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Reviewer: My Friend Alice (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 16
Poor Bella...I know how she feels. Prom is not a happy memory for me either. No date but let friends talk me into going as a 5th wheel. BIG mistake!!! I can't wait to see the ways Edward will make this up to Bell. Post again soon please.
Author's Response: Yeah, the prom things is based on actual events. **grumbles** Luckily it wasn't THAT dramatic, but it still sucked. Senior prom rocked, though. :) Glad you're enjoying!
Reviewer: Lola84 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 16
Wow, I've got a huge lump in my throat now. Even being young and stupid, I can't believe Edward could be so cruel (about the whole prom thing). That is just so awful. :(
Also, I have a random question. Has Bella grown into her looks since high school, or is she exactly the same and now Edward sees her through different eyes? I'm just trying to envision her in my head.
Great chapter! I really hope he can make it all up to her...
Author's Response: He sucked, big time. And, well, everyone tends to grow up and change a bit between high school and college, so she looks pretty much the same (which isn't BAD - she was never ugly or anything, just average-cute), but he's seeing her differently. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! :)
Reviewer: Cedricfan05 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 16
I love the story. it is amazing. Is Edward gonna recreate prom for Bella? because that would be awesome
Author's Response: Thank you so much! And no, he's not going to recreate prom (though I did consider that). He's going to come up with something better. **nods**
Reviewer: zorradesombra (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
I like it. I know I don't review often, but I really do like it. You write a story that I can't stop in the middle of chapters.
Author's Response: Well, thank you very much! :) I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: helena_handbasket (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:59 PM · On: Chapter 16
You didn't lose us, we're just on holiday!
I'm glad Edward faced up to the reality of Bella's hurt and that they got to talk it out.
Author's Response: Ooooh, I'd like to go on holiday... **grand sigh** Hope you went somewhere nice! :) And thanks very much - glad you enjoyed them trying to hash it out.
Reviewer: justafan (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:53 PM · On: Chapter 16
Well I don't know where you lost people in reviews but you haven't lost me. I freakin love this story. I love your Bella and Edward. Although Edward hurt Bella in high school he was a high school boy, not that that gives him an excuse but you know they so stupid things. I will follow this to the end, like I said I freakin love this story.
Author's Response: Exactly - he was a stupid 18-year-old boy. And we all know what they're like. **shudders** So glad you're still enjoying. I really appreciate your continued support! :)
Reviewer: witchykitty (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:45 PM · On: Chapter 16
Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: suzieeq71 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:38 PM · On: Chapter 16
I love this story. I hope they move forward past the issues of the past. they have both matured and I think they will get through it. Hope to see more soon!
Author's Response: They'll work through it, for sure. :) Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review!
Reviewer: wytchwmn75 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:32 PM · On: Chapter 16
He so better be planning to throw a prom for her. And he left a message? What a douchebag. Love how the boys are so protective of her. All in all great chapter.
Author's Response: He'll do better than a prom, I promise. **nods** He was a total douchebage, and he needs to make up for it, in a big way. Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review! :)
Reviewer: readeronly (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:28 PM · On: Chapter 16
im totally loving this story, just read the whole thing and i am hooked!!
can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: lueree (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:22 PM · On: Chapter 16
this story is getting good!! Please update soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: hermione (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 16
my heart can't stop clenching about the prom..i even had a few tears shed!ü love this chapter!ü shed a lot of light and Bella is amazing! i love your story! i've been one of your silent reader for so long and i can't keep my quiet anymore!ü update soon!ü
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you've been enjoying the story.
Reviewer: scarlett0531 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 16
Still lovin' the story! I look forward to the updates! Can't wait to see what Edward does for Bella next.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Louise-Francoise (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:43 PM · On: Chapter 16
That chapter was amazing I have actually got tears streaming down my face right now. Really touching and sweet. The prom flashbacks were incredibly moving and well written. Update soon please!
Author's Response: Awwwww! **HUGS** Don't cry! I'm touched that I was able to make you cry, but it'll be okay, I promise! :) Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review - I really do appreciate it.
Reviewer: MidnightSapphires (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 16
I'm still here... I really enjoy your story... I may not write a review every chapter, but I do try to leave a rating!!
~Sapphire
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really do appreciate your ongoing support. :)
Reviewer: BellaS (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:40 PM · On: Chapter 16
Thanks for finally explaining the prom scenario. Poor Bella! I can't even begin to imagine what that must have been like--and for everyone to know!
