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Reviewer: crackupmonkey (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 02:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
I like that they are working toward a relationship - They truly love each other.
that was a great way to the prom flash back - and firestarter is an awsome movie, hands down that would be the super power I'd want
Author's Response: They really do, even if they can't put it into words just yet. Thank you very much. Glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: PCullen1974 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:59 PM · On: Chapter 16
This was a really great update! I loved the fact that we finally get some answers to the prom situation. Edward really messed up and he needs to make it up to her. I love how their relationship is going and this is just a great fic. I have to say also, that I love the flashbacks! they are such a good bit of info in the midst of the chapter and give you such insight into what's happening! Loved it!
Author's Response: Oh, he totally messed up, and he knows it now. He's gonna turn himself inside out trying to make it up to her. Glad you're enjoying, though. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! :)
Reviewer: TLRichard05 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 16
I'm not sure whas going on w everyone else but I thoroughly enjoy each chapter you crank out! I felt so bad for Bella in this Chapter..especially when Jasper and Emmett told Edward Alice had seen her crying during prom. It was tough reading that Edward was so swayed by his friends and their negative attitude about Bella. In true Bella form, she will never believe she is good enough for Edward and that breaks my heart..even if this is fiction :) Thanks for posting so quickly!
Author's Response: Sadly, Edward just behaved like a typical dickwad teenage boy. I guess that proves he's not perfect. ;-) Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I really do appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: baxkitty (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:52 PM · On: Chapter 3
I love it! The one that got away. Ample description. I love the way you described Edward. He is so endearing in his insecurity. I absolutely love the story so far.
Reviewer: ksm (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 16
I'm so sorry I didn't send you a review for chapter 15! It was awesome! I loved the detail you put into the dry humping! I could so picture it all in my mind it was heating me up! I'm glad you didn't have them fall into bed together. I want to still see Edward woo Bella before all that happens! I love the sexual tension. Knowing that they're together, but just not having sex yet...love the anticipation! With this chapter...jeeze that flashback had me tearing up! He was such an ass, wasn't he? At least he's aware of what an ass he was...he just can't let Bella know now how he knows the extent of hurt he inflicted on her! He's got work to do and I for one am looking forward to see him at it!
I have nothing bad to say about any of it. Any of the chapters! This is one of my favorite stories and I want to thank you for taking the time to write it and share it with us! And now I'm going to go to the forum and check it out over there!
Kat
Author's Response: Please don't apologize! That really, really wasn't my intention with my question. I just honestly wanted to know if people were losing interest. >.< Anyway! No, these two can't just fall into bed. It's not who they are together. They'll get there, and it'll be explosive, but it'll take them a bit. Yes, he really was a douche about prom, and now that he knows exactly what it did to Bella, he's going to make it up to her in a big, biiiiig way.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: baxkitty (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 2
I love the way you add the flashbacks to the story. It really gives you a good look at the relationship between Bella and Edward and how it came to be where it is. I can't wait to see what happens.
Reviewer: Simonelecochon (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 16
It's nice to finally know what went down with prom. Edward really fucked up. I'm sure I've said it before, but I'll say it again, I really LOVE this story. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Oh, he fucked up big time. But he at least knows it - and really gets what it did to Bella, now. So he's going to make up for it, big time. :)
Reviewer: baxkitty (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:49 PM · On: Chapter 1
I can't wait to see where you are going with this story. Very intriguiging so far. Great wrok!
Reviewer: Cocnnor11857 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
Aw i loved this :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Jojo3508 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:44 PM · On: Chapter 16
The cheesyness in my thought it would be cute to see Edward make up a prom so he could make it up to Bella. :) I know everyone wants to be mad at Edward but he is a HS guy and its what happens. They value their friends opinon over what is right. Well another great chapter :)
Author's Response: I admit, that was a thought - but I agree, it would be too cheesy. Sweet, but cheesy. He'll figure out another way to make it up to her, I promise! :)
Reviewer: asrial (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 16
i love it. I am sorry I didn't review - i was up late last night reading chaps 14 and 15 trying to catch up and couldn't form coherent thoughts then. and when i saw a new one today i was soo excited! :) I am glad they are connecting, and that edward is realizing some of the damage he caused our poor bella. i love how they both admitted they had crushes on eachother. and i could kick him in the balls for doing that to her on prom night. wth? stupid jocks and high school antics :) LOL just because b wasn't blonde and a cheerleader?! ugh (and no, i really don't hold any resentment from high school...that is my story and i am sticking with it...) ;)
Author's Response: No no no, please don't apologize! God, now I just feel crappy, making people feel bad for not reviewing. >.< That's not what I wanted, I just wanted to know if people were losing interest or not. Anyway! Yes, Edward was a douche for the prom thing. A big time douche. Don't you just love teenage boys? ;-)
Thank you so much, though! I'm really glad you're enjoying it so far. :)
Reviewer: lisa89 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
You didn't lose me! :) I'm glad we finally got the full story about prom. Edward was such a douchebag! Holy crap. If I were Bella, he'd get more shit for that.
