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Reviewer: This Girl loves to Talk (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
oooohhh edward is alive.. go alice :)
Author's Response: sigh. Alice rocks. really, what would we do without her to keep things even more interesting?
Reviewer: anabanana219 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:19 PM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
I loved it!! I love that Alice still has powers!! I can't wait til they see each other again!! This is just such a fantastic story!!
xx
Author's Response: YAY! Thanks...it'll be soon, the next chapter catches up with the prologue:)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
I'VE GOT TO ADMIT THAT I AM REALLY CONFUSED!!!
Author's Response: why are you confused?? let me know and i can try and clear it up for you! as long as it doesn't spoil future events! :D
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
Loved it, loved it! Oh-my-freakin-goodness! I'm so happy to hear we'll be getting a new chapter soon, the suspense is palpable. So, as we approach the prologue, it seems that we'll find out why Bella is at Jame's place the night Edward whacks him. This is really exciting!
Author's Response: Soon soon! It's coming, just making last minute changes to the chapter. I'll submit for validation today/tomorrow. And, we will almost find out why Bella is in the same aptmt as Edward (from the prologue) but it will end up being the following chapter that will really explain the situation. we do catch up with the prologue in the next chapter though, at least part of it, from Edwards pov.
Thanks for the awesome, enthusistic review:)
Reviewer: subwife (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 10:00 AM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
I loved the chapter! Of course, I'd love to see B & E reunited in the next chapter but I'm a patient person so I can wait :D Next chapter, please!
Author's Response: Next chapter is coming! And I think, as a person who would love to see B and E reunited soon, you will enjoy the next chapter. Or not...because, all may not yet be unicorns and cupcakes. BUT--do let me know what you think, either way!
Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: secamimom (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
Why oh why did you have to end it there? LOL. Loved it! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hummmm...cause I'm evil? Haha. Just kidding...but really, I LOVE cliffhangers. It makes the next chapter so much more exciting:) Next chapter should be going in for validatio tomorrow, so hopefully it'll be up soon after that :D
Reviewer: lorij (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 08:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 Going, Gone
I loved this chapter even though it ended in a cliffhanger. Of course Edward leaves as Bella gets a sort of confirmation that he is alive. I wonder what Jasper will do with all of this?
Author's Response: We will see more of Jasper/Alice in not the next chapter, but the one after that:) Since the story is told only from B and E's pov's, it's a bit moe difficult to get too into J/A's heads, but I love them and want them to carry a big chunk of the story. Hopefully I'm successful (sometimes I get so wraped up in B/E I forget about J/A)!
Anyways, glad you don't want to kill me for the cliffhanger...cause I'm sure there will be more of those soon :D
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
The pain Bella and Edward are going through breaks your heart. I know I'm overzealous, but I can't wait for their reunion. Great chapter! Please update soon.
Author's Response: sigh. i can't wait either. it's comin up! not that it's going to be all cookies and roses--but i do promise excietement! next couple of chapters haven't been behaving, but i'm attempting to sort it out! also, waiting for the school semester to finish and free up more writing time!
thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: JMCullen (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 3 Problem
Loved the chapter. I'm now heading on to the next one. Lol.
Reviewer: mellovesyou (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
lovvve the whole story. i love mysteries! i could possibly give the banner a try... and i do think alice's visions will come into play. they're too good not too!
Author's Response: haha...they really are too good not to, aren't they? good guess!
Reviewer: Angel003 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:53 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
I loved the last two chapters. I'm thinking Bella is going to get caught up in her Professors death once Edward does the hit. I almost didn't catch it in this chapter that he was her teacher. Then Jasper and Alice. My this is a very tangled web you are weaving. Cannot wait to read more.
ps: I've been expeirmenting in the banner making department. I could give it try If you have a vision of what you want in it.
Author's Response: Ah, you DID catch that. Some did and some did not...! I think the only kinds of stories I enjoy writing are ones that I have a hard time getting out of...those tangled, weavy ones :)
I actually did find someone to make a banner, a couple reviewers recommended Anna Cullen, so I'm on her wait-list. But thanks a million for offering, that's so awesome of you:)
Reviewer: Oz_Queen (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
Amazing chapter - Sorry I don't have any experience with banners, I hope someone can help you though. I think Alice's 'gift' probably will end up warning Bella of Edward's... reoccurrance in her life, but I'm betting it has some pretty big loopholes and no one, except for maybe Alice, will understand what it means, haha.
Was Edward working for the FBI, or doing illegal business, when he was in Forks? I'm assuming he's doing/has just done, illegal business?
Loved the chapter, and I'll be waiting impatiently for the next one
Oz_Queen
Author's Response: No worries on the banner...I've got a reputable banner-creater who will help me out. She's suposed to be awesome, so I can't wait to see how it comes out:)
More on what and who exactly Edward was working for in Forks will come out. But it WAS for the FBI, though everything he did/everything he does is top-secret and "underground" and on the verge of shady.
