've allowed the characters to develop before they even thought about jumping eachothers bones. i thought it was perfect.
Author's Response: I got some flack for holding off on the sexin' for so long, but it was necessary for exactly that reason - I wanted to develop the characters AND their relationship. I'm so glad you like the results! :)
Reviewer: ninachr (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:35 AM · On: Chapter 23
Survey says:AWSOME!She's right,it's imperfectly perfect. ;D
Author's Response: Thank you SO much! :)
Reviewer: piperann_25 (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Chapter 23
Holy shit that was so them from the power to the hand and head then the sex damn, why can't we all find a edward :-( great chapter
Author's Response: Why can't we ALL find an Edward? ;-) Glad you enjoyed the chapter, though!
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 23
LOVED IT!!!! this was worth waiting for!!! but that doesn't mean that I want to wait too long for the next update, tee hee hee
Author's Response: I know, I'm sorry. You have no idea how guilty I felt as the days passed and I wasn't making any headway at all on this damn chapter. I'll do everything in my power not to let this kind of delay happen again, I promise. :) Glad you feel it was worth the wait, though!
Reviewer: FantasyMother (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 23
Oh, that was as perfect as it could possibly be. Cute, funny, passionate, and clearly so dearly in love with each other.
Kudos!
Author's Response: As I've said several times already this morning, thank you! :)
Reviewer: Ceceilia (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 23
Awww, I've been waiting for this. I truly love this story. It always makes me smile.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:52 AM · On: Chapter 23
You have no idea how happy it made me to read about their first night! It just wouldn't have been them if it was all music and rose petals! All the weird shit that happened was perfect! It was just love when they came together (pun intended and unintended) without the need for fanfair. I loved it! And just in case I haven't mentioned it before, or in case you missed it, I'm REALLY not ready for this to come to an end!
There are only a few stories that I find myself rereading even months later...Boycotts and Barflies, Ladders and Frenemies are the only ones so far. I have already reread yours twice and I'm going to have to reread it yet again when it's done! And I have a strong feeling I'll be rereading it again at some point in the future. Just wanted to let you know that your writing is one of the best I've read!
Kat
Author's Response: You have no idea how relieved I am to be getting positive reviews on this chapter! ;-) And y'know, it's funny. When I first planned out this chapter, I'd had it going semi-smoothly, but then I really thought about it, and it didn't fit for them. Not at all. So I think this was a decent compromise, all things considered.
I'm honoured you consider my fic good enough to re-read. Seriously, thank you so much. :)
Reviewer: nicoleihca (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 23
that was brilliant, really well done! i love this bella.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yeah, now that Bella's stopped acting like an idiot, I'm rather enjoying her again, too. :)
Reviewer: barbarito (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 23
PERFECTION!! ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad. Thanks, hon! :)
Reviewer: Laira4 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2009 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 22
Ack! Where are you, and why, oh why, haven't you updated?! :P
Author's Response: Updating this morning, I promise! I just got 23 back from my betas - I need to go through it and clean it up, and I'm going to post before I leave for work. :)
Reviewer: aidan_momma (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 10:12 PM · On: Chapter 6
Loved Alice's "blonde and blonder" comment. Eddie is just so cute. I wanna get drunk and lick his jaw.
Author's Response: Alice is fun to write. I need to put more of her in the story, I think. I don't get to write her enough.
Get in line for the Edward-jaw-licking thing. ;-)
Reviewer: aidan_momma (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 07:33 PM · On: Chapter 4
Loving this story so far. Love Emmett already.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you like Em - he's my boy. I love him to death. :D
Reviewer: RMCC (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:25 PM · On: Chapter 22
*pout*
Update? Pretty please?
Author's Response: Soon, I promise! I was brutally blocked, but I seem to have broken through. Finally. So as long as I can keep the momentum going, I exptec to be able to update Thursday or Friday. :)
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 22
He deserves a Boyfriend of the Year Award or something, just for his performance in the shower alone :) Great update!!
Author's Response: Isn't he a sweetheart? :) Glad you approve of our boy!
Reviewer: bookkeeper (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Chapter 22
You know I think it would be only fitting if there where something like a class reuion or something of that sort that Edward could take Bella to and show the world that they were a couple and give some of the snobs a real blow to the nose. Looking forward to your update.
Author's Response: Oh, don't you worry - Edward will make sure everyone knows. :)
Thanks so much for reading!
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