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Bella. Big time. :(
Reviewer: eviltigereye (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
damn high school edward being an idiot!! i enjoyed this chapter, and i ope that edward really starts to prove himself more in the coming chapters. i've loved this whole story, so i don't know why people stopped reading and reviewing, it is summer after all.
Author's Response: Oh, he's gonna do everything he can to prove himself, believe you me! ;-) Thank you so much for taking the time to read - and review. I really do appreciate it! :)
Reviewer: kstabb1001 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
My heart just broke for Bella at the prom! I acutally shed a few tears for the pain she must have obviously been in! I LOVED the way Jasper and Emmett stood up for her, eventhough Edward is their friend too! Wow! I loved that Edward finally realized how much he truly effected Bella, even when she is so quick to forgive him.
As for loosing people, I have NO absolutly NO idea where you could have lost people because I love this story and I am constantly checking to see when you update...oh and the dry humping in the last chapter was great! :) I also liked that Bella fell asleep in this chapter so Edward didn't get to find out what she is so great at doing with her mouth...he needs to make a few more ammends before he gets to enjoy the spoils of Bella! :)
Author's Response: Yeah, the prom kinda sucked for poor Bella. Good thing Edward's such a sweetheart now, or he'd have to be flayed alive, I think. ;-) And yeah, Eddie-boy's gonna have to make ammends a bit better before he finds out just what it is that Bella's mouth is so good at.
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review! :)
Reviewer: Megan_redemption9688 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:22 PM · On: Chapter 1
im kinda confused
Author's Response: How can I help clear things up for you? :)
Reviewer: Rinna (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 05:08 PM · On: Chapter 16
Glad for the update!! Edward was quite the coward in high school, but hopefully he'll continue to show just how much he has changed. I can't wait to read how their relationship continues to progress :)
P.S. You didn't lose me....I try to review every chapter :)
Author's Response: Edward was a typical teenage boy in high school, unfortunately. It's one thing to be friends with someone your other friends wouldn't approve of. It's quite another to go on a date with them - regardless of whether it's a friends date or a Date date. Stoopid boys.
Glad you're enjoying, though! And thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I really do appreciate it. :)
Reviewer: baxkitty (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:58 PM · On: Chapter 5
I love this chapter. I know I keep saying that, but I am soooo hooked on this story already. Great work. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Reviewer: Gras (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:53 PM · On: Chapter 10
How unfair. I spent the entire evening reading, waiting for them to finally kiss. Now it's 2am (I made it till chapter 10), I have to get up in five hours and I'll spent the entire day tomorrow wondering about how this story will go on.
So: Awesome story, great style. I've loved reading it so far. Thank you so much for writing and sharing this!:)
Now off to bed ;)
Author's Response: Aw, sorry! Not long to go before you get to lip action, though, I promise! :)
Reviewer: penny phen (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:52 PM · On: Chapter 16
OK so here's your review, but only because you gave up some dry humping...ha!... no srsly tho.....Absolutely love this story, It's one of my favorites. It's in my faves. You rock. hard. hehe. I truly love the way you write, it's quite thorough and detailed. I love bella in this story - i luve the fact that you made her have more of a tougher edge. Edward, though slightly douchebagish in the beginning, is so friggin cute - I'm rooting for him, hoping he becomes that better man.. :)
Please write more, continue to write more goodies so that i can keep them in my faves! I am a devoted fan Alicedances, fo sho!
ps - post fast and I'll review away!! hehe :P
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! :) I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. I'm having so much fun with my Bella and Edward (even if he can be a douche).
Reviewer: JEM1979 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:36 PM · On: Chapter 16
What a dork. You know, I dated a guy in high school that broke up with me just based on what his friends thought. He's totally lucky I took his ass back after he groveled...lol. Seriously though, it's a sucky feeling, because I knew why he was breaking up with me. he had one friend that liked me and told me what was going on. Ahhh, high school. So glad I'm past that stage. ;)
Author's Response: Don't teenage boys just suck? Ugh. >.<
Reviewer: Artie (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 04:33 PM · On: Chapter 16
Just wanted to say I love your story too. Always get excited to see you've updated. It's a shame when people are too slack to review when they should *ducks head and cringes*.
Love this chapter and the prom flashback especially - every girl's nightmare! Edward was a dick. Can't wait to see where you go from here.
Author's Response: Gah, I wasn't trying to make anyone feel bad about not reviewing. I just wanted to know if people were losing interest. >.< Thank you, though. I'm really glad you're enjoying!
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