Still working on the next couple to get them working together properly, but I'm trying to hurry!
Reviewer: Shadowdragon13 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2009 06:33 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
Another great chapter. But, I really missed Edward. And, yes, I can positively see Alice's ability helping convince Bella that Edward really is alive. Update soon, please!
Author's Response: I missed Edward too. But, lucky for us, he's got the next chapter and it's gonna be a good one :)
Reviewer: Chellie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:19 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
hmm... interesing question! Alice's power in regards to Edward and Bella? I think it might! Alice had a vision of a girl drowning in a lake that came true; she had a vision about meeting Bella and them becomeing really close friends and that came true; she's had visions about Jasper, and those are coming true. I think that she will have a vision about Edward and Bella also. Although there's no telling what that vision might entail, but I think that she will have one.
And how much do you wanna bet that Dr. G - Bella's professor that's having her write about the school's secret organizations - is the same professore that Edward has to kill?! Hmmm... this is going to get really interesting! :D
Author's Response: Chellie, I like where your mind is at! Haha. Very interesting guesses, you're definitley picking stuff up. Unfortunately, haven't been able to work much on the chapter lately with school, but as you know I'm almost done for the semester so it'll be writing time! Woohoo!
Reviewer: kismit1496 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
so Bella is going to discover something on her own for her assignment - this will put her in danger from Edwards next assignment and that's how they end up seeing each other again!
Author's Response: Very interesting hypothesis! You will deinfitely have to wait to see what happens, but...I'm glad you're thinkin' about it!
Reviewer: snowgood (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:37 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
Poor Bella, she is so sad and heartbroken! I'm guessing that Alice should have seen Edward long ago, so if she has a vision, it's probably going to be pretty vague! I'm loving all the intrigue though, so update soon-please!
Author's Response: Humm...interesting thoughts. So maybe she wouldn't even recogize Edward? Or remember how he could possibly connect with Bella? Maybe Alice has a vision more recently...hummm.
I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I definitley love the intrigue myself and I'm writing it! Ha. Next couple of chapters are giving me a bit of issues, but should work out and be finsihed soon!
Reviewer: GinaCullen (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 04:45 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
I am really loving this story! So excited for the rest! Keep it coming please! :)
Author's Response: I'm a little bit stuck on the next couple chapters...trying to make everything work out just right! But I'm sos toked you're enjoying it! More to come soon :D
Reviewer: x_darla_x (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:35 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
So Bella's Dr. G and Edward's target (James Gleason, I think) are one and the same. Hmmm. And with Bella working closely with the professor, it should be interesting to see how Edward handles seeing her with him. Can't wait for the prologue to come up again. Poor Bella though, thinking she's going crazy again.
I'm really intrigued about what kind of hints Edward dropped to Bella before he died.
Author's Response: Ohhh, observant :) Though have sworn myself to secrecy. No clues! ut interesting theory. Prologue will be making an appearance in the not very distant future. We're just a couple chapters away :)
Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: meimei42 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:26 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
This is a pretty good story, I'm enjoying it. When Bella finally does realize her Edward is alive I imagine there is going to be a whole whirlwind of emotions. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: You're deifnitley right aboiut the whirwind of emotions! Having a bit of issues with the next chapter...but it's coming!
Reviewer: brain candy (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
I love Alice's power! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: YAY! I tried to keep her kinda in canon--at least, as much as a human can be to vampire-Alice :)
Reviewer: sherylb (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 11:08 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
I can't wait for them to get together again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: InLustWithEC (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:58 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
Very nicely done. So sad but I'm actually quite glad Bella hasn't ever given up on Edward. I hate that they are both so alone. :(
I'm glad she has Alice et al...
I had Anne Cullen make my banner for my story. She is amazing. You should PM her and ask her to do you one. Or hop over to the forums, she has a message board there where you can leave a request for her.
Author's Response: They wn't be alone for long...though I do love to write the sad, painful stuff, I really am not a TOTAL masochist :)
Upon your and a couple other reviewers suggestion, I headed over to the forum and talked to Anne Cullen about a banner. She's totally sweet and enthusiastic about it...and of course, has a long waitlist. Guess that's a great sign that she is good at what she does! Anyways, thanks for the suggestion! By the way, your fic is on my "to read list" as soon as my semester is over. Looks very intriguing!
Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 09:40 AM · On: Chapter 4 Alone
Ooooh, good chapter. I'm the worst guesser ever, so I'm not even going to go there, lol.
Author's Response: haha, I hear you. I'm a horrible guesser, too. I usually just try NOT to guess and let the surprise shock the hell out of me, instead :)
Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 3 Problem
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: YAY! Your wait should not be much longer. Chapter 4 is just awaiting validation :)
Reviewer: MrsDazzled (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 07:22 AM · On: Chapter 2 Decoy
I can tell this is going to be an awesome story. I've been thinking for a while how awesome a Jason-Bourne type fanfic would be and even considered writing one myself. Great job!
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