I'm hoping for a bit o' lemony goodness in the next few chapters. ;) This was a great update, and I can't wait to see what you've got in store for our favorite couple.
Author's Response: He was a total douchebag, and the crappy thing is, he knew it. He just didn't have the balls to do what he knew was right. But he's grown since then, thank god. ;-) Thanks so much for reading!
Reviewer: Jime (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 16
I really loved this update, I am so glad that the whole prom thing is finally out in the open, those two are adorable together. Great work!
Author's Response: So glad you enjoyed! :)
Reviewer: kluthor (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 16
I have not abbandoned you !! I love this story and am glad they are taking things slow..... Just wish there was a new chapter every day that was a million words.... Oh well cant have it all right ??
Author's Response: If I didn't have to work full-time, I'd probably be able to update more often. So if anyone wants to volunteer to support me... No takers? Damn. **sighs** Glad you're enjoying, though! :)
Reviewer: Dulcinea21bella (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 16
Bad stuff??? I have read no bad stuff. I am obsessed with this story and I know that I am not alone. Poor Bella. She endured a lot of heartache because of Edward. I am glad that he is aware of it now... he can keep that in the back of his mind as their relationship progresses. I am so thrilled with the direction of this story. Their relationship is still so new to them and they are both a little aprehensive. Bella is right to be a little reserved when it comes to Edward- his track record isn't exactly stellar. I hope he goes full force in his wooing! Great update!!!
Author's Response: Oh, he's definitely going to keep this in mind. He won't be able to forget it until he feels like he's started to make up for it. Thanks so much for reading! :)
Reviewer: twilove1 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:19 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wow, the prom story. I just want to slap Edward really hard and then capture him in a bone crushing hug and big, wet lip lock. Yeah, that makes total sense. As always, you have the best characters and I love all of their personalities. There was some sadness here, but it moved the story forward in a good way. Damn right he needs to spend the rest of his life making Bella believe in him :)
Author's Response: Actually, it makes total sense - and it's pretty much how Bella feels about him. ;-) So glad you're enjoying, still. Thanks so much!
Reviewer: cyndilu32 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 16
love it....cant wait to see how this plays out....please continue
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm very glad you're enjoying! :)
Reviewer: katydid13 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
Excellent chapter! I'm glad Edward is learning what a jerk he was.
Author's Response: He always knew, but now he KNOWS. And he's gonna feel like crap until he feels he's made it up to her.
Reviewer: Feelybox (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 16
I continue to love this story...although dry humping is a major plus. ;)
I'm excited for the next chapter to see where things are heading for these two lovely people. =) You're doing a fantabulous job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: joy_1 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 16
Are you losing us? Well after finding out Edward is that much of an ass and no one has kicked his... I'm kinda done with this story. Give me some justice and then I will consider it.
Author's Response: Thanks again for the email, Joy. I really did appreciate hearing your thoughts on this. :)
Reviewer: purplesayuri (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 01:00 PM · On: Chapter 16
never fear. .. u didn't lose me :-) I cant wait for the next chapter & I love how this story is shaping up. Love & Lemons ... Yummm
Author's Response: Glad to hear you're still enjoying. Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: dazzled eyes (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 1
That was a really great premise. Flashback was very effective in establishing relationship origin for Edward and Bella.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: branlc (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 16
Good chapter! That was a really shitty thing he did, but when you are in high school you tend to do stupid things because of other people. He really is lucky that he has her now.
Author's Response: Exactly. I don't think there's anyone among us who can honestly say they never did something incredibly stupif in high school. He knows he screwed up, and he's going to try to fix it.
Reviewer: Phoenix Rising (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 16
So we finally find out what happened on prom night. Edward was just a stupid teenage boy, and now he knows better...I certainly hope he does, anyway! I can't wait to find out what else goes on in the 8 days Bella gets to stay with Edward!
xoxo Sarah
Author's Response: Oh yeah, he knows better. And he feels like absolute crap. He's going to work his butt off to make it up to her. :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 3
They couldn't have had a better reunion